"Proofreading" my first encounter

[DumbPaladin]

I have to say, new GM, the things that have been pointed out are all easily fixed and not too earth-shattering. Seems like you did a pretty good job in your first time out. Congrats.

 

[Patryn of Elvenshae]

I have to say, new GM, the things that have been pointed out are all easily fixed and not too earth-shattering. Seems like you did a pretty good job in your first time out. Congrats.

Yes - also this.