Ok here's what I have after looking over characters. Please recheck my math as it has never been my strong suit.
Jeyanah
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Class: maybe list her as a Sky Dancer 1 [Oracle(wind)/Mobile Fighter] the fighter part isn't listed and martial had me looking at battle as your mystery or come up with some other class name
- 150gp unaccounted for. Did you wish to make your chain shirt masterwork?
- have total weight carried at 53lbs.
- Base Speed should be 35'
- CMB should list +1 under size
- +1 misc modifier not listed under Bluff, actually all positive modifiers aren't listed. +2 Diplomacy, +3 Intimidate, +1 Sense Motive, +1 Perception, +2 Acrobatics
- Feat summary missing; Armor Proficiency (Heavy), Martial Weapon Proficiency-all, and Tower Shield Proficiency
- Feature Summary missing Fighter Bonus Feats
- Need a spot to list using your FC bonus to gain an additional spell
Wesh
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Class: another combo name needed. Hmmm.... Quickblade? Bravossi(Game of Thrones ref), Reason is if you wish to take a level in another class than it is easier to list - Quickblade 3/Bard 2 etc.
- missing one additional language plus native language which everyone will get for free
- have you at 161gp, 8sp, 3 cp leftover - sure you don't want a potion or two?
- alchemist's fire weigh 1lb each
- AC flatfooted is a little messed up, need to move the total over is all
- Should list your two weapon attack under weapons:
Daggers (melee,TWF): +4/+4 = +1 (BAB) + 4 (DEX) + 1 (feat) - 2 (TWF)/ DMG = 1d4+1/1d4 (P or S), CRIT 19-20x2
- Missing one trait (letting everyone start with three)
- add +1 trait bonus to knowledge local
- Alertness not listed under feats (list as DM bonus)
Shayuri's nameless character
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Class: Something with an Osirion flair would work here... Ruin Walker, Truthseeker, Dawn Disciple, etc. and then should be listed as your favored class
- Scholar is not from an approved source - but will allow the feat.
- Jolt is a rare cantrip but will allow it (but you have used up almost all your leeway

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- Still need equipment
Chase
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Class: I like Forester or maybe Woodsman
- Also you need to take either skirmisher or trapper as a ranger archtype to negate the extra spell casting. And since we don't have anyone in the group with trapfinding, trapper may be a good choice here.
- need to pick nationality and then a native language
- arrows, durable is fan created content but since I allowed Shayuri a little leeway I guess I will allow their use.
- overspent by 100gp; starting gp should be 540 (300 ranger + 240 cleric)- Kudos for the masterwork tools idea I like it.
- flatfoot lists armor as +4 should be +3
- campaign trait ideas - monster hunter or Favored Son Belor Hemlock(town sheriff). Outlander missionary works for the cleric angle and might be a good choice as well.
- under spells and domains add a line for Concentration checks: Should be +5 at the moment
DH's unnamed character
- not finished from the look of it
HM