I had a car accident, I'll post tomorrow probably.
I had a car accident, I'll post tomorrow probably.
Lady Gray:
Background: Great! Nice and fluid to read, I enjoyed it.
Abilities: Fine
Saves, Combat and powers: Note the comment below.
Skills: Fine
Feats: You accounted 20 PP, but you have 16 normal feats, and 5 equipment feats, so thats 21 pp.
All:
Please note the pp cost for each rank of your powers and the number of ranks foe ease in review. Also supply AP and extras and their costs in the power section.
On your combat section state how many PP you spent on attack, defense and on saves too, and where do the bonuses come from (ie from feats, powers, devices, equipment, or raw bonus from pp buy)
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Hybrid:
Background: Good, but I'll like you to develope if you like, some conflic with a particular hero, and specifically why is your guy a bad guy.
Stats: I'll like a resume of your spent points, etc, I must say that you have far more experience in this, but I'll like to be able to review your character non the less, see the comments for everyone below.
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All:
Please note the pp cost for each rank of your powers and the number of ranks foe ease in review. Also supply AP and extras and their costs in the power section.
On your combat section state how many PP you spent on attack, defense and on saves too, and where do the bonuses come from (ie from feats, powers, devices, equipment, or raw bonus from pp buy)
I forgot to mention the above in the background section. For being evil, it is because of hatred against anyone, partly because of hurt feeling (tried to be 'aborted', and partly because of vestigial racial memories of his white martian part and their code of conduct. There is a particular hate between him and Miss Martian, because she is a pure strain white martian. He act out of jealousy and she because he is worsening the already bad martian reputation.What about an alien hybrid from a skrull / white martian alliance?
Beaten by Miss Martian and the Fantastic Four (she replaced the Human Torch in this issue).