D&D General Warduke. An attempt to provide an historical look at the character in print.

I'd like to stress once again that these are all really small things, and the paper overall is clear and well-written. I offer these suggestions only in the spirit of showing you things to watch for when writing for a grade.

Thank you, Jayoungr.

The suggestions were constructive. I did four drafts before posting it to the forums. I needed extra eyes, so all the advice given so far has been outstanding. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.
 

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