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Damn you, John Q. Mayhem! Damn you to hell! You went and did it!John Q. Mayhem said:Just wanted to pop again in and say that I found Almuric in my local thrift store![]()
Cool! I can't check it out right now, but I'll take a look later!Joshua Dyal said:Still, what'll I get from this thread; maybe four or five hits? What the hey.![]()
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That's one more chapter of Sword and Planet fiction than I've written.Joshua Dyal said:Well, like I said, there's only one chapter so far. Don't get too excited.![]()
Joshua Dyal said:Damn you, John Q. Mayhem! Damn you to hell! You went and did it!
OK, I read the first chapter, and I look forward to reading more! One quick note: it's "airborne" not "air born" when referring to the U.S. military unit (sorry, in my day job I'm an editor, and sometimes, even if I'm not reading something for work, the urge to correct takes over like the Hulk pushing mild-mannered Bruce Banner out of the way. Or something.Joshua Dyal said:Well, like I said, there's only one chapter so far. Don't get too excited.![]()
That's nice to know. Actually, I'd like to find someone with some military experience who could tell me if my movie and Tom Clancy esque hodge-podge of stuff there rings really false or if it's more or less OK. I did mention that was a first draft, right?Warrior Poet said:OK, I read the first chapter, and I look forward to reading more! One quick note: it's "airborne" not "air born" when referring to the U.S. military unit (sorry, in my day job I'm an editor, and sometimes, even if I'm not reading something for work, the urge to correct takes over like the Hulk pushing mild-mannered Bruce Banner out of the way. Or something.).
In the next few days look for some romance and some planet. And a sword or two.Warrior Poet said:No time now, but I'm gonna re-read it again later. What will happen next?!
I know some stuff, but have never been in the military, so my knowledge is definitely not firsthand, and certainly not authoritative.Joshua Dyal said:I'd like to find someone with some military experience who could tell me if my movie and Tom Clancy esque hodge-podge of stuff there rings really false or if it's more or less OK.
Gotta start somewhere, and I'm definitely interested in reading more! I wasn't reading it critically, anyway, although I'm going to read it again, and I'd be happy (isn't everyone, and frequently only too happy?) to offer feedback, if you'd like, or keep my big presumptuous mouth shut, if you'd also like.Joshua Dyal said:I did mention that was a first draft, right?
Woo hoo!Joshua Dyal said:In the next few days look for some romance and some planet. And a sword or two.