New spell: Naerls Subtlee Arrival

[Ferret]

A spell I made, no reason. I think it should be balanced, it doesn't do much. best check with the best though.

Naerl’s Subtle Arrival
Enchantment [Mind-Affecting]
Level: Brd 1, Sor/Wiz 1
Components: S
Casting Time: 1 full action
Range: 30ft
Target: Special
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: Will negates (harmless)
Spell Resistance: No

Naerl crafted this spell with the intention of alerting others of his presence at his whim, allowing Naerl to make grand appearances. The spell allows a number of people (whether it me a small town, or a Guild) that are connected in some significant way to be notified as the caster enters that area. The targets cannot pin point the location of the caster they are only aware that they have “arrived”. They can deny the mental message, however the choice is the individuals not the groups.


It has some good reasons if the characer is invisible and wants to notify his friends, or allows other party members to stall opponents, rather then run because they are out numbered.

 

[Merlion]

I'd make it 1st level for sorcerers and wizards, and just define the area or number of targets.

also..

The spell allows a number of people (whether it me a small town, or a Guild) that are connected in some significant way

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[Ferret]

Sorry, I get it changed how does it seem now?

 

[Merlion]

And now looking at the range, I'd say you should replace Target: Special with Area: 30 foot radius burst around the caster

 

[nameless]

I would give it something like Medium range, and have it affect any number of targets within 60 feet of each other. And possibly not require line of effect to the targets. Maybe treat it like a modified Message spell.

 

[Ferret]

I wanted the spell to work for a much larger area then 30ft, but still be low level. A medium range would mean that they would know way before anyone got there. I'll definatly look at message.

If I specify the range then it won't effect entire guuilds etc. Although It has ended up being more for combat (like in the examples I added) I'll think it over.