firstkyne
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Hi, I have composed a new spell for 5e and would like to get some feedback. It is based on thunderous smite. It uses an unusual mechanic in the way it consumes spell slots, but i don't think this should a problem. What you think?
Delayed Thunderous Smite:
1st-level evocation
Level: Paladin 1
Components: V
Casting time: 1 bonus action
Range: Self
Duration: Concentration, up to 1 minute
After casting, any target you hit with a melee weapon is marked to receive a delayed thunderous strike. During the duration of the spell you may use a bonus action to trigger some or all of the delayed thunderous strikes to the marked targets. Each triggered strike consumes 1 level 1 spell slot and deals 2d8 thunder damage to the marked target. The target must also make a Strength saving throw or be pushed 10 feet away from you (or knocked prone, if more than 30 feet away from you).
This spell was intended to be used for a magic weapon.
Delayed Thunderous Smite:
1st-level evocation
Level: Paladin 1
Components: V
Casting time: 1 bonus action
Range: Self
Duration: Concentration, up to 1 minute
After casting, any target you hit with a melee weapon is marked to receive a delayed thunderous strike. During the duration of the spell you may use a bonus action to trigger some or all of the delayed thunderous strikes to the marked targets. Each triggered strike consumes 1 level 1 spell slot and deals 2d8 thunder damage to the marked target. The target must also make a Strength saving throw or be pushed 10 feet away from you (or knocked prone, if more than 30 feet away from you).
This spell was intended to be used for a magic weapon.
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