I know what you mean Argent and Turjan...
I agree with you about the monster by territory chart- it was something I intended, but there was no room; A lot of info had to be cut (including monster stats) to fit the page count. Still, I realize now that I should have given more info- maybe 95% explanation. That will be fixed. Since this was my first book, I didn't know how much info was too much, and how much was too little. I guess the book ended up being an introduction to the world, like the early Dragonlance materials more than the New Forgotten Realms book.
As for the fey, the PCs in my campaign have just discovered some of why they seem that way. As I've admitted, it wasn't fair not to include this info in the first book, but it is in the second one. My main mistake with the book was the degree of exposition, not with thinking things though... I have the whole thing worked out, and I have from the beginning. I'd go so far as to say that was my problem in the WotC contest, as well, looking at my second round proposal, I can see that I gave far too little info to the judges.
I'm glad you like it Varianor, and if you get around to running it, I'd love to hear how it goes. I'd love to see the review.
I'm trying to make the setting as good as possible, and I'm definitely learning. In my ideal world, I'd probably still be working on the first book, filling in info on the rest of the world, and narrowing the scope a bit. It's been and still is, an invaluable experience. I'm glad I did as much as I have right, but I now have some career lessons to apply to all of my future work.