It looks great UnDfind. It looks really good. It looks like a sourcebook now. It defintely has some good points. Some of the things that might not have fit so well into my article now have a new place to reside where they are not quite so jarring. On the other hand, if we flesh everything out the way I think we should we end up with a very large piece. The books section of the shop for instance could be expanded greatly, and be very useful. All of the new tech rules are now in a nice related section, including a heading for new devices. It's starting to look more like a mini campaign setting.
I want what works best. I do like your version you sent. I am just not sure that is what our editors want. They may want the smaller articles.
Emerald Knight have you seen the drafts thus far? Which would you prefer, a series of smallish (5-10 pg) articles, or a mini campaign setting all rolled up nicely for the magazine?