The Doomed Bastards: Reckoning (story complete)

jfaller said:
Ah man... No break in sight. Pretty soon it's going to be back to Dar and Varo trudging through this mess by themselves.

That's the problem, isn't it? From a story point of view, Dar is necessary for comic relief, to relieve the incessant bleakness, and perhaps for a dramatically appropriate tragic death later. Varo's just too evil to kill off -- it might lighten things up too much, and he's a good place to hang many neat plot hooks. And if you kill off all the remaining members of the original Bastards (barring the elf, of course), then it's not really "The Doomed Bastards in the Dungeon of Graves" anymore. More like "Some Guys Who Met the Doomed Bastards in the Dungeon of Graves". They could make T-shirts. :D

So, yeah. No surprise that the newcomers are getting put through the blender. Someone's got to provide the blood and gore.
 

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jfaller said:
Ah man... No break in sight. Pretty soon it's going to be back to Dar and Varo trudging through this mess by themselves.

I don't think that the word "Doomed" fully describes the futility of this situation.

Amen
 

Fimmtiu said:
That's the problem, isn't it? From a story point of view, Dar is necessary for comic relief, to relieve the incessant bleakness, and perhaps for a dramatically appropriate tragic death later. Varo's just too evil to kill off -- it might lighten things up too much, and he's a good place to hang many neat plot hooks. And if you kill off all the remaining members of the original Bastards (barring the elf, of course), then it's not really "The Doomed Bastards in the Dungeon of Graves" anymore. More like "Some Guys Who Met the Doomed Bastards in the Dungeon of Graves". They could make T-shirts. :D
Heh, I may have to kill off Varo and Dar just to surprise you guys. :D

And for the record, anybody in Rappan Athuk is a "Doomed Bastard", pretty much.

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Chapter 40

TRIBULATION


Dar, Talen, and the troll continued to exchange blows in a violent storm of melee. The troll, having taken down Shaylara, found these two foes more tenacious, both men fighting with a furious determination. Dar slammed his club into the troll’s leg, smashing the limb. An ugly white spike of bone stuck out of the wound, but as the troll fought on, the extruding bone sank back into its flesh, and its skin knit together around it. Talen did his share, opening vicious rents in its torso with his sword, but at tough as it was, he couldn’t manage to score a critical hit that would dig deep enough into its body to cripple it. Aelos’s spiritual weapon continued to harry it as well, but the pounding blows from the magical torch did not burn in reality, and once the troll had failed to affect it with a claw swipe, it ignored the divine weapon to focus on the foes that could bleed.

The troll on the far bank was likewise going quickly through Varo’s centipedes. It brought down the edge of its shield once, twice, three times upon the one that had bitten it, severing its head from its body. As that creature dissolved, the troll turned on the second. The centipede managed to bite him on the back of its thigh, but the troll in turn got a grip on its long body with its claw, and started smashing it into the nearest stone column, even as the centipede continued to stab its fangs into its hand.

Varo, standing unengaged on the shore of the stream, knew that his companions were in dire straits. But he also knew that once the last centipede was destroyed, there would be nothing stopping this last—and apparently toughest—foe from joining the battle.

Summoning the power of Dagos, he hurled a potent enchantment across the cavern, calling upon the sinister might of his god to cloud the mind of the troll. The troll, though mighty, was not as strong of body as it was of mind, and it suddenly stopped its attack on the centipede, babbling incoherent scraps of phrases in Giant.

The centipede was quick to take advantage, breaking free and delivering another painful bite to the troll’s leg.

Aelos looked down at the water where Allera had suddenly vanished. The only part of the troll that had seized her that he could see was the top of its head. It fixed him with its yellow eyes, which seemed to smile at him, as if promising a like fate to him.

“Burn, fiend!” the cleric cried, opening his palm to release a bolt of searing light into the face of the troll. The beam struck the troll squarely in the center of its forehead, blasting away a blackened streak of flesh. The troll responded by erupting out of the water, surging up onto the shore directly onto the wide-eyed cleric.

Dar was a tough fighter, but the troll was incredibly strong, and there was only so much abuse that he could take. As he slammed it in the chest with one last blow from his club, the troll stepped forward and seized his shoulders with its claws. Unable to break free, the fighter could only struggle helplessly as the troll opened its jaws wide and bit down on his head. Fortunately Dar was still wearing his half-helm, but as the troll tore it off his head, its teeth took a few good-sized chunks of flesh with it.

The troll’s total focus on Dar gave Talen the opening that he needed. The veteran fighter came at the troll from behind, lifting his sword and driving it deep into the creature’s back. The troll shrieked and tore away, releasing Dar, who staggered back and fell to the ground, his face a bloody mess. The troll was still regenerating, but it was now critically wounded, and its legs collapsed under it. It fell to the ground, thrashing wildly. It tried to get up, but failed as Talen stepped carefully within its reach, and slammed his sword up to the hilt in the monster’s neck.

Aelos felt pain explode in his body as the troll tore into him. Its claws dug into his flesh, and it held him pinned as it loomed over him, close enough for him to feel the hot fetid stink of its breath on his face. He knew, and the troll knew as well, that there was no way he could break free of its grapple. All he could do was lift one hand, streaked with blood , and touch it to the troll’s chest.

”Umbra predate!” the cleric hissed, spitting blood at the troll. Darkness flashed between the priest’s fingers, and the troll reared back as a dark hole opened in its chest. Black blood gushed out of the opening, covering the cleric’s body.

In its fury, the troll tightened its grip, prepared to tear the cleric to pieces. But it heard a soft cough, and looked up into the face of Licinius Varo, who laid a gentle touch upon its brow.

The inflict serious wounds spell ravaged its terrible course through the creature’s body. The troll, furious, nevertheless realized that two humans that could deliver such terrible hurts with mere touches were not something to be confronted lightly. It fell back, and leapt into the stream, vanishing from view.

Varo bent to examine the cleric, who was drenched in blood, some of it his own, but most belonging to the troll. “Where is Allera?” When the cleric, still somewhat confused, shook his head, Varo repeated, “The healer! If we don’t find her, then this battle is lost!” He glanced up to see that the troll on the far bank was smashing what was left of his second centipede. The spell had been about to expire, in any case. His other summoning had been replaced with his water breathing spell; there would be no more aid forthcoming from Dagos this day. Lacking any further magic that could delay or discomfit the creature, he could only hope that his confusion would keep it delayed for a few more critical seconds.

Looking over at the others, he could see that the first troll was down, but its body was still intact. Aelos’s spiritual weapon was still smashing it, but as he watched, the spell’s duration expired, and the glowing torch faded away. Talen—the fool!—had gone over to Shaylara, as if there was something that he could do for her. Dar was down too, barely clinging to consciousness by the look of him.

Varo knew that the troll he and Aelos had faced had only been temporarily stunned, and that it would be back as soon as it had regenerated the damage suffered at their hands.

Where was Allera?

There! The cleric spotted the pale strands of hair floating near the submerged bridge of stones that connected the two sides of the stream. Trying to ignore the troll that continued to pound the already-dissolving body of the centipede into the stone, as well as the one that was continuing to regenerate just a few paces away, he ran over to the bridge, and pulled the limp form of the healer from the water.

She lived, if barely. He cast one of his last remaining healing spells into her. As her eyes fluttered open, he fixed them with his own.

“Listen, do not speak. We stand on the brink of destruction, and have only seconds to act. Heal the others, starting with Dar. Do not hold anything back. Do not hesitate.”

She nodded, and got up, with his help. She could barely stand, but she didn’t bother to heal herself, instead rushing over to Dar. The fighter groaned as she propped him up, but he gasped a moment later as she poured pure healing energy into him. The shock of it left him staggered, but she didn’t stop, darting over to Shaylara.

Varo had started toward the downed troll, but a roar from behind drew his attention around. Whether because it had finally shaken off the confusion, or because its addled brain had finally registered upon them as a threat, the big troll was coming.

It surged forward, ignoring the bridge, and leapt over the stream. It landed on the near bank with several feet to spare, ten feet and six hundred pounds of death waiting to be unleashed.
 
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Excellent prose LB, I read every word of the post today all the way to the end. Thanks for giving me something great to read every day of the working week.
 



Fire bad! Oh... well maybe not soooo bad.

I totally remember this section in Rappan Athuk. I HATE trolls... they're one of the nastiest monsters going. Tenacious enough to be a constant threat to anyone.

What a fantastic account of the area and its threats LB!
 

Chapter 41

BLIND LUCK AND DARK FATE


Talen, kneeling with Allera over Shaylara’s broken form, looked up as the troll landed a few paces away. The fighter reached for his sword, but it was obvious from a single glance that he had no chance against it.

Dar yelled and rushed forward. The troll saw him coming, and smashed him across the chest with a truly titanic blow to the center of the fighter’s breastplate. The fighter only gritted his teeth and surged forward, smashing his club up with both hands into the troll’s chest. The blow didn’t do much damage, but Dar thrust behind it with his full weight and momentum, trying to drive the troll back.

It was like trying to push back a stone wall. The troll was incredibly strong, possessed of a sheer degree of raw physical might that the fighter had never before faced. Dar knew that in another second, he’d lose the advantage of leverage, and the troll would lay into him with a full attack that he had little chance of surviving.

So he dug deep within himself, and made a last desperate thrust. Maybe it was luck, or fate, or some distant god’s intervention, but the troll’s right foot slid back a foot, just a single foot. The troll was only trying to gain better traction, but that foot landed on a slanted piece of rock on the water’s edge, a rock that gave way when six hundred pounds of giant settled upon it. The troll, flailing its arms, went over backwards into the stream. Dar nearly went in after it, and only barely managed to gain control of his rush, windmilling his arms to maintain his balance at the water’s edge.

It was immediately obvious, however, that the respite was only a momentary one. The troll still seemed somewhat confused, as it blundered first toward the underwater line of rocks, and then back toward the far side of the stream. But when it turned back to the companions’ side of the cavern, it was obvious by the furious look that burned in its eyes that it had regained full use of its murderous capabilities.

Aelos, back on his feet, hurled a command at it to “Flee!”, but whether it failed to understand it, or simply resisted the magic, the troll didn’t stop coming on. It rushed forward, a wall of water surging ahead of it.

Dar was there to meet it, his club coming down in a powerful two-handed arc aimed at the troll’s head. The troll lifted the arm holding its tower shield and shifted to the side, but the blow still came down solidly on its shoulder. The troll snarled and lashed out at the fighter, knocking him back a step.

The fighter immediately started to come at the troll again, but he heard a sizzling sound from his chest that caused him to look down. To his surprise, he saw a large hole in the center of his breastplate... which was growing, as the metal dissolved into reddish dust!

“What in the hells?” he asked.

The troll had managed to gain a foothold on the near shore, and as it rose to its full height, it looked utterly ferocious, poised to unleash destruction on the defenders. Once again, the companions rallied to meet it, with Dar joined by the just-healed Talen and Shaylara. The scout was still pale, her arm newly restored through Allera’s potent arts, but she clutched onto her sword with grim determination.

With its back to the water, the troll lashed out with a violent fury. It pounded Talen hard with its gauntlet, smashing the fighter across the side of his head. Without his helmet, the blow would have crushed his skull like a melon, but even with the protection his head rang with the terrible force of the blow. It lunged forward to bite, but was intercepted as Shaylara leapt into its reach, darting under its shield and stabbing her sword into the crook under its arm as she passed. The troll shrieked and tried to knock her into the stream with a blow from its shield, but she ducked under the wild swing. The edge of the shield caught her on the back of the shoulder, knocking her down, but she rolled with the impact and out of the reach of the troll before it could follow up with a crippling blow.

Talen sliced a deep gash across the troll’s thick gut with his sword. Dark blood welled out from the wound, soaking into a ragged leather belt that the creature wore. The troll struck Talen again, knocking him back. It started after him, but was distracted as Dar laid into it with a full attack from the flank. The fighter brought his club down hard into the troll’s leg, and it let out another roar of pain. It turned on him, and with his armor all but ruined, he had almost no defense against its assault. The troll seized his arm with a claw, dragging the struggling fighter up into the troll’s embrace before digging its foul teeth into his shoulder. Dar screamed as blood erupted from the vicious wound, but he managed to grab a hold of his punching dagger, sliding it from its leather sheath.

Talen felt a soft touch on the back of his neck, followed by a rush of healing energy. Nodding in thanks to Allera, he leapt back into battle, charging at the troll. Without releasing its hold on Dar, the troll brought up its huge shield, deflecting the fighter’s attack. But once again it left itself open to a surging rush from Shaylara, who thrust her small sword deep into the meaty flesh of the troll’s thigh.

That pain returned redoubled as Varo touched the arm holding Dar, sending an inflict moderate wounds into the troll. The troll loosened its grip slightly, giving Dar a chance to lift his punching dagger, and stab the keen weapon into the troll’s left eye.

The troll let out a terrible scream, and thrashed madly in a violent explosion of limbs that knocked all of the defenders back. Dar fell hard and nearly went into the stream, only Varo’s quick helping hand dragging him back from the edge. The troll had lost all control over its movements, but it still clung tenaciously to life, its body continuing to regenerate the terrible damage it had taken. The companions could see that as well, and Talen and Dar, once they had recovered, came at it again, careful to avoid the mad gyrations of its limbs as they stabbed and smashed it. Within another several moments it was down, but even with huge gaping rents in its body, it continued to slowly heal.

“We must burn it!” Varo said.

“The bag of holding!” Talen exclaimed. “Shay, there’s still a few oil flasks in there...”

But the scout never got a chance to follow up on the captain’s suggestion. Aelos, a short distance away from the melee, saw the other troll, the one they’d put down in the first rush, leap up and rush forward. The companions turned as one at the cleric’s shouted warning, lifting their weapons. Dar and Talen swung at as it ran past them, but the troll was moving with incredible speed, and both missed. Then it was past, with only Shaylara standing between it and the bridge of underwater stepping-stones. The scout held her ground, lifting her sword to strike.

The troll did not change its course, and as it reached the much smaller human, it merely seized her with its claws and leapt forward, ascending in a fifteen-foot arc that ended with it hitting the water on the far side of the bridge. The troll and its prisoner hit the water with a massive splash, and then they were gone.

For a heartbeat the companions only stared after them, stunned by the suddenness of what had happened. Talen ran forward, staring out into the darkness. “Shay! SHAY!”

The only thing that came back was silence.
 

So we're down to fighters and clerics? Well, and our still missing maniacal elven rogue whose fate has yet to be determined.

Interesting. Hit points, armor and divine casting. Sounds good to me. Even though I prefer stealthier professions, you can't argue with the durability of that combo.
 

Brogarn said:
So we're down to fighters and clerics? Well, and our still missing maniacal elven rogue whose fate has yet to be determined.

Interesting. Hit points, armor and divine casting. Sounds good to me. Even though I prefer stealthier professions, you can't argue with the durability of that combo.

Are you kidding? Every single fight in this place has pushed them to the very limits of healing and endurance. No sneak attack. No arcane spells.

You can go a long way with nothing but hit point sponges and healers, but at the rate they're burning through their resources in EVERY FIGHT there's no way they'll make it very long.

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Is Rappan Athuk REALLY this deadly? As in, LB is writing it unmodified? If so, how in the world is a normal group supposed to get through this place? Yikes.
 

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