Yes, and the (long) discussion we had while he developed his schools made me dissatisfied with several of my own ideas.Piratecat said:Nifft, you mention you're not happy with the archery school. Have you compared it against Hong's?
Sure, that makes sense.Yue Ryong said:Long Viper Bite - Since it is a strike, should it not be 'you make a single bite attack at up to 30ft range', rather than 'You gain the ability to make a single bite attack at 30 ft. range, though you do not threaten that range'. That would seem to be simpler. After all, the strike only lasts for the turn anyway.
Can't recall my original intent, but that would be a bit strong for a 2nd level maneuver. I'll re-word it to exclude that.Yue Ryong said:Inertia Tap - Strictly speaking, this could be interpretted to include spells that grant bonus types of speed (i.e. Fly, Burrow or Swim speeds). Is this the intention?
My reasoning was: there are several classes which grant free unlimited detect magic, but only a Sorcerer or Wizard with permanency (and some XP to blow) gets unlimited arcane sight.Yue Ryong said:Aura Piercing Sight - Not so much a quibble as a curiousity. I'd have thought the natural progression from Detect Magic would be to Arcane Sight, rather than bonuses to bypassing illusions.
Yep, should be 1 round. EDIT: ... and it says that in the text already.Yue Ryong said:Silent Star Technique - How long does this last? I assume 1 round, but it's not explicit.
It's more intended to Dazzle those looking at you with detect magic or see invisibility... Dazzling a scry'r isn't going to have much of an effect.Yue Ryong said:Lunar Radiance - I'm surprised that while this is dazzling to scryers, this has no effect on the visual capabilities of those people who are actually physically present.
Ah, the brief listing had them correct, only the long one is wrong. +8 should be Dragon Strength. Thanks!Yue Ryong said:Lion Strength Technique - There are two of these, for some reason, one granting +6 Str and another two levels higher granting +8 Str. Any ideas like 'Dragon Strength Technique' or 'Titan Strength Technique' to replace the higher one?
Your interpretation is correct, and I'll move the parenthetical & re-word that bit.Yue Ryong said:Heart Chakra Mastery - The placing of the comment on the save seems to indicate that the save is purely for the inability to stabilise. Perhaps it should be moved to immediately after '...and is dying'? That would certainly make things more understandable for me.
Two Handed Power Attack.Yue Ryong said:Called Shot - Why is this an extra d6 more powerful than Saphire Nightmare Blade, it's equivalent in the Diamond Mind school? If anything, I'd expect it to be less powerful, given that it can be done at a range of 100ft without penalty.
Okay, I'm a bit happier with Heaven's Arc now.Piratecat said:Nifft, you mention you're not happy with the archery school.
You mean me?Flamewarrior said:You dropped this, Josh?

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Rulebook featuring "high magic" options, including a host of new spells.