(Shark World) Wuha Islands
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the Jester
Legend
Wow, you've done a lot of good work here, las!
One thing I would suggest, though, is not lumping it all into one post at the start- it gets hard to read it all at once. I'd suggest splitting it into sections- one post on culture, one on military structures, one on alchemy, etc. It's just easier to read (for me, at least).
On to specific stuff I have comments on- I, too, wonder what the various mounts are. Maybe the sea riders ride on dolphins or hippocampi? The skyriders on pegasi or griffons?
The new spells you detailed- I don't think 0-level spells should be able to inflict damage personally, at least not more than one point at touch range, so you might make it subdual damage on Zap. (I do like the idea, though!) And I think Fire Dart should do less damage too, since Burning Hands has a much shorter range.
On second thought, B Hands doesn't take an attack roll and is area of effect... hmmm... lemme think that one over a little.
Or maybe a save (Ref half)? Then again, there's that touch attack... hmmm....
Need to mull on that one!
Also, as a suggestion, how about detailing what folks eat there? I've always found that that adds a great deal to the believability of a culture or country.
Good work- and lots of it!
One thing I would suggest, though, is not lumping it all into one post at the start- it gets hard to read it all at once. I'd suggest splitting it into sections- one post on culture, one on military structures, one on alchemy, etc. It's just easier to read (for me, at least).
On to specific stuff I have comments on- I, too, wonder what the various mounts are. Maybe the sea riders ride on dolphins or hippocampi? The skyriders on pegasi or griffons?
The new spells you detailed- I don't think 0-level spells should be able to inflict damage personally, at least not more than one point at touch range, so you might make it subdual damage on Zap. (I do like the idea, though!) And I think Fire Dart should do less damage too, since Burning Hands has a much shorter range.
On second thought, B Hands doesn't take an attack roll and is area of effect... hmmm... lemme think that one over a little.
Or maybe a save (Ref half)? Then again, there's that touch attack... hmmm....
Need to mull on that one!
Also, as a suggestion, how about detailing what folks eat there? I've always found that that adds a great deal to the believability of a culture or country.
Good work- and lots of it!
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the Jester
Legend
Sadly, all my spare campaign-creation time is spent working on my campaign, but maybe if the inspiration strikes I'll throw something in there...
On the spells they have ben all over the wizards bord and here so they have ben crit to death allredy so they work. At least you didn't say un it to d6 and give a reflex save that would be a diffent spell Hmmm.
Any info you will be help foll.
Ill read your story hour in a little while.
Any info you will be help foll.
Ill read your story hour in a little while.
the Jester
Legend
Hey las!
I'm glad you liked some of my feats, and I really dig the ones you added that play off them.
Cool stuff, man!
I'm glad you liked some of my feats, and I really dig the ones you added that play off them.
Cool stuff, man!
Heres the one of the dragons that live in wuha.
http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=24124
http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=24124
