Corlon said:you have to watch out for spells, especially in the 3rd party publishers (not excusing all the WoTC mistakes). They can generally be put together without much thought, or be abused very easily.
DreamChaser said:This spell needs only one thing to make it balanced: Fortutude half.
Wulf Ratbane said:Spells should generally either require an attack roll, or allow a save-- it's rarely both. (There are exceptions, but they are outliers.)