Jeremy
Explorer
Let's see, in order...
20th level characters are generally discouraged as they rarely get the chance to play and 760,000 gp in gear makes them inflated examples. 16th is generally a better comparison.
Gauntlets of Ogre Power are an enhancement bonus and do not stack with Belts of Giant Strength or the Headband of Perfect Excellence or the Potion of Bull's Strength.
Dragon Disciple HD increases only increase dragon disciple hit dice, additionally they do not work retroactively.
Rage grants 2 hp per HD for only 40 more hp, not 100.
Dragon Disciple's final ability does not grant an additional +8 to strength. You get what's listed in the chart and that's it according to the Sage's rotating ruling o' the month.
Haste does not stack with speed.
These are simple to correct though.
Also, I might add, as this doesn't seem to be presented as a smackdown but more of a character build, I might point out that this character's will save is horrendous and as such he poses a considerable threat to his party as will saves affect his control of his frenzy. It also means he's susceptible to charms, suggestions, and domination, not to mention fear, and many other will save based attacks. Some of that money would have been better spent pumping wisdom or saves. Though again, having 760,000 gp to throw a round unbalances the example.
Try toning it down to 16th level, reassessing gear for non-stackable items, and editing the post to reflect your changes. It'll be better received.
20th level characters are generally discouraged as they rarely get the chance to play and 760,000 gp in gear makes them inflated examples. 16th is generally a better comparison.
Gauntlets of Ogre Power are an enhancement bonus and do not stack with Belts of Giant Strength or the Headband of Perfect Excellence or the Potion of Bull's Strength.
Dragon Disciple HD increases only increase dragon disciple hit dice, additionally they do not work retroactively.
Rage grants 2 hp per HD for only 40 more hp, not 100.
Dragon Disciple's final ability does not grant an additional +8 to strength. You get what's listed in the chart and that's it according to the Sage's rotating ruling o' the month.
Haste does not stack with speed.
These are simple to correct though.
Also, I might add, as this doesn't seem to be presented as a smackdown but more of a character build, I might point out that this character's will save is horrendous and as such he poses a considerable threat to his party as will saves affect his control of his frenzy. It also means he's susceptible to charms, suggestions, and domination, not to mention fear, and many other will save based attacks. Some of that money would have been better spent pumping wisdom or saves. Though again, having 760,000 gp to throw a round unbalances the example.
Try toning it down to 16th level, reassessing gear for non-stackable items, and editing the post to reflect your changes. It'll be better received.
