The Doomed Bastards: Reckoning (story complete)

So far, you guys are thinking much along the lines I was when I wrote this battle. Glad to see that things are making sense, for the most part.

And we've hit over eight thousand views for this thread already... much thanks to all my readers! :D

Today's post is testament to the notion that things always get worse before they get better (assuming that they ever do, that is...).

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Chapter 57

BLOOD AND VIOLENCE


Talen paled as the demon spread its wings and leapt at him. He’d fought men and beasts, but this was beyond anything he had ever encountered. Still, he was a soldier and a man, and he lifted his sword, desperate to sell his life for a dear price.

A long, sinuous form erupted out of the corridor, darting between the open doors into the fray. Its head slammed into the demon, driving it back, piercing it with its mandibles. It was another huge centipede, and it distracted the demon for the few precious seconds that Talen need to get clear.

He looked up and saw an evil cleric standing in the doorway, and nearly rushed him before realizing it was Varo. Damn it, what’s wrong with me? he thought. His thoughts had been in a crazy jumble since they’d come to this place, and his skin felt as though a slick of oil was clinging to it, a foulness that no soap could scrub free.

There was no time for contemplation; several clerics had seen him break away, and were charging toward him even as he turned back toward the battle. He met the first in a high parry which he turned into a descending cut that tore a deep gash in the man’s shoulder; the cleric screamed and fell back.

The second, however, was far more adept, and as his morningstar slammed into his armored torso he felt a cold surge of dread seep into his body.

“Yes, soldier of Light,” the cleric said, taunting him. “You feel your doom.”

Dar met his surge of enemies with a wild cry, swinging his club with abandon. The acolyte he struck first crumpled with a rib stuck through a lung, but the second caught his follow-through easily on his shield, suggesting a more experienced combatant. Dar in turn took a hit to his side that partially penetrated his armor, but lacking Talen’s purity of purpose and depth of commitment, he did not suffer the same cold surge of power from the priest’s unholy morningstar. But the mundane efficacy of the nasty weapon was bad enough, and as two more of the senior priests turned from the dissolving corpse of the second summoned ape to join in the battle against him, he knew that this was going to get really bloody, real fast.

“Stand fast,” a soft voice said behind him. He felt a soft touch brush his neck, followed by a surge of positive energy that banished all doubts, along with the pain of his wounds and the lingering exhaustion of battle.

“Much better,” he said, grinning as he faced the evil cleric. An acolyte tried to rush his flank, but he almost casually poked the head of his club into the young man’s face, dropping him like a sack of grain. “Now let’s get down to business.”

“Take the cleric!” the enemy priest said, gesturing for his companions to spread out and come at their foes from the flanks. “The True God will claim your soul, warrior, but your flesh... that belongs to us.”

“Well, I hope I at least you buy me dinner first,” Dar said, seeing through a feint before meeting the cleric’s true attack with a powerful swing of his club. The priest staggered back, clutching his side.

“Hurts, don’t it?” Dar said. But he had to concentrate on the priest’s pals, who were trying to get around him to Allera. He felt another cold chill, and knew that another priest was trying to do something nasty to him. “No... you... don’t...” he said, his teeth chattering, but he managed to somehow marshal the will to resist the spiritual assault.

And just in time, as the flanking clerics charged in to attack.

Varo had remained near the doors, observing the battle for the best way to shape events. His gaze was drawn to the evil cleric atop the platform, who had not moved since the battle begun. He was almost certainly the source of the blight that had exploded in the room in the first seconds of the battle. His current idleness didn’t mean that he wasn’t contributing to the battle; Varo knew that he was likely the most dangerous foe in the room. But at the moment, out of reach.

He didn’t bother trying to hold any of the clerics; with their strong wills the spell was likely futile. A cleric saw him and ran forward, weapon raised, but he hesitated when he saw who it was.

“Help me, brother,” Varo said, staggering forward.

The cleric—barely past his teens, Varo saw—ran forward to support him. As he grabbed onto Varo’s apparently mangled body, their eyes met. Too late, he saw his mistake. Too late to do anything but scream as Varo unleashed an inflict wounds spell into him.

The acolyte stiffened, and collapsed.

Stepping over the body, Varo regarded the demon, which was going to be a real problem. Thus far the centipede had withstood its attacks, but it was clearly getting the worst of the exchange between them.

Dar delivered a powerful two-handed blow that drove one of the clerics several steps back, but he couldn’t shift in time to stop the one behind him from touching him in the back, pouring an inflict serious wounds into him. He yelled in pain, swinging the club around to punish his attacker, but the cleric caught the blow on his shield.

“Hurts, doesn’t it?” the first priest, now recovered and coming in again, taunted him.

Dar glanced back at Allera, but saw that the healer was busy. The last priest, the one that had been so terribly mutilated, had slipped all the way around the melee to the far wall, and had come up on Allera from behind. She tried to keep him at bay with her spear, but apparently the man had healed himself or been healed, for he no longer moved as though he was on death’s door. He had no weapon, but Dar knew only too well that the priests of Orcus needed none.

But there was nothing he could do to help her, as all three of his foes came at him again. In fact, if he couldn’t manage to stay alive for the next few seconds, her predicament was going to get a lot worse off very fast.

Talen faced his foe with a new respect for the cleric’s deadly, evil weapon. The man was good with it, and Talen was forced to fight defensively, taking pounding impacts on his shield, barely able to adjust for each new assault, let alone get in an effective counter. The cleric’s strength was amazing, the blows landing with almost as much force as those he’d taken from the ogres before. Within a few seconds his left arm was numb from the impacts to the mithral shield.

“Your death is inevitable, servant of Good,” the evil cleric hissed, lifting his weapon to strike again.

“For the honor of Camar!” Talen shouted back, launching a sudden counterattack. The cleric brought down his weapon, but Talen was already sliding past, his blade smashing into the cleric’s armored side. The chainmail under his robes held against the blow, but as Talen moved past him, he reversed the sword and thrust backward. The keen elvish steel drove deep into the cleric’s side, and he staggered back, favoring the critical wound.

Dar’s opponents, seeing that their unholy weapons were of limited effect against him, moved in to deliver inflict wounds spells by touch. Dar made them pay, lashing out with his club in powerful blows that crushed bones and mangled organs. But he took another devasating inflict serious wounds, and he was starting to feel that he was in bad trouble.

They could see it, too, and even though all three looked only a few shades short of death themselves, they seemed to grow only more confident the more wounded they became.

Dar felt a presence behind him, and tensed. It it was Allera, then well and good, but if it was the evil priest... The clerics did not give him a chance to shift his attention away for even an instant, coming at him in a semi-coordinated rush.

Then the healing was surging into him. He lashed out with his club, taking down the first cleric with a powerful smash the sundered his breastbone. Without hesitation he swept the club around with his backswing, impacting the second cleric on the side of the head an inch above his ear. A loud crack echoed through the chamber, and he too went down in a heap.

The last cleric let out a cry of rage, and extended his hands like claws toward Dar’s face. Dar calmly kicked him in the gut, knocking the air from his body in an explosive gasp, driving him to the ground. The club came down in a heartbeat, and snapped the evil priest’s neck.

A scream from behind him drew him around. He saw Allera crumple, blood pouring from her mouth, nostrils, and ears. She had paid a steep price for helping Dar. The naked cleric that had blasted her with an inflict serious wounds stood over her, blood covering his fingers. He looked at Dar and laughed maniacally, tangling his fingers in the fallen healer’s hair, and yanking her head up. She did not stir at the rough treatment.

“Get your filthy hands off her,” the fighter growled. He didn’t even bother to swing his club, merely driving it forward into the man like a battering ram. The cleric’s mad laughter continued even as the club crushed his arm and smashed into his torso, sundering bones like a child snapping twigs. The cleric fell to the ground, still faintly wheezing with terrible mirth.

“Allera,” Dar said. “Allera!” He started to kneel beside her, but a loud roar drew his attention back up before he could see if she was still breathing. He looked up to see the demon holding Varo in its claws. Wounds covered the foul creature’s body; apparently Varo had gotten in a few licks. But the cleric’s arms had been shredded by the demon’s claws, and one side of his face was almost torn fully away by the vrock’s hooked beak. His left eye was a ruined, bloody mess in its socket, but his mouth continued to spit bloody syllables, and he managed to lift one savaged arm enough to touch the demon’s elbow, unleashing another inflict spell into it. A few lingering mirror images hovered around it, giving the entire scene a blurred effect.

“Damn it, nothing’s ever easy,” Dar said, lifting his club and running toward the demon with a fierce yell.

The demon turned toward him. Almost casually tossing the crippled cleric away, it let out a piercing shriek that almost overloaded his senses. Somehow, through that terrible noise, Dar kept on running. For a moment his vision blurred, but the demon was impossible to miss, and he unleashed a powerful two-handed swing with everything he had left behind it.

The head of the club impacted the demon, but it passed right through its body and kept going. The mirror image vanished, revealing the true form of the demon a half-step away.

The demon roared and smashed a clawed fist into the fighter’s face. Dar staggered and fell to one knee, the club falling from his hand and rolling to a stop a few paces away.
 

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Chapter 58

RAGE AND VALOR


The demon stood triumphant over its battered adversaries, seemingly unstoppable.

The last cleric still standing on the battlefield—save for the high priest still atop the pedestal in the center of the room—came at Talen even as Dar charged toward his doom. Talen had seen Allera and Varo go down, and knew that the demon would make short work of the mercenary. Not even trying to avoid the cleric’s attack, which caromed hard into his side, he ran past the man, slashing out low with his sword. The blow hit the cleric’s right knee with precision, all but tearing through the joint. The cleric screamed and fell, clutching at the limb, now held to his body by only a few strips of flesh and ligament. Talen was already charging at the demon, but the momentary delay meant that he was too late to stop it from delivering the bone-jarring hit that sent the mercenary to his knees.

Talen yelled in defiance and stabbed at the demon’s leathery back. His sword cut through empty air, sundering another mirror image. The captain’s heart sank as the demon, belatedly noticing his presence, swiveled its monstrous head almost full around, fixing that horrible, malevolent stare upon him.

He was a dead man, he knew.

Dar slid Valor from its sheath. The cold tingle of life seeping from his body was almost too much for him, battered and broken as he was. But something, whether instinct, or some other mysterious agency, took over, and almost before he realized what he was doing, he was driving the axiomatic blade into the demon’s gut.

The vrock screamed, the sound a thousand times worse than any sound any of them had heard before in their lives. The demon beat its wings furiously—almost knocking down Talen—and it tore itself off the blade, leaving its entrails behind it in a trail. The demon fixed a furious look upon the mercenary...

...and disappeared.

Valor fell to the ground, and as it did, Dar felt some clarity cut through the fog that had fallen over his senses. He felt like he’d been wrung out, and every muscle in his body seemed to have its own distinctive and particular tingle of pain. He felt most like falling down in a nice heap and sleeping for the next decade or so, but it was not to be, as Talen turned to the center of the room and pointed.

“The head cleric—he’s coming!”

Zehn had watched the battle unfold with a dispassionate sense of separation; it was as if his consciousness was outside of him, watching his scene through the eyes of his soldiers. He had not been idle; if anything, his magic had unleashed powerful spell-surges through the melee that should have left their foes bewildered and weakened. But if anything, the foe seemed to grow stronger as the melee progressed, with the lesser clerics battered into unconsciousness or death. He felt a tingle on the third finger of his right hand, and knew that the Sphere of Souls was drinking deeply of the carnage being wrought here. The underpriests, aware perhaps that their sacrifice was aiding the cause of their dark Master, fought with desperate ferocity.

But they were losing, nevertheless. Even Gudmund’s fresh levies, which had included the hulking bruiser-priest Acheros, had been as wheat to the farmer’s scythe. The vrock should have been an end to it, but to Zehn’s surprise, the warriors had driven it off.

So be it. He could still feel the power of the True God pounding in his skull like the beating of a great eternal drum. He was not a warrior, but death was his to use as a weapon, and he would bring these intruders low himself.

He started down the stairs, careful of where he put his feet. In his usual robes, ascending the steep staircases was tricky. In plate armor, it was dangerous. His earlier weakness had passed, and in fact he felt nothing from his body at all. It was as if his armored body was that of a golem, subject to the strength of his Will.

The warriors saw him, but instead of turning to face him, tried to help their fallen companions. It would be of no avail; from the look of them, the power of death granted by his patron would make short work of the fighters, and then the others would be his to offer to the glory of the True God.

He paused, however, as he passed the captive bound to the stairs. Something—he was not sure what—caused him to hesitate. He was not afraid of death, and despite his calm confidence, he knew that his foes might somehow overcome him. But the creature here could not be allowed to fall into the hands of those opposed to the True God.

The prisoner dangled from the ropes, seemingly insensate to his surroundings. But as Zehn lifted his mace, ready to finish the wretch, the tortured creature lifted his head, and fixed his eyes upon the dread cleric.

The cleric of Orcus had participated in rituals that would have driven most minds over the brink of insanity. He had calmly suffered violations of his body and soul, and risen out of them with more power. But in that stare, Zehn saw something that utterly unnerved him.

His reaction was not much, a mere step back before he recovered enough to know that he had been wrong before, that this prisoner must die, that he should have killed him the moment that the creature had fallen into his hands.

But as he shifted his weight, his boot slipped on the step.

Zehn tried to recover, but the weight of his armor kept him from regaining his balance. He did not cry out as he started to fall, invoking the power of his ring. That power, bound to the potency of the True God on this plane, was connected to the Sphere of Souls, and it had the ability to transport him magically to any of the other temples within Rappan Athuk.

Nothing happened.

Zehn spread his arms wide, whispering a prayer to Orcus even as he plummeted into the pit of burning lava.

“By the gods,” Talen whispered, watching as the enemy cleric fell to his doom. The captain looked down at the limp form of Licinius Varo. The cleric’s body had been mangled, and yet somehow clung tenaciously to life. Talen saw that hundreds of tiny, fibrous growths had sprouted from his arms, neck, and the good side of his face, flitting as his breath rattled from his cracked and bloody lips.

Talen had seen death numerous times, but somehow, this was... unnatural, terribly worse than the savagery wrought by sword and arrow by man upon man.

“He’s dying!” he yelled to Dar. “That demon... it did something to him... it’s killing him!”

Dar was crouched over the motionless form of Allera. He splashed some water over her face, wiping away the blood with a clean piece of her cloak. “Come on, princess... wake up!” he whispered harshly. “She needs healing!” he yelled in response to Talen.

“We all had healing potions, but used them all,” he said. “Look in her bag!”

Dar was already tearing through her satchel, dropping handfuls of bandages, herbal poultices, and tiny jars of powder here and there. Finally, at the bottom of the container, he found a vial half-full of blue liquid.

“What if it’s a poison or something?” Dar said.

“Then she wouldn’t have it... Your friend’s not going to last much longer, mercenary.”

Ripping off the cork of the vial with his teeth, he lifted Allera’s head gently, and poured the liquid directly down her throat. She didn’t cough, or even stir, and for a moment he felt a cold feeling press in his chest.

Then she opened her eyes.

“What... what happened...”

“No time,” Dar said. “Heal yourself.”

She looked left and right, but did not otherwise move. “Others?”

“Talen’s all right, but Varo’s not so good. Heal yourself first, and then you can help him.”

“No,” she said, each word clearly a significant effort on her part. “My powers are nearly depleted. Take me over to him.”

Her words brooked no argument, so he lifted her—gods, she was light—and took her over to Varo. The cleric was covered in what looked like a coat of ugly gray-green fur, growths from the vrock spores. The entire left side of his face looked like a gruesome wasteland. Talen had cleared his nose and mouth, but even Dar could see that the man was fading fast.

“Put me down beside him,” Allera whispered. Her eyes were closed, but as she was placed down, she reached out and laid her hand upon his. “He is almost gone,” she said.

A blue glow started to form where their fingers touched, but at that moment a roar drew Dar and Talen’s eyes around.

The sound came from the cleric, as he lifted his body up out of the lava pit. His armor and helmet were a cherry red, fused to his blackened flesh. His screams were pure agony, and there could be no way that he could see, yet somehow he clung to life and continued to lift himself up out of the pit.

“Aaarrr!” Dar yelled, whipping up his throwing axe, and launching it in a powerful end-over-end arc that snapped across the room, burying half of the blade squarely into the brow of the cleric’s helmet. The magically keen steel cracked the superheated armor, and the blade bit deep into the man’s skull. Still screaming, the cleric fell back into the lava.

“Nice shot,” Talen said, turning back to Allera and Varo.

The blue glow had faded. The growths covering Varo had withered, turning white and crumbling into powder. Allera, having completed her spell, had lost consciousness once more. The cleric still looked terrible, and there was nothing that could be done for his eye, but he was breathing easily, and as they watched, his good eye blinked and looked up at them with something approaching lucidity behind.

“We were victorious?” he wheezed.

“Yeah, something like that,” Dar said, looking around.

The place was a charnel house. Ravaged bodies lay everywhere, and the black stones of the floor were covered in slicks of blood that gathered in pools wherever the surface dipped lower than the surrouding stones.

“Help me up,” Varo said.

“You’d better take it easy,” Talen began, but the cleric waved his caution away with a hand.

“We may have overcome the defenses of this place, but more foes may be here at any moment,” the cleric said, his voice getting stronger with each word. “Help me up.”

“Can you heal Allera?” Dar said.

Varo shook his head. “My powers... are depleted,” he said. With Dar’s help, he knelt beside her briefly. “She is stable, for the moment. Did you find any potions, or wands, among her possessions?”

“Only one potion, which we used to bring her around to save you,” Dar said.

“Maybe on the enemy clerics?” Talen asked.

“A good idea. Please check, if you would, captain,” Varo said.

“Well, you won’t find anything on the leader,” Dar said. “He took a hot bath. A very hot bath.”

Still unsteady, Varo made his way toward the platform in the center of the room. He stared up at the captive bound between the staircases. He was masked by wisps of smoke and the sheen of heat that rose off the lava, but Varo’s intent stare looked as though it could have penetrated solid stone.

“The mad elf,” he whispered.
 

Hmm. Can't help myself.

The story is exiting and reads well enough, but the victories are becoming increasingly unlikely.

Four 7th level characters against even 1 Vrock and with only 1 weapon that can actually hurt the damn thing. My money would be on the Vrock. Every single time. In fact my math analysis suggests that a standard Vrock would kill any of the characters in just 2 rounds, meaning it would take it about 10 rounds tops to kill them all. With Mirror Image running even handing Talen the axiomatic sword wouldn't make much of a difference. And this one had plenty of back-up.

I simply don't see how the Characters from you gallery could have won this fight at all. The same goes for the Purple worm and to a lesser degree the Trolls. I would prefer that you either toned the enemies down a notch or toned the "heroes" up a lot.

I know it is just a story, but it makes it less enjoyable to me when you seemingly stick to D&D rules, and then unlikely wins happen in every combat.

I'm sorry to come of so negative, but could you maybe run us through the numbers of some of these battles, to show how you think the doomed bastards could win?
 

Chill Out

Last time I checked this was Story Hour and not math class. I have not looked at the character sheets done up, but am also going to go out on a limb and say that the characters should have leveled by now. What they started out as and what they are now would not be the same. That is a lot of xp. Let the man tell his story, he never claimed that this was a blow by blow account of a campaign, just a story.
 

That is a lot of xp. Let the man tell his story, he never claimed that this was a blow by blow account of a campaign, just a story.

They did level. Lazybones advanced them in detail from 4 to 7 level. Even if they advanced a level more it would make little difference, they would have been slaughtered.

And the combats more or less ARE a blow by blow account. The D&D structure is transparent right down to the structure of rounds, spells cast and single attacks.
 

There are a lot of things that are different in gameplay, e.g. the healing process. I the game, when you are healed up after having been in the negatives you are fine again. In this story, it seems that Varo will likely have lost the use of one of his eyes, which I find a lot more "realistic".
I have no problem enjoying this story, and I'm betting that Lazybones' still has a lot of smackdown in store for this group! :]
 

The internet is always a tricky place for me to state my opinion in a clear way. So I'll try again.


I am enjoying the story very much, just as I enjoyed the last stories by Lazybones who I consider a gifted writer of sword and sorcery tales :)


But I would enjoy it even more if it either dropped the pretense of being written with the D&D engine running underneath (no more Rogues gallery, less identifiable spells and magic, less "round", "full attack" and "turn" feel) or stuck closer to realistic outcomes by that D&D engine. Right now IMO it is somewhere in between, and that lessens my enjoyment.


Anyway it could just be that my grasp of the D&D rules are flawed and there are reasonable D&D explanations (rather than litterary ones) as to how the doomed bastards can keep winning fights that by the D&D engine looks improbable or down right impossible to me. In that case I would like for Lazybones to lift the hood for a minute and show what is going on mechanics wise that lets them win.
 
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I got that. It's just that I don't mind Lazybones bending the game mechanics for the sake of his story. This SH forum is about the only place one can get away with that on this board. ;)
 

monboesen said:
But I would enjoy it even more if it either dropped the pretense of being written with the D&D engine running underneath (no more Rogues gallery, less identifiable spells and magic, less "round", "full attack" and "turn" feel) or stuck closer to realistic outcomes by that D&D engine. Right now IMO it is somewhere in between, and that lessens my enjoyment.

Anyway it could just be that my grasp of the D&D rules are flawed and there are reasonable D&D explanations (rather than litterary ones) as to how the doomed bastards can keep winning fights that by the D&D engine looks improbable or down right impossible to me. In that case I would like for Lazybones to lift the hood for a minute and show what is going on mechanics wise that lets them win.
Well, that assumes that they "won" the fight. After all, some weird stuff happened there at the end.

But fair enough; I'll address your example of this battle in game terms. But let me begin by saying that I'm not going to change the style of the story, and if it bothers you that much (and if my reply below does not sit well with you), then things will probably get worse, not better, for you as the story moves forward. Even in my P&P and NWN games, as a DM I tend to play fast and loose with the "rules" when it suits the story. My NWN games, in particular, tend to be a lot like this story, with desperate last-minute victories pulled out against seemingly insurmountable odds. Sometimes I make it too tough or too easy, and I have to nudge things one way or the other on the fly. Don't tell my players, they'll think I've gone soft. ;) Luckily there are other stories and campaign journals here that hew more closely to the actual D&D ruleset and take fewer liberties with the dice, if that is your preference.

*pulls up the hood with a loud creak*

The vrock could have easily stayed behind after taking that crit from Dar. It was due up for a full attack that most likely could have done both Talen and Dar in rather easily (5 attacks, the lowest at +13 [i.e. not likely to miss much against AC17 for both opponents], average total damage output 46 points with all hits). In case it isn't clear from the description, Dar's putting at least a full points of PA on almost every single swing now. But after the demon's DR (remember, Valor is Lawful, not Good), it really didn't take all that much damage, even factoring in the bonus damage from the axiomatic nature of the sword, and the rather garish description of the hit. I don't remember how much PA I figured for this attack, but say +4, for [1d8+7 (STR) +8 (PA) +1 (sword) +2 (WS) ] x2, +2d6 axiomatic, -10 (DR), for 42 damage (assuming average damage on each roll).

The apes and centipede delayed it, but didn't do any real damage (the centipede could have done 1 point on average after DR). Varo got in two hits on the demon, a readied inflict critical wounds and an inflict serious just before it kicked the crap out of him. He saved the first for it to touch him, thus defeating the mirror image. Once he took the hit, he should have fallen back, but he stayed and hit it with the second spell, and then took a full attack, which you saw the results of in the story.

Let's say both beat SR but it made its save (+10 Will against DC 17/16) vs. the first spell, and got unlucky and failed on the second. So it took 4d8+7/2 (12) and 3d8+7 (20). We're just lucky that Good is in short supply with the DBs, or that extra +4 AC and on saves from the aura in the temple would have likely been insurmountable.

Okay, writing this has reminded me of why I keep the mechanics in the background. :) I've probably missed a few things but that's basically what happened. So after the crit the demon was knocked down to maybe 41hp from 115 originally. Many sentient creatures would flee after taking more than 2/3rds damage, but vrocks' "deep love of battle frequently leads them into melee combats against heavy odds", and it was smart enough to know that its two remaining adversaries were on the brink of death, and not likely to get another chance to attack it.

So why'd it leave?

The vrock should have been an end to it, but to Zehn’s surprise, the warriors had driven it off.
Zehn tried to recover, but the weight of his armor kept him from regaining his balance. He did not cry out as he started to fall, invoking the power of his ring. That power, bound to the potency of the True God on this plane, was connected to the Sphere of Souls, and it had the ability to transport him magically to any of the other temples within Rappan Athuk.

Nothing happened.

As you'll recall, the spectre suddenly dropped out right before this battle as well (if it had been there, the DBs would have had no chance at all). So ultimately the answer is literary rather than mechanical, there's more going on here behind the scenes, and we certainly haven't seen the last of the vrock.

Story update in a few moments.
 
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