I've completed my suggested revisions for the Feats & Weapons sections:
Simon’s Revisions - Quintessential Fighter
FEATS & WEAPONS
Fighter Feats
pg 36 Distract:
The target gets a Will save at DC (10 + Fighter’s CHA bonus) to negate. Once passed the target cannot again be distracted by that Fighter.
At DM’s option a scantily clad/nude female gains a Circumstance bonus of up to +4 on skill check and save DC against appropriate males when using Distract (thus justifying the picture below this Feat!)
pg 38 Fearsome Display:
This is a Standard action. The target receives a Will save to negate at DC 10 + Fighter’s Intimidate skill.
pg 38 Improved Weapon Focus:
Requires Weapon Specialisation in the chosen weapon.
pg 39 Off-Hand Weapon Expert:
This Feat is disallowed.
pg 39 Reckless Attack:
The maximum bonus/penalty is +5/-5.
pg 41 Two-Handed Power Strike:
This Feat is disallowed.
Tools of the Trade - Weapons
Notes pgs 42-45:
Iron-Breaker: Requires STR 13+.
Pike: Using 20’ reach pike requires STR 13+. A 15’ reach pike requires STR 11+.
Pilum: Attack to disable shield is a Ranged Touch attack, - 4 vs small shields. -8 vs bucklers.
Siege Crossbow: This weapon reduces the target’s Armour/Shield or Natural Armour bonus by up to -10. It takes 1 minute to set up.
Stats pg 46:
Aclis: This is an Exotic weapon when thrown.
Flamberge: Exotic Weapon.
Flametongue: Exotic Weapon.
For the Fighting Styles, I suggest requiring 1 Feat per Level in each Style, and drop the Wis requirement to Wisdom 10+ Feat level (15 for level 5).
Simon’s Revisions - Quintessential Fighter
FEATS & WEAPONS
Fighter Feats
pg 36 Distract:
The target gets a Will save at DC (10 + Fighter’s CHA bonus) to negate. Once passed the target cannot again be distracted by that Fighter.
At DM’s option a scantily clad/nude female gains a Circumstance bonus of up to +4 on skill check and save DC against appropriate males when using Distract (thus justifying the picture below this Feat!)
pg 38 Fearsome Display:
This is a Standard action. The target receives a Will save to negate at DC 10 + Fighter’s Intimidate skill.
pg 38 Improved Weapon Focus:
Requires Weapon Specialisation in the chosen weapon.
pg 39 Off-Hand Weapon Expert:
This Feat is disallowed.
pg 39 Reckless Attack:
The maximum bonus/penalty is +5/-5.
pg 41 Two-Handed Power Strike:
This Feat is disallowed.
Tools of the Trade - Weapons
Notes pgs 42-45:
Iron-Breaker: Requires STR 13+.
Pike: Using 20’ reach pike requires STR 13+. A 15’ reach pike requires STR 11+.
Pilum: Attack to disable shield is a Ranged Touch attack, - 4 vs small shields. -8 vs bucklers.
Siege Crossbow: This weapon reduces the target’s Armour/Shield or Natural Armour bonus by up to -10. It takes 1 minute to set up.
Stats pg 46:
Aclis: This is an Exotic weapon when thrown.
Flamberge: Exotic Weapon.
Flametongue: Exotic Weapon.
For the Fighting Styles, I suggest requiring 1 Feat per Level in each Style, and drop the Wis requirement to Wisdom 10+ Feat level (15 for level 5).
