The Chaos portfolio has a "Greater Taint of Chaos," but no "Taint of Chaos."
The Disease portfolio has the old Quasi-deity power in the middle of its Appearance description. Also, its Cosmic Imperfections refer to Wisdom and Strength, instead of Stoicism.
In Entropy's Temporal Vulnerability weakness, you should specify that only negative effects are multiplied. As-is, they'd get more benefit from a Haste spell.
The description of Doombringer under the Fear portfolio is wrong. Under Redivivus, it should be "enemy's," not "enemies."
In the Double Fertility Demeanor, it should be "more," not "mors." And why is it connected to fire?
I really doubt you meant to give Good deities the Poisonous Blood effect.
Should the names of the Knowledge powers really include "Wise," since that's a separate portfolio? And shouldn't Polymath be a free or standard action, not always active?
The Law portfolio lists "Greater Taint of Law" twice, with no "Taint of Law."
Love's powers also mention Wisdom, which has to be wrong.
Luck's "Blur" power says "as displacement." What does the summoned creatures' luck bonus apply to?
Mountain's Legendary Constitution refers to Dexterity.
What does a Revenge Prophet's Favored Enemy bonus apply to?
On Science, you have Aversion to Magic as both a strength and a weakness. Seems odd.
Why does Secrets penalize the most important ability score for its favored class?
Stoicism lists Total Wisdom as an Old One power, but the description is correct.
The X Body/Mind/Spirit/Soul line of abilities are still confused as to what the bonus is equal to (which are divine rank, and which are ability mod?).
I just noticed there's nothing that says how you determine what Animal Companion benefits a Dragon Companion gets.