Take 3 : Is this better?
(BTW, what's Matt thinking about the character, is it acceptable assuming I get the kinks worked out, or are you thinking of another character for the 8th spot?
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OPTIC, aka James Carson.
PL 11
Abilities:
STR 16 (+3)
DEX 16 (+3)
CON 16 (+3)
INT 18 (+4)
WIS 16 (+3)
CHA 16 (+3)
Combat : Defense + 8; Attack: +6 Eye Laser(+10 W/Visor), +6 Martial Arts(+ 10 W/Gloves); Initiative: +11
Saves: Toughness + 7 (+ 14 in suit); Fort + 8; Reflex + 8; Will + 8
Skills: Bluff(+10/7), Computers(+15/11), Diplomacy(+10/7), Disguise(+13/0), Gather Information(+13/10), Notice(+15/12), Profession:Management(+8/5) Sense motive(+15/12), Knowledges(+4/0)
*Situational: +4 bluff/Diplomacy (Attractive); Diplomacy Check for favours(Connected), Gather Info in 1 minute(Contacts), Gather Info auto-check first time meeting new group/individual(Well Informed); +4 Remembering (Eidetic Memory); All skills considered Trained (Jack of All Trades)
Feats: Ambidexterity, Assessment, Attractive, BenefitX2 (Status&Wealth - Vice President of Op-Tec), Connected, Contacts, Dodge FocusX8, Eidetic Memory, Inspire, Jack of All Trades, Luck, Master Plan, Precise ShotX2, Uncanny DodgeX2(Sight, Sound), Well Informed.
(Wealth Bonus = 14)
Powers:
Blast 8 (21 pts) - Eye lasers, AccurateX3, Alternate Power: Heat Vision(heat damage blast), Alternate Power: Datalink(Perception, Machine control)
Strike 5 (8 pts) - Martial Arts, AccurateX3
Protection 4 (4 pts)
Device 5 (Hard to take away, 20 pts) - High-tech Supersuit/Power Gloves :
-X- Morph 2 (4 pts) - Any Human (+10 disguise)
-X- Protection 7 (7 pts)
-X- Feats(5 pt): Quick ChangeX2(Suit stored in belt, expands and covers), Improved InitiativeX2, Evasion
-X- Enhanced Strike 4 (7 pts), Mighty, AccurateX2
Device 4 (Disarmable, 12 pts) - Visor:
-X- Super Senses 10 (10 pts) - True Sight.
-X- Enhanced Blast 4 (10 pts), AccurateX2
Super Senses 12 (8 pts) - Analytical(Sight), Radius(Sight), Extended(sight), Darkvision(noticeable eye glow), microscopic vision(DNA, Distracting, noticeable eye glow), X-ray Vision(not lead, Distracting)
Speed 1 (1 pt) - 10mph speed.
Quickness 6 (2 pts) Flaw: Planning Only(Master Plan).
Drawbacks: Weak Point (1), Vulnerable: Sonic damage [Moderate Intensity, Common frequency](4 pts)
Trade-offs: -3 Def/+3 Tough, -1 Atk/+1 Save DC
COST: Abilities 38 + Skills 16(64 ranks) + Feats 25 + Powers 76 + Saves 15 -5 drawbacks = 165/165
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[sblock=Optic Fluff]
The 28 year old James Carson is near the peak of human perfection.. Strong, fast, healthy, smart, charming. He's a well-known, respected, and admired businessman with contacts everywhere, The vice president of Op-Tec, a company that specializes in fiber-optics and computer technology, specifically with regards to Military contracts. He has been involved in numerous athletic competitions. He's also not entirely Human... James Carson is, in his off-time, the mutant super-hero known as Optic.
Optic has been fighting crime in one form or another for over a decade. He's a 2nd generation mutant and super hero, son of Bendy-Girl(Deceased) and a computer technician named William Carson(Retired Businessman, founder of Op-Tec). With his current status and contacts in the company his father built, he was able to gain access to an experimental super-suit of very light-weight material, and a custom-made visor which enhances his allready impressive array of eye powers. For the past several years, he's been splitting his time between helping to run the company alongside his older sister (Claren, no known mutation) and using a combination of his skills, mutant super powers, and enhanced technology to fight terrorists, super-villains, and general all-around bad guys. Recently he has become rather depressed by the apparent abundance of badguys and lack of organization amongst the few super-heroes that are known. There has to be some way of contacting the other Heroes, but he's been unable to do so yet. There's something he isn't just seeing, and for someone who sees as much as James, that is the most frustrating thing of them all... This was the mood he was in when he got home from a late night, tossing his visor on the table in front of him, he lay on the couch and absently turned on the TV, willing to let the ambient noise send him off to sleep... But the TV seemed to be mirroring his thoughts, and as he sat up after changing the channel several times, trying to find a station that WASN'T giving him bad news, he received the message. He didn't bother writing down the license plate, his memory had always been good... "photographic" he always liked joking, and he pictured the van in his mind, exactly as he knew it would look. He'd recognize it. And he'd be there. This was exactly what James Carson.. no, what OPTIC, was born for.
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