Here is my revised background and slightly adjusted character sheet.
1. Archetype: Cyran Noble
2. Backstory of meeting the group: My mother always wanted the best for me, and throughout my childhood I led a charmed life, but when my father fell in battle 10 years ago, my world was changed. I've spent every moment in the Grand Library studying the tactics of the enemies that brought him down, and every dream I have is a tale of my vengeance. I will make Cyre the one true superpower. This is my destiny. Until then, I will train with the companions I have been assigned, and through diplomacy (or if necessary, force of arms), I will teach the nations of Khorvaire to love, respect, and fear the might of the kingdom of Cyre. I grew up with Prince Oargev, but while he was studying music and arcana, I was studying swords, shields, and battle tactics. We've always been rivals in that aspect, like two halves of the same coin. I'm indeed envious of his station in life, but I respect him for his valuable force of personality. When his time comes, he will make a good king, and I believe I will be the one to deliver him unto the throne.
3. Character description: Only 19 years old, Lieutenant Alaric ir'Drake is a tall young man with fair skin. Alaric constantly gives off an air of superiority and confidence, which often borders on arrogance. However, the Lieutenant is indeed an extremely driven boy. Since childhood, he has trained in the ways of the sword and the art of battle. He is driven to deliver the world unto the kingdom of Cyre, and Alaric indeed believes that it is his destiny to usher Cyre into a golden age of prosperity.
4. Character sheet:
[sblock]Lieutenant Alaric ir'Drake, level 1
Human Warlord
Commanding Presence: Tactical Presence
Background: Ancestral Holdings (+2 to History)
FINAL ABILITY SCORES
Str 18, Con 12, Dex 10, Int 16, Wis 10, Cha 10.
STARTING ABILITY SCORES
Str 16, Con 12, Dex 10, Int 16, Wis 10, Cha 10.
AC: 17 (13 + 3 hide + 1 light shield) Fort: 16 Reflex: 15 Will: 12
HP: 24 Surges: 8 Surge Value: 6
TRAINED SKILLS
Athletics +9, History +11, Diplomacy +5, Intimidate +5, Heal +5
UNTRAINED SKILLS
Acrobatics -1, Arcana +3, Bluff +0, Dungeoneering +0, Endurance +0, Insight +0, Nature +0, Perception +0, Religion +3, Stealth -1, Streetwise +0, Thievery -1
FEATS
Human: Weapon Expertise: Heavy Blades
Level 1: Saving Inspiration
POWERS
Warlord encounter: Inspiring Word
Warlod at-will (human): Viper's Strike
Warlord at-will 1: Wolf Pack Tactics
Warlord at-will 1: Commander's Strike
Warlord encounter 1: Warlord's Favor
Warlord daily 1: Lead The Attack
ITEMS
Longsword, light shield, hide armor, ID papers w/ portrait, travelling papers, standard adventurer's kit[/sblock]
5. Magic Items:
Lvl 2 Pinning Longsword +1
Lvl 3 Armor of Cleansing - Hide +1
Lvl 4 Deathstalker Longsword +1
Lvl 5 Girdle of The Oxen
Lvl 6 Venom Gloves
Lvl 7 Rushing Cleats
Lvl 8 Flanking Longsword +2
Lvl 9 Armor of Durability - Hide +2
Lvl 10 Cape of The Mountebank +2
6. Paragon Path: Dujun of Erathis