Suggestion - Skills
I would suggest writing a short chapter that helps explain the benefits of skills. You mention the benefits of some skills (e.g., Running adds 1 to your SPEED stat), but lack a more comprehensive listing.
For example, does taking Unarmed give you +1 die to attack, damage, or both? Also, what stats do each skill listed use for their basis (e.g., Intimidate can use STR and CHA, depending on what you use).
You don't have to go into detail a la the Skills Chapter in the D&D books, though ... that would push this book to well over 300 pages. I leave that option completely up to you.
Another thing: On the original character sheet you have a skill marked "Specialization", but you don't mention anywhere in the rulebook whether this is the bold skill that is affiliated with your race (if not human) or if you choose one and what benefit (if any) that grants you.
I would suggest writing a short chapter that helps explain the benefits of skills. You mention the benefits of some skills (e.g., Running adds 1 to your SPEED stat), but lack a more comprehensive listing.
For example, does taking Unarmed give you +1 die to attack, damage, or both? Also, what stats do each skill listed use for their basis (e.g., Intimidate can use STR and CHA, depending on what you use).
You don't have to go into detail a la the Skills Chapter in the D&D books, though ... that would push this book to well over 300 pages. I leave that option completely up to you.
Another thing: On the original character sheet you have a skill marked "Specialization", but you don't mention anywhere in the rulebook whether this is the bold skill that is affiliated with your race (if not human) or if you choose one and what benefit (if any) that grants you.