Perfect lower body and torso, the tentacles are way off, I've managed to draw something like them, much more like octopus tentacles with suckers on them. So they are long and thin.
The tusk things I described are far longer, but I shold have said. They should be about as long as an arm. Look at the Etheral Maurader if you still don't understand. This also means that when it opens it's mouth there is no gap, I supose it has no jaw (guessing from and image in my head).
The feet are more talon then that, about 2 foot is talon, and half a foot is the fleshy/skin covered foot bit.