The Doomed Bastards: Reckoning (story complete)

Chapter 318

DISASTER


Alexion started to move forward to meet the advance of the Abyssal hounds, but Dar forestalled him. “Wait for the wizards.”

The arcanists answered with a deadly barrage of spellpower. Honoratius’s fireball, substituted for cold energy, erupted in the heart of the hound pack, blasting a terrible barrage of cold through their ranks. Hounds collapsed, frozen into immobile hunks of meat that toppled over onto the hard floor. On the right, Alderis targeted those coming from the far hall. Recognizing that fire would not harm beasts such as these, he instead peppered them with a flurry of magic missiles. One hound crumpled, and a second barked with fury as the fifth missile pocked its mangy hide. The three survivors leapt forward to attack, but one staggered aside as Zahera buried an arrow in its shoulder. The other two charged toward Marcus, who lifted Beatus Incendia to greet them. One breathed a gout of fire upon the cleric, while the other surged in to bite. The cleric’s armor, bolstered by the magical protections of his faith, withstood the attack, and he slammed the sword hard into the hound, opening a terrible gash in its shoulder.

Honoratius’s spell had cleared the chamber itself of hounds. Dar and Alexion started to shift to assist Marcus, but they were interrupted by another loud growl, followed by an explosion of wood as another hound burst through one of the doors. This monster was half again the size of the other hounds, a hoary old creature with jaws as large as a bear’s. This fearsome matron did not hesitate over the destruction of her pack, but charged forward with blinding speed, its lips drawn back over its jagged teeth. Dar stepped forward to take its charge, Valor sliding down into a ready position, both fists tight around the long hilt of the sword.

The battle was all but over; even the fearsome den mother seemed no more fierce than Corath Dar, and there seemed to be only one possible outcome.

And then, disaster struck.

Zahera heard it coming, and as she fitted a second arrow to her bow she started to turn, her mouth opening to issue a warning. But then she hesitated, and the bow dropped, and she just stood there, idle, as the dark-clad, gray-skinned creatures issued from the hallway behind them. They ignored Zahera, who did not respond to their movements, and came upon the mages from the rear.

Neither Honoratius nor Alderis heard them over the sounds of the battle against the few remaining hounds. Honoratius sensed danger and began to turn, but she was not in time as one of the creatures attacked her. These were not like the flayers, muscled and powerful, and she cried out as it grabbed her. One meaty fist snagged in her hair, and she screamed as it tore the Web of Transposition from her head. She fell, the grimlock bearing down upon her.

Alderis began casting a spell, but two of the grimlocks leapt upon him, seizing his arms and interfering with the movements required for his magic. The shield guardian, standing just a few steps away, reacted at once, turning toward its master. One of the grimlocks, hefting a large battleaxe, charged to block it, but the construct ignored the blow to its chassis, thrusting forward and striking one of the pair holding Alderis. The grimlock took the heavy blow and loosened its grip, but the second enfolded the elf in a neck lock, dragging him backward.

Nelan, was only a few paces away, and he shouted a warning to the others as two more grimlocks rushed at him. “Ambush!” he yelled, lifting his mace and shield to defend himself. He summoned the power of the Shining Father, and prepared to speak a holy word to incapacitate the attackers.

But even as the power filled him, a beam of twisting, sinuous black energy erupted out of the darkness and struck him. The blast caught Nelan in the chest and hurled him roughly back. He hit the chamber wall at an angle and fell hard to the ground, stunned. The grimlocks rushed after him, seizing him before he could recover, their muscled arms wrapping around his like iron bands.

The black beam forked away from Nelan and struck Allera, who cried out in surprise as a final grimlock leapt at her. The blast of energy slid past the creature and hit her in the gut, knocking her across the room to land in a rolling stop some fifteen feet away. The grimlock pursued.

Dar heard the shouts of warning even as the huge hound met him in a violent collision. His blade bit deep into its neck, but in turn the monster bit down on his left wrist, nearly crushing the limb despite his greave. He tore free, and glanced back to see all hell breaking loose behind him.

“Go!” Alexion yelled, leaping forward to take his place before the creature. The monster started to pursue its original prey, but turned as Alexion dug his pick into its back, opening a vicious wound that pulsed black blood. It snarled and leapt upon the knight, who nimbly stepped out of its path. He lifted his pick to finish it...

An avalanche of mental power reverberated through the chamber. Alexion staggered in mid-stroke, stunned by the mind blast. The giant hound tore into him, seizing his hip in its jaws and dragging him roughly to the ground. On the opposite flank, Marcus clutched his head as the wave of mental power washed over him. He resisted the first blast, but the second overwhelmed his mind, and he fell to his knees.

Dar withstood both, although his steps wavered as he tried to get back to aid the others. He cut down the grimlock rushing toward Allera, his blade ripping through its armor of layered leather, biting hard into its side. Valor was the only thing clear in his perceptions; everything else wavered and spun before him. Summoning up a reserve of fury, he shook his head to clear it, and looked up to see a mind flayer standing before him.

He raised Valor to attack the creature, but before he could strike, he heard a voice in his mind.

“You cannot win this fight. Flee, warrior, flee for your life!”

Overcome by the suggestion, Dar turned and fled.

Alderis’s shield guardian turned to the grimlock still holding onto Alderis, but before it could assist its master, a mind flayer stepped up and splayed its long fingers across its leg. Summoning its power, the creature transported the construct to another plane. The grimlock it had knocked free leapt once more onto the elf, smashing his fingers hard against the floor as Alderis tried to cast another spell. Protected by his stoneskin, the elf was not seriously injured, but neither could he work his magic.

Mind flayers strode forward, sinuous and silent as they stepped through the raging melee. One had a hand on Zahera’s shoulder, guiding the knight like a dog through the press. Out in the chamber, Alexion screamed as the huge abyssal hound tore away his gorget, then his cries abruptly died as it sank its teeth into his throat.

Allera struggled to get up. She extended a hand toward Marcus, who knelt a few feet away, stunned by an illithid’s mind blast. A noise drew her attention, and she looked up to see the grimlock that Dar had crippled, clutching its side as blood continued to pour down its leg from the devastating wound. The creature still had enough strength to lift its axe and come toward her, however.

And behind it, four mind flayers approached. One attempted to use its psionic powers on her, but the tendrils of its thoughts found no purchase against her disciplined mind.

The healer cast a mass heal spell. The power surged through her companions, but did not accomplish as much as she had hoped; Alexion was beyond her help, and her magic could not remove the compulsion that had been placed on Zahera.

But Marcus surged to his feet, Beatus Incendia shining in his hand. “Get behind me, Allera!” he yelled, stepping forward to face the enemy. The grimlock, leaving prints in its own blood with each step, lifted its axe and somehow managed to summon the strength to rush the cleric, but one flash of the holy sword was enough to finish the crippled creature off.

Nelan staggered to his feet, fighting with all of his strength against the two grimlocks trying to hold him down. At that moment he did not look like an old man. He slipped free of one grimlock’s hold and nearly broke free, already reaching for his holy symbol. But before he could cast a spell, a form clad all in black stepped in front of him, and extended a hand. An eldritch blast, fired at point-blank range, blasted into the cleric’s chest, and knocked him back hard into the wall. The grimlocks were on him again in a second, and this time they grasped him tightly. A mind flayer approached in the wake of the dark figure, its tentacles eagerly probing for the held cleric’s skull.

“NO!” Marcus yelled. He leapt forward, only to find his way blocked by the other mind flayers. Tentacles flared, and mental power blasted over him, but the young priest resisted the power hammering at his mind. He swung Beatus Incendia, and an illithid went down, cloven nearly in two by the powerful blow. But the other flayers persisted in their assault, and finally Marcus lowered his sword, his expression growing slack as one of them penetrated his defenses and seized his mind.

Allera felt a blazon of pain in her shoulder and staggered back. She looked up in horror as Zahera drew out another arrow from her quiver, and fitted it to her bow.

But her terror and revulsion deepened as she looked past the charmed knight, and saw Alderis, on his knees, a pair of grimlocks holding his arms at a vicious angle. A mind flayer had seized the elf’s skull in its tentacles, and as she watched, helpless to intervene, it sank its mouth to his head in a grim mockery of a kiss. There was a loud crack, and terrible slurping noise, and then Alderis was released, falling forward to lie limp on the ground.

Even from where she stood, Allera could see the breach in the top of the elf’s skull, a black hole that she knew opened onto an empty cavity.

Another of the creatures had bent over the fallen Letellia, and was affixing its tentacles to her head.

Off to the side, bones crunched as the abyssal hound continued its feasting. Already it was difficult to tell that its victim had once been a man.

“It is over, Allera Hialar.”

The black-clad figure strode forward. As the light of the fallen torches revealed its features within the cowl covering its head, she could identify the owner of the voice. But she had known him from the first eldritch blast.

“Navev,” she breathed.

The warlock laughed, and the mind flayers started forward, the tentacles glistening wetly as they probed the air.
 

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I think we would be hard pressed to find a more opportune time for Varo to save the day. Apparently, he is the only one of the original Doomed Bastards who has yet to bite it. Poor Mad Elf.
 

Kaodi said:
I think we would be hard pressed to find a more opportune time for Varo to save the day. Apparently, he is the only one of the original Doomed Bastards who has yet to bite it. Poor Mad Elf.
Not true! Dar isn't dead yet.
Tiros is still alive, too, just back in Camaar.


My prediction is that Varo shows with Shay and Talen. They pick up Dar, either while he's still overcome by the suggestion, or when he gets over it and goes back there. Extreme Violence ensues.
 

Tiros and Dar both died and were brought back to life. Varo is the only one who I do not think has died at all, now that Alderis had his brain sucked out.
 


Another good storyhour is The Age of Worms - Morrus' campaign. It's was a little hard going at the start, but it really hit it's stride quickly and as far as I'm concerned, is really engrossing.

Plus Eccles updates fairly frequently! :D
 

carrot said:
Another good storyhour is The Age of Worms - Morrus' campaign. It's was a little hard going at the start, but it really hit it's stride quickly and as far as I'm concerned, is really engrossing.

Plus Eccles updates fairly frequently! :D
Thanks for the suggestion, I had DLed that one and several others recommended here to my flash drive. There really aren't that many left that have longevity and are still being updated.

For the moment I am rereading Destan's Sins of the Fathers; I don't think I've ever read it all the way through. A shame that one also died out. The man likes his colorful metaphors even more than I do, though. :p

Heh, based on the number of posts that followed the last chapter, I guess yesterday's scene had the intended impact. ;) Regular readers of my stories know that occasionally I like to "shake things up" with something unexpected. That won't change as we move forward; hope you all enjoy what's coming.

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Chapter 319

DESPAIR


The mind flayers and their allies moved forward, closing the circle around Allera. More mental attacks stabbed at her, but she turned them all. The grimlocks that had held Alderis came forward to join their masters, and Marcus moved with them, a bit jerky as he tried to fight the magic that held his mind captive.

Before the enemy could reach her, Allera cast her repulsion spell. All of the grimlocks, Marcus, and most of the mind flayers suddenly stopped, held at bay. One of the illithids, resisting the power of her magic, lunged forward, its tentacles swiping at her head. One slick tendril brushed the side of her scalp, but she tore away, and drove her mace into its gut. The flayer drew back just a bit, enough for her to crush the weapon across the side of its face. The illithid recoiled, dazed.

“It would appear that the healer has some fight left in her,” Navev said, extending a hand and hitting Allera with an eldritch blast. The coruscating beam hit Allera in the chest and knocked her back across the room. She struck a glancing blow against the wall beside the entrance to the hallway on the far side, and landed hard on the ground under the archway.

The illithids came forward again. Their numbers continued to grow, and Allera realized that Nelan had fallen, his brains slurry for one of the mind flayers. She tried to see Letellia through the press of enemies, but could not clearly distinguish her.

And then there was a shimmering behind her, and the sorceress appeared, passing through a dimension door. She looked haggard, her robes torn, oozing wounds on her head where the mind flayer’s tentacles had seized her. But she was alive, and her brain was intact.

Letellia opened her mouth to speak, but another barrage of mental energy washed over them. The sorceress screamed and fell against the hallway wall, stunned by one of the mind blasts. Allera felt as though someone was pounding at her brain with a hammer, and she knew that she was not invulnerable to the flayer assault; it was only a matter of time before she succumbed to their mental attacks.

More mind flayers were piercing her repulsion aura; she could sense them approaching. At least they would block Navev’s blasts, or at least that was her hope. Not even looking back, she bent beside Letellia, and healed her.

The sorceress’s eyes cleared instantly, and widened as they looked up over the healer’s shoulder. “More of them!” she hissed, and Allera turned to see three of them right there, barely five feet away, tentacles flailing in anticipation of a rich feed.

In the heartbeat before they were too close to block, Letellia summoned a wall of ice between them, mere inches from the healer’s back. Allera shivered at the sudden wash of cold radiating from it

“That won’t hold them long,” Letellia said, “Not with that fire-breathing hound.”

“We have to find Dar,” Allera said, rising and retreating from the edge of the wall. There was a black flash, and a ebony flare that glowed through the ice barrier’s center, and they could feel the entire structure shake with the impact.

“Come on,” Letellia said. She kept an eye on the wall as they moved down the hall, but it held, at least for now.

“He can teleport,” Allera reminded her.

“Yes, but I don’t think he will. In our past encounters, the warlock has preferred to strike from the shadows. I suspect he will not transport himself into unknown danger, without his allies testing the way first.”

They headed down the hall quickly. “The others... I could not see all of them...” Letellia said, trailing off.

“They’re all dead,” Allera said. She was in the lead as the hallway broadened into a small chamber, a vaulted thirty-foot square without any obvious exits or distinguishing features. The hall continued on its far side.

In her haste, Allera did not see the subtle markings upon the gray stone of the floor in the center of the room. But Letellia did.

“Allera, look out!” the sorceress warned. Allera started to turn, but the warning came too late, as Allera stepped over the outer edge of the marker, and vanished.
 

*Ploink....wuups...

(sound of a person being shot with seat and all out of a lurking corner)

Very nice read, it took me about a steady week and a half to get to this far...
Although your writing style is recommendable, i do want to add that i see way to many silly spelling mistakes in your posts, LB.

One example:
"This time it did even bother to start pulling her,"
this sentence is from Chapter 316,
Unfortunately for it that opened it to another attack from Marcus,
Chapter 317 (i think there should be a comma behind first it.)

I am not trying to bring down your quality nor the praise you've been given, but seeing how most readers take your writing as high quality, such 'silly' spelling mistakes should not be made imo,

Do continue the tread, as to me it is very nice to read, and i compare it to Shemeska, and Jon Potters threads, which i like equally well.

*Zwipp....(jumps into the lurking corner again...)
 
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Apologies LB.

*Ploink.... [perhaps “…”] wuups... [Onomatopoeia- I’ll allow the previous spellings, traditionalists may prefer “Plonk”, however “Ploink” has a meatier sound to it, like a Polish sausage. Although I’m really not sure about “wuups”, is that supposed to be “whoops”, an exclamation of surprise, or just an additional sound effect, regardless- let’s press on.]

(sound of a person being shot with seat and all out of a lurking corner)
[“shot with seat and all”, now that really is odd, maybe there’s a comma missing- or maybe the phrase, “catapulted, seat and all, out of…” sounds better, you decide.]

Very nice read, it took me about a steady week and a half [week-and-a-half, sometimes] to get to [“to”, is superfluous- “to get this far” seems adequate.] this far...
Although your writing style is recommendable [“recommendable”, seems churlish, and clunky, nevertheless we press on] i [“I”] do want to add [“do want to add”, clunky again] that i [“I”] see way to [“too”] many silly spelling mistakes in your posts, LB.

One [“Two”] example [“examples”]:
"This time it did even bother to start pulling her,"
this sentence is [replace with “The above from”] from Chapter 316, [surely a full stop]
Unfortunately for it that opened it to another attack from Marcus, [quotation marks please]
Chapter 317 (i [“I”] think there should be a comma behind [for “behind” read “after”, followed by “the”] first it. [“it” should be in quotation marks, as should the original quotes]) [and why in brackets?]

I am not trying to bring down your quality [“I am not trying to bring down your quality”, badly phrased, confused even.] nor the praise you've been given [see previous], but seeing how most readers take your writing as high quality [see previous, again] because, [why the comma?] such 'silly' spelling mistakes should not be made [clunky again] imo, [possibly a full stop?]

Do continue the tread [“thread”, I bet you were up all night worrying about whether to pack it all in LB?], as to me it is very nice to read [“as to me it is very nice to read”, sounds like a Borat quotation.], and i [“I”] compare it [or “it compares favourably with”, or, “to”; or better still, “it’s as good as”] to Shemeska, and Jon Potters [“Potter’s”] threads, which i [“I”] like equally well [“equally well”, sorry LOL, I particularly like the “welly-well” sound of the last phrase- expertly done].

*Zwipp.... [“…”, ellipsis travel in threes, I promise] (jumps into the lurking corner again... [like this]) [full stop]

Sorry Burningspear, and undoubtedly somebody will post in picking up my mistakes, but the English language is a cumbersome, often burdensome, tool- you should see the essays I have to mark, they make your post look… no, I can’t bring myself to say it.

Merry Christmas.

LazyBones please don’t give up.

While I’m at it-

Seemingly i [“I”] am a [“an”] Orange Dragon...o whell [“well”], burn baby burn "disko" [“disco”] inferno, ouch ouch ouch ayeeeee [excellent onomatopoeia, keep up the good work.]

Sorry again, my bad [intentional].
 

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