We were like gods once... BIG UPDATE Friday Nov 5!

Rel said:
About this most recent update, let me just say, "Wow!" Very gripping and exciting and they haven't even got to the best part yet. I'm starting to guess, and I say this in all seriousness, that your story hour is moving from being merely "great" toward being one of the "classics". I could easily see you getting a following along the lines of (contact)'s RttToEE or Wulf Ratbane's original story hour.

No pressure or anything, but keep up the good work. ;)
Wow. I wish I shared your optimism on this SH, but I do very much appreciate the sentiment. I don't know that I'd ever get to the level of Contact's or Wulf's stories (or other board favorites of mine like P-Cat, Sepulchrave, OldDrewId, etc), or that I'd want to try, but I plan to keep having fun with it and see how it goes.

Rel said:
I've seen all of those except for When Trumpets Fade. the Big Red One is one of my favorite war movies. It's starting to look pretty dated, but you've got to love any movie that puts Lee Marvin in charge of Luke Skywalker. :D
You really should pick up When Trumpets Fade. Not one of the best WWII movies, but tells a very little-known story about one of the bloodiest and horrendous areas Americans fought in during WWII, Hurtgen forest. The stupidity, futility, and downright arrogance of military command led to the senseless slaughter of thousands of americans there, and the movie at least paints a decent picture of a soldiers frustration and will to survive against what he knows are unsurmountable odds.

Yeah, I loved Big Red One, and even though it has technical issues it is still a good war flick, also enhanced by the fact that is supposedly the director's true story of experience during WWII.

Rel said:
I wasn't really serious about that, led. I actually think that Schwimmer is permanently damaged by his role on Friends and is suitable for little besides being despised at this point.
Hey, no prob, I'm just glad I have a character that someone is beginning to despise :) .

Rel said:
I agree with you that where Ambrose really excels is in his ability to find the parts of history that appeal to the reader most dramatically and relating them in a way that makes the reader feel personally involved in their struggle. <snip>
That is one thing he most definitely was a master of, even if he had to make a few things up to get there... :)

Rel said:
<snip>

One thing that always gets me (and which I think is a huge strength of the series) is the actual men of Easy Company who lead off each segment of the story with their personal accounts of the war. It is too easy to forget that the actors are portraying a version of events that actually took place and that real people were in that situation, fighting and dying. And it is utterly jarring when one of the "main characters", the Tocoah men who started out with the company, is suddenly killed. It feels so un-cinematic that it can't help but remind you that you're not really watching a movie but really a documentary.
The documentary that is the last episode on the DVD set, We Stand Alone Together, which is getting play on the History channel now is the most moving of the series. For the first time, they put the names of the guys interviewed below their faces to show you who they actually are, unlike they did on all the interview lead-ins where they left it off, and to hear these guys get choked up and shed a tear for someone who passed 50+ years ago is quite moving. It really affected me to watch the entire series, then all of a sudden realize that *that* old guy who did the lead in on a few episodes *is* Shifty Powers, and *that* old guy with a prosthetic leg *is* Bill Guarnere, and you actually can feel the charisma and nobility exuded by Winters during the interviews that his men must have felt back then.

When the one old soldier struggles to tell his story about how he recently had a conversation with his grandson that went something like this, it still makes me get all goose-pimply and choked-up:

Grandson: "Grampa, were you a hero in the war?"
Grampa: "No, son, I wasnt. But I served in a company of heroes".

Rel said:
Anyway, enough about Band of Brothers. Clearly you've paid close attention to detail and it shows in your excellent story hour, ledded. I obviously can't wait for more and I think you deserve big kudos for what you've accomplished so far.
Aw shucks man, I do appreciate the comments. I know that I have a lot of stuff I could get better at in the story, but I really enjoy writing it nonetheless.

Rel said:
One final question: Being as how you live in the Gulf Coast region (albeit in northern Alabama), have you paid a visit to the D-Day museum in New Orleans? I may be headed down south later this year and if I make it to Louisiana, I'm definately dropping in there.
I haven't yet (havent been to Louisiana in a long time), but we're planning a trip to N'awlins for this summer and that is near the top of my list of places to go.

Thanks again (to everyone) for stopping by.

PallidPatience said:
Trust me. I'm reading Medallions, too. It's brilliant, as well. You guys are too awesome... I sooo want to be in your group... I'm sure that I'm not worthy, though... I don't have the psycho mini-obsession thing going down. ;)
"Your training in mini obsession will be long and arduous"
"I'm not afraid!"
"oh, you will be... you *will* be... heh heh heh" :D

barsoomcore said:
Just checking in, led, and happy to see the pace hasn't let up the slightest. These cats have some darn cool powers, I have to say.

This is great stuff. Well done.
Glad to see ya again, barsoomie, I appreciate the nice words. Just wait until next update, for the first time they get a chance to truly 'stretch their legs' and pull out the full gamut of powers. Everybody really pretty much used everything they had in the coming conflict. Oh, and BTW, anyone who has not checked out barsoomcore's SH's needs to get off their lazy @ss and go do so, he's one of my personal favorites on these boards. That samurai short story you did for the Ceramic DM made me laugh for quite some time dude.

Naathez said:
...ledded, sir....

this goes beyond brilliant, up into the realm of GRAND...

-astonished, speechless, as he applauds silently-
Again, you guys never fail to come by and say something that makes me want to run out an write another 50 pages... thanks, I appreciate it, though I do think ya'll are putting much more praise onto it that it's worth. That still doesnt restrain the increased swelling in my Big Giant Head; I'm going to have borrow some of OldDrewId's interns to help me carry it around on my shoulders if ya'll keep it up.

Update coming sometime this week, if I can only remember the general sequence of events well enough to put it into words.
 

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We were like gods once... [of mice and men]

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John halted, quietly going to one knee and raising a hand, open palmed, then curled into a fist.

Moose and Hank stopped and also went to a knee, Moose slowly scanning the surrounding area for Germans with his BAR. Another BAR was strapped to his back as well as loose bandoliers of grenades, ammo, several satchel charges and magnetic mines. Hank marveled at the ease at which Moose carried this load, but hell, he was over six-and-a-half feet and thick as a tree, he ought to be able to carry a few things.

They had been walking for close to a couple hours, stopping and starting, Smitty ghosting out in front of them and occasionally appearing out of nowhere to signal them forward. For the last thirty minutes they had been inside the city, but moving slowly so as to not attract a sniper’s attention or step into an ambush.

So far they had avoided contact with anyone hostile, though they did come across a couple groups of Dutch civilians heading out of town who warned them that the British were taking quite a beating up near the bridge. The bridge they should be getting pretty close to by now. They had heard distant sounds of tank or artillery fire, and occasionally a little bit of small arms fire, earlier in their walk. Well, Smitty said he could hear a good bit of small arms fire as they got close to the city; his senses were unnaturally acute, and Smitty didn’t say a whole lot but when he did you had a tendency to believe him, come hell or high water. So if he said there were British .303’s, PIATs, Brens, Stens, German MP40’s, Kar98’s, or MG42’s firing in the distance, as far as the boys were concerned it was a friggin’ fact.

Smitty silently moved back to John while Moose and Hank moved up when he motioned to them from the hidden lee of a ruined building. Hank had the map out and was looking for landmarks that matched the detail of the city map Smythe gave them with the bookstore on it; his finger was on one building and he was staring directly at a tall stone tower, possibly a clock tower of some kind, ahead and to their right about two blocks. Quite a few buildings had been torn up during the fight or before; there had been some shelling of some kind recently.

“Well thar, dingdangit it looks jes like we done found us a dang ol’ landmark thar boys”, Hank whispered, apparently proud, or surprised, that he’d been able to lead them this far by his map skills alone. “What say we dingdang spread out a mite and use that thar danged ol’ tower as a point to turn up thataways toward that thar bridge?”

Smitty, lighting a smoke, was the first to reply.

“Sounds good. We’ll just do this like we planned. I’ll go a little bit ahead and get up in that tower, see what I can and signal back to you. Be careful, boys, I could’ve sworn I heard tank treads on that bridge a few minutes ago and they were German by the sound of ‘em”.

No one questioned him; actually Moose took that as a cue to hand out a few satchel charges and magnetic mines to the others. Moose casually put one in Hank’s hand like a loaf of bread, who promptly overbalanced at the unexpected weight; the mine clanged on the ground at Hank’s feet with him holding it. He grabbed it with his other hand and hefted it back up a bit shakily. Hank smiled sheepishly at the other’s startled faces and looked around for a moment before whispering, “Heh. Sorry ‘bout that. Damn, Moose, warn a dingdang feller ‘fore you start huckin’ 20 pound mines at ‘im.”

Smitty waited until Hank settled himself and then continued.

“Look, I betting the Brit’s have either withdrawn or fallen; I haven’t heard a British weapon fired in a while, which means the Krauts are probably heading down that very street soon to mop up. We need to get into position fast, but let’s be as quiet as we can. We’ll try to spread out around that tower; Moose, you’re gonna pick a covering position on the left where you can see the street, right? Hank, you take the right side and be ready to hit any armor on the flanks. John, back ‘em up and have yourself ready to move in quick to that shop if we can spot it from the tower. Sound like a plan, fellas?”

“Yeah dere, Smitty, I got ya covered, eh”, replied Moose.

“Yup. Got it”, John answered.

Hank looked up from where he was fiddling with the mine he dropped and dented, the other three looking expectantly at him.

“Um… yeah. Dingdang got it thar, partner… ‘cept all that last part, ‘bout dingdang coverin’ and movin’ and sech…”, Hank said.

Moose snorted; John shook his head and let out a sigh. Smitty just stared at Hank like Hank had suddenly grown a horn out of the middle of his forehead. Smitty’s look said he wasn’t all that alarmed about it, however wouldn’t mind pulling it off for him.

And re-attaching it.

Somewhere else.

Somewhere… uncomfortable.

Smitty could say a lot with just a look.

He took a deep breath and started, “Hank, what I…”

“Aw hell Smitty, dingdang I’s just messin’ with ya”, Hank shot back at him, grinning, as he slapped Smitty’s leg with the back of his hand. He arranged his gear and got ready to go.

John nodded at Smitty, his eyes crystal blue like a wolf’s. “Good hunting” he breathed at Smitty, and Moose couldn’t help repressing a slight shudder at the predator rasp in his voice. John smiled at them, a smile more feral than friendly, and loped off towards his position.

Smitty clapped Moose on the shoulder, grinning, and headed out like a rapid ghost, a mere shadow of color on the grey city landscape as he moved silently and swiftly towards the tower.

Hank took off in a crouching quick-walk towards where Smitty had directed him. “Meet ya up thar Bullwinkle”.

Moose just shook his head and moved off at the double towards a good covering position at the end of the street. Heck, those boys are looking forward to this. To gettin’ at the Krauts. Bunch o’ nuts, he thought as he moved his hulking frame into position.

Moose could hear the growling of distant engines as he started to peek out around a building corner next to the tower. He saw a darker shadow move in front of a third storey window of the tower that was most likely Smitty, and thought he might have seen shadows moving in the half-ruined buildings on the other side of the street. Moose caught sight of John, who motioned to him with a closed fist, made a sign for “tank” and counted “three” on his fingers. He then made the sign for infantry and motioned as if to say “a whole friggin sh*tload”. Time to get to work, Moose thought, and ran around the corner sliding behind a low wall, facing down the street towards the Arnhem bridge several blocks away.

As soon as he registered the fact that there was a Tiger and two Panzer tanks moving slowly down the street in single file several blocks away, infantry walking the sidewalks beside them, Moose was flinching away from hot-stinging lead and bits of rock as the MG42 he missed opened up on his position from across the street and a half-block away. Moose took a few quick, deep breaths, blowing them out forcefully, then gritted his teeth and rose up from behind the waist-high wall, opening up a long stuttering stream of suppression fire from his BAR. Nazis caught out in the open scattered as several of their number fell under the withering sleet of .30-06.

Their plan had been simple; Smitty would take a position in the highest building nearest the main street leading to the bridge. Moose would get into position at the end of the street, providing cover and drawing fire from the unfriendlies so Hank and John could move up the street towards the bridge, and the book store that was only a couple blocks from it. He also was going to draw out fire from any Krauts squirreled away in the buildings across the street so Smitty could pick a few choice targets. Hank and John would move up the right side, hopefully out of sight, and only engage if Smitty or Moose needed a hand.

As Smitty settled into position at the top of the tower he recalled a saying once about the best laid plans of mice and men.



He could see that Moose was going to be in trouble and quick. There were 3 tanks rolling down the street with at least 20 infantry providing them a screen. The opposite side of the street from Smitty, on Moose’s left, had Nazi’s crawling all over it, and several had set up nice ambush positions. On his right side, near where John and Hank were supposed to be, was a halftrack moving slowly down the alleyways, several Krauts running a scouting screen for it. I bet it’s one of those flamethrower Hanomags, thought Smitty. That’d be just our luck. They were late, and Jerry had prepared them a little surprise.

No matter, thought Smitty, we’ll manage. First things first.

Smitty brought up his scoped Springfield 1903 and immediately sighted in on an MG42 nest that was ripping lead at Moose while a couple half-squads moved quickly towards his position. A Kubelwagon with an MG34 mounted on it zoomed down the alleyway towards the street.

Smitty brought the MG42, tripod mounted with at least a three man fire team, into his scope. They had set up on the second floor of a bombed out building, and he could see movement between the shattered brick and masonry. He let out his held breath and fired, noting the spray of blood out of the gunner’s helmet as he toppled sideways and the firing stopped. Smitty heard Moose’s BAR firing, and immediately swung that way. There were four Germans moving double-time down an alley to Moose’s left, probably just out of his sight meaning to catch him on his flank.

Smitty sighted up the rearmost and fired so as not to alert his forward companions as they ran in a straight line. The man crumpled to the ground when Smitty shot him in the throat, and his companions kept moving. Then the next one’s head jerked backwards, his helmet clanging as it flew off of his head. A little high, thought Smitty as he sighted up the third German and fired. The soldier had stopped and turned when he heard the helmet, and was just looking towards the tower coiled to spring towards cover with a “where the hell did that come from?” look on his face when Smitty shot him through his gaping mouth, open to shout a warning. The leading German dove for cover through a shattered doorway before Smitty could draw a bead on him. Smitty heard more machinegun fire, and swung his Springfield back towards the action after yelling a quick warning to Moose. He hated giving away his position, but he’d hate it more if that yellow-bellied Nazi got the drop on Moose.

The loader from the MG42 nest he had fired at before had taken over and was firing. Smitty could see he was crouching more and had pulled the gun back from the exposed edge a little, and at least one more German was trying to spot where Smitty’s fire was coming from. Like that’s gonna do you any good. Man, I hate machine guns. Jeez, you’d think these b*stards could take a hint.



Hank moved as quiet as he could across the alley between the tower and the next building, what looked like an old church of some kind. He nearly jumped out of his skin when the relative silence was broken by the staccato ripping of a German machine gun, followed by a barrage of small arms fire. He saw John at the other end of the alley signaling back towards the end of the street, (aw crap, dingdang ol’ tanks again, Hank thought) and then as he turned to rejoin Hank a second machine gun starting raining death on him from another building.

Hank took off running behind the church and stopped. He peeked through the broken windows, and could see a tank rolling by on the street on the other side. “Dingdang that feller’s gonna give ‘em sum trouble fer sure Itellyouwhat”, he said to himself, and began to concentrate.

Metal debris in the surrounding area began sliding and flying towards Hank, and as it began to revolve around him in a rough sphere of swirling debris Hank took the two magnetic mines that Moose had given him, one in each hand, and added them to the mix. He looked towards the roof of the church, and exerting his control over the magnetic energy in the surrounding area, raised his arms out by his sides, leapt upwards with a low hum, and rose steadily off the ground.



John wasn’t that used to running with the ground-pounders, but he was faster than anyone he had ever met now, and could move pretty quiet also. Leaving Hank at the back of the alley, he had skulked up towards the mouth, noticed the tanks and the infantry, and signaled Moose so he wouldn’t get caught with his pants down.

No sooner than he had signaled Moose and turned, the ripping sound of a second MG42 came to him and bullets whizzed and spanged under his feet and on the wall of the alley’s mouth. Chips of stonework sprayed painfully against his skin as he bolted for better cover.

He was smart enough to realize that the MG42 had good field of fire down the alley. He juked left out of the next volley of lead’s path as it tore into the paving stones and jumped through the broken front window of a church that made up the other side of the alley from Smitty’s tower.

John was just about to breathe a sigh of relief as he landed, cat-like, on the other side of the window when he realized he just landed behind someone wearing a grey uniform whose back was to him. A Wermacht grey uniform, with a black death’s-head patch on it.

Immediately John lashed out with both hands, wrapping his arms around the soldier’s neck and calling forth the aura of killing cold almost as a reflex. The Nazi threw his head back as if to scream, but frost was forming on his tongue and teeth as John crushed his windpipe like a cardboard tube.

The soldier’s companion yelled and lowered his MP40, firing a burst at John. John quickly flung the body of the first soldier at him, bullets thudding into the half-frozen corpse, following it with blinding speed. The Nazi barely had time to swing the butt of his submachinegun at John ineffectively before the pale-eyed man was on him, grabbing both sides of his head with hands cold like death and eyes as merciful as a glacier wall. John moved the power of his killing frost differently, concentrating it, and the German’s eyes flew wide in shock, feeling his strength drain from him as his internal organs began to freeze from the inside out.

John let the body slide from his fingers and took a deep breath. Glancing out of the broken window he could see Germans firing down the street, moving, and a Panzer rumbling by right in front of him. Just as was he was reaching for a grenade or anything to use on it, he heard, more acutely felt a strange vibration, looking up to see Hank floating over the shelled-ruined roof with a spinning globe of protective metal around him and two magnetic mines orbiting his waist in the sphere of metal.

He smiled, understanding what Hank was up to, and unslung his Garand. Taking aim, he quickly began shooting the infantry to scatter them away from the clanking monstrosity in front of him as they looked up at Hank.

John just barely noticed the Hanomag pulling up on the opposite side of the church, leaving him with a Panzer on one side and a halftrack on the other. He took a quick second to peer at it through the windows of the church, wondering what was that nozzle where the machine gun was usually mounted? And why was it… burning?

“Oh damn, that can’t be good”, thought John.



As Hank floated past the apex of the Church’s destroyed roof, he gestured at the lead Panzer with both arms, teeth gritted in effort, squeezing his hands into clenched fists and slowly pulling them apart.

The tank responded, shaking and shuddering violently while making strange CRREEAAUUNKK noises of protesting metal. Several sections of armor crinkled and warped free from their bolts, the protective shurtzen on the left side sprang off entirely, and a hatch twisted loose from its hinges as the engine went dead. Confused exclamations in German rose muffled from the interior. Several Germans on the ground looked around in confusion, and one pointed up at Hank, incredulous eyes goggling wide and screaming in German. Hank just smiled at them and yelled down “Hey, how ya’ll doin’?”, waving amiably as he saw John shoot several of them dead while they stared at him like hics at their first country fair.

Then he watched as the Tiger coming from behind the Panzer finished leveling its main gun straight down the street, and with a deafening PHOOM!, fired. Straight down at Moose’s position.

Hank didn’t dare spare a glance to see the results; he set his mouth in a grim line and dove down towards the ground in between the tanks.



Meanwhile, Moose had been firing relentlessly at the horde of Nazis now popping up in windows all over the left side of the street and the ones accompanying the tanks. He’d dropped several, saw Smitty pop a few more, but they were still laying heavy down fire on him.

A couple Nazi’s sprang out close to him, charging and firing wildly with their MP40’s. The small caliber submachinegun rounds slammed all around Moose, a stream of them walking up his left side as he grunted in pain.

The Nazi’s looked at him, confused, as they saw their rounds pillow into Moose’s leg and ribcage, his skin and muscle rippling like a small stone dropped into a pond before the skin sprang back, unharmed, and the bullets fell plinking to the ground next to him.

They had only a second to contemplate this phenomena before Moose deftly turned his BAR towards them, muttering “Dammit *that* sting’s a bit, eh?”, and shot them both dead with a burst of high-caliber fire.

Moose was having a little trouble catching his breath; he had been moving very quickly, firing-reloading-firing, ducking in-and-out of cover, and several rounds from the Germans had hit their mark. While they didn’t punch big holes in him like intended, they still hurt. He thought one might have even cracked a rib, but it wasn’t enough to slow him down. Nope; as they used to say in football, he was just hitting his stride now.

The MG42 and some of the rifle fire that had been plaguing him had dropped off, thanks Smitty Moose thought, though a Kubelwagon with an MG34 mounted on it just careened around an alley and began rushing at him, machinegun spraying wildly and hitting the building behind him.

Moose was just taking aim at the Kubelwagon when he heard Smitty’s voice yell out, “Moose! Left!”

Without thinking, Moose snapped out his left hand and glanced quickly. The sweater-necks back in England had given him a little going away present before he left: A large metal contraption, an oversized brass knuckle-looking thing made of some dull whitish metal. They said it would keep him from hurting his hand if he had to hit something harder than he was.

He thought it a bit silly-looking but breathed silent thanks now; Smitty’s warning was for a lone German soldier that had flanked him. The Nazi had a panzerfaust not 30 feet away, and was just depressing the trigger as Moose spotted the Kraut, rocket screaming away from him in a cloud of smoke and flame right at Moose’s chest.

As Moose’s left hand snapped out, he felt a jarring impact to his knuckles. He had swatted the rocket out of the air to explode behind him, showering him with rocks and debris. That brass knuckle has just saved him a world of hurt. The Kubelwagon fired another burst at him, one round glancing off of his leg as the MG34 jammed with a ker-chank.

This was getting just a bit too intense for Moose. Time to even up the odds a little.

“Oh, so ya wanna play *rough* now, eh?” growled Moose, rapidly losing his patience with the Nazis. He flexed his mighty shoulders and heaved against his own form, mentally pushing against the boundaries of his own flesh, feeling the power within him light his skin on prickling fire as he felt it flood his body and expand outwards in a violent surge.

The Nazi who fired the Panzerfaust fell back on his rump in surprise, scrabbling for his rifle, muttering “Gott in Himmel… Gott in Himmel…”

The large American he was sure he had just killed had just exploded outwards in a ripple of skin and flesh and now stood before him holding a paving stone ripped from the sidewalk that was the size of a medium table-top.

He was now over *nine* feet tall.

And five feet wide.

And very, very angry.

The German scrambled, hands shaking, for his rifle, and had just flipped the safety off of it when he looked up to see the paving stone heading straight for his head and chest. He then saw nothing but a flash of light, then darkness.

Moose turned, dusting his hands, satisfied that he had taken care of *that* Nazi. He heard the three Germans in the stopped Kubelwagon, grinding its gears in front of him, screaming at each other in their panic to clear the jammed MG34. He tore a large chunk off the wall in front of him off with two massive hands. At least now he saw why those brass knuckles were so big and his uniform was special made and hung like a potato sack on him, why the Materials scientist had warned him not to tighten his bandoliers any tighter than this mark as it all stretched tightly across his much-larger body. He raised the huge chunk of stone over his head and turned towards the Kubelwagon, grinning.

The grin slid off of his face as he heard the whirring of a tank’s turrent suddenly stop.

He saw the Tiger down the street, big gun aimed right at him.

Moose flinched, snapping the chunk of wall down in front of him reflexively.

“Oh shi..”

PHOOM!

There was a tremendous impact and explosion, the Nazis in the Kubelwagon ducking for cover as bits of rock and steel rained everywhere. The form of the immense American streaked backwards from the impact to CRASH into the building facing fifteen feet behind him, which promptly fell in a shower of bricks leaving a large gaping hole.

They all cheered and looked for a new target as they turned away from the smoking crater where Moose had just been standing, one smoking and torn jump-boot the only testament that he had ever been there.

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(be sure to check out pics from this session in my miniatures thread, link is in my sig below)
 
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We were like gods once... [An Enemy's Mind]

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Untersturmführer Berchtwald Deitz was having a bad day.

A bad week, really.

Well, on second thought, a bad year.

Hell, to be honest, the whole verdammt war was not going well for him lately.

Deitz thought fondly back to his first encounter with the Nazi party in the early 1930’s; the beer hall days, full of promise and plans for a new era for the German people always filled him with pride and feelings of unrestrained, nationalistic joy.

A child of prosperous parents frustrated with the political situation in Germany, the Nazis provided an adolescent Deitz with an outlet for his petty grudges and perceived slights. He happily joined them on the Kristallnacht, The Night of Broken Glass. It was then, with a euphoria bordering on the religious, that he found joy and purpose for once in all of his eighteen years of idle affluence. The old rabbi begged them, on his knees, to spare his relics as his laughing fellows smashed the windows and doors of his precious synagogue and hurled flaming brands inside. Everything that Goebels and Himmler had told them for years about the hated Jews came crashing to him in a torrent of rage and he struck the helpless old man with his axe handle. Filled with righteous glee at the sight of the rabbi, bleeding on his hands and knees, Dietz gave in to his animal instincts and began brutally beating him, screaming curses and racial epithets. His fellows soon joined in, and they spent the whole night in an orgy of purging destruction. Deitz soon came to garner a reputation for ruthlessness and efficiency in service to the new ideals.

He joined the SS as soon as he could, and because of his father’s wealth and connections he was promoted to Untersturmführer.

Deitz gladly led his squads of SS in Warsaw and many other polish towns, freeing the people from their hardship under those of lesser blood; the communists, the gypsies, the Jews, anyone who did not submit to the new order. He happily gathered them up into ghettos, sent them to work camps, and executed anyone who resisted or merely looked at him the wrong way. Like animals, he cared nothing for their fate or their bleating for mercy.

There were many riches to be had, too, and soon they had grown fat and wealthy plundering those that were not aligned firmly with the Aryan ideal. He was so efficient that he quickly made Hauptsturmführer, and was on the fast-track for a promotion to Sturmbannführer. Life in the SS was good for Deitz, and the privileges of an SS Major were near at hand.

But then the eastern front beckoned, and his units were pulled from their duties and sent to the coldest, most hellish place he had ever imagined. Never in his wildest dreams did he expect the verdammt communists to be such a tenacious and murderous foe, willing to sacrifice five of their people for every German they could kill, and the experience of actually being shot at was not one that Deitz savored in the slightest. Even worse a foe was the winter, the killing frost doing as much to grind the German war machine to a halt as the Russians themselves. Then the accusation came.

Coward.

In one instant, he went from being a patriot to a pariah. I was only going for help, thought Deitz, only trying to get reinforcements to stave off the waves of Russian crazy-men piling up at their position. We needed ammunition, too, yes, that was it. Ammunition was what he went for. But no, those lazy arschloche he had the misfortune of commanding had let themselves be overrun. So he had lost his entire command, and been demoted, because he had the foresight to think ahead. Only his father’s connections saved him from further embarrassment, but they also served to get him transferred back to Germany, to serve near Belgium and Holland. At least he wouldn’t freeze here, though his career was virtually over now.

And none of it his fault. Or so he whined to himself night after night.

He had served Hitler as well as he could, had exhorted himself and others to all manner of horrible tasks in the ghettos, ferreting out and destroying Hitler’s opposition wherever it lay. The blood of hundreds, maybe even thousands, were on his hands and still they were not satisfied that he did his duty.

And now, to beat all, some crazy Amerikanischer schweinehund sniper was taking pot-shots through the holes in this bombed out building at them.

He had led his men forward after the British surrendered in the face of their ferocious counter-attack, hoping to get ahead of the other SS commanders and regain some of his former glory. Having held back at the bridge, his men were fresh, and they had intelligence from the Gestapo that a small allied force may be attempting to rendezvous with the Dutch underground near this very spot. He set up several MG42 nests and sent the remaining squads forward.

As soon as they saw one of the Amerikanischer fools at the end of the street he ordered all of his men to open fire, hoping to overwhelm them.

Not ten seconds after the machine-gun began firing there was a plink sound and blood sprayed from a neat hole in Hans’ helmet, his spasming body toppling to the side.

Deitz pushed himself further back into the corner, scurrying away from the damaged and open wall sections, and ordered the loader to take up the gun. His spotter, a grizzled Scharführer whose name he couldn’t remember, peered over the destroyed section of wall to try and find the sniper. The former loader yanked the tripod-mounted machine gun back from the crumbled wall’s edge and crouched as low as possible before opening fire once again.

Splack, a round hit the ground by the new gunner’s leg, showering his thigh with painful bits of masonry. And what did the fool do then? He leaned forward, looking up and to the left through the hole to try and see where the round came from, looking ready to wrangle the MG42 around to fire back.

Deitz opened his mouth to warn him, but his shout caught in his throat as the young man’s helmet flew off and he fell back heavily on his buttocks, the top of his head looking like nothing less than a broken jar of fruit preserves. The Scharführer dropped into a squat, taking cover and looked at Deitz as if he was about to say something.

Before he could suggest that Deitz do something stupid or even suicidal, Deitz screamed at him in German.

“You! Idiot! Take the gun! Return their fire! Now! For Hitler! For the Fatherland! I am your Lieutenant! Do it now!”, gesticulating wildly with a drawn pistol as he did so.

TheScharführer gave him a curious half-smile, then grunted and took position. The gun was jammed, and he motioned for Deitz to move from his corner to help him clear and load it. Deitz merely shook his head no, oh hell no and waved the pistol at him. The veteran immediately snarled at him, leaping for the nearby ammo box. A round hit the floor right in front of him, and the Scharführer leapt back, overbalancing with the heavy ammo box. As he fell backwards he straightened suddenly to get his balance, and then tried to drop back into a crouch, ammo in hand.

Too late. He had stumbled in front of one of the many holes in the bomb-shattered second storey walls of this building, and the sniper’s bullet hit him in the throat as he tried to lean forward.

Even shot, spewing and pumping his blood all over, the Scharführer cleared the MG42 and managed to load a new belt, rounds occasionally hitting within inches of him, before he coughed one last time and fell over the gun with a sighing, gurgling sound.

Deitz was in a tough spot. The Fatherland called, and his family had answered. He knew he needed that machine gun; he could hear his men screaming in the street below. Hitler needed him, and he needed him now more than ever.

He shakily crept up on the gun. He had cleared the body when a bullet whizzed by, spanging straight through his hand and into the MG42, sparking, as he reached for the bolt to prime it.

Screw Hitler. He isn’t here, thought Deitz in surprised agony over his shattered hand after he finished his shrill scream of pain, the first wound he had taken in service to the Reich.

He immediately grabbed the body of the Scharführer, and sliding it backwards with him into the corner, pulled it over him. The stench of blood and evacuated bowels was incredible, but much better than being shot again.

Deitz would tell them about his bravery, how he had taken the machine gun and mowed down the Americans until they focused their fire on him, his men failing to suppress them as they broke through the lines. How his stupid spotter had foolishly taken a wound and fell onto him, knocking him unconscious during Deitz’s heroic defense of their lines. How it wasn’t his fault.

If he could just stay still and avoid the verdammt Amerikanischer affe he heard yelling down in the street he could make his SS superiors believe him, though it was hard to control himself with his whole body shaking and a pool of urine slowly spreading under his chosen hiding spot.



Half a block away and one storey up, Smitty cycled the bolt on his Springfield.

" 'Bout time they took the hint", he muttered to himself.

He had seen Hank floating over the street, and the kubelwagon come skidding and firing out of an alley towards Moose. Smitty had also seen the Tiger's shot hit and Moose disappear.

Dammit, Moose, damn it all to hell. Smitty gritted his teeth and fired another shot near where he last saw Moose, and another German died. The sound of explosions near the tanks came to him, bringing his attention back up the street. He noted the church next door was on fire now as John leapt through the window and out into the street, but before he could do anything a bullet spracked off of the stone crenellation he was taking cover behind. Searching with his scope, he caught the glint of afternoon sun in a building several blocks away. Another scope.

That meant German snipers. Oh great, this day is just getting better and better.

Had he not been so intent on what was going on, he might have seen the halftrack pulling around the church and into the alley, elevating its gun to get a bearing on his position.


 
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Two outstanding posts, Ledded. Your games are approaching a level of sophistication and detail that boarders on the *real*.

Well done indeed.

Thanks man. I appreciate the time and effort.
 

Come to Holland he said, we'll have a good time he said....

Nicely done, Ledded. You have a real ability, being able to blend the overbearing realism from Band of Brothers with the comic-book feel of the Justice League, and all with what appears to be a practiced ease.

You might want to know that you're doing more advertising for the Blood & Blank product line than anyone else I know - I say this because I just got done purchasing Blood and Vigilance. Looks good too, from what little I've had a chance to flip through.

Now, just wondering here, but what's the possiblity of seeing a Rogue's Galley on these American Badasses? I'm really interested in seeing Moose's and Smitty...I'd say Frogbot, but I'm afraid you're going to say that he has a special sonic-based attack...revolving around a certain country's anthem.

Speaking of Frogbot - where is he/it? He's not sitting on the sidelines, sipping wine and nibbling on cheese is he?


Peterson
 

We were like gods once... [Burning down the house]

Hank descended onto the street like a red-headed avenging angel, small bits of metal humming and swirling around him. He placed himself on the sidewalk opposite the church, between the two forward tanks on the road, right in the middle of the advancing infantry.

Immediately MP40’s and Kar98’s rang out from Germans behind him and several moving with the tanks, most of their bullets phwipping harmlessly into Hank’s shield to join the other metal in it’s orbital dance around Hank. A couple rounds managed to get through, however, one creasing his thigh and sending a spray of blood onto the ground.

Hank immediately gestured outwards with both hands, and the two anti-tank mines sped away from him like thrown discuses. The first spun directly under the ailing Panzer he had tried to pull apart, and the driver’s hatch was just being opened as the mine disappeared out of sight and erupted upwards into the bottom of the vehicle. Fire and debris shot out from under the tank with a dull PHOOM, and the hatch banged open forcefully as a column of flame and smoke jetted out of the opening, accompanied by the short shrieks of the crew. Several German soldiers firing at Hank sprawled away from the exploding tank burning and screaming shrilly.

The second mine sped away towards the Tiger that had fired its shot at Moose, wedging itself under the right track.

More shots were fired at Hank, and one hit his shoulder painfully, forcing him onto one knee.

He could see the soldier who fired it, reloading his Kar98 as he advanced in front of the Tiger. The tank’s coax machine gun swiveled in Hank’s direction.

Hank threw his hand out, concentrating on the metal in the mine and its damaged detonator.

The soldier raised his rifle and pointed it dead-on at Hank, then flew forward as a large piece of track from the Tiger hit him in the back. Hank had detonated the mine, scattering more of the Germans and crippling the Tiger’s movement.

But not it’s guns.

The machine gunner, stunned for a few seconds, opened fire at Hank.

Bullets sprayed everywhere, even hitting two Germans who were rushing in to get close to him, and Hank scrambled against a nearby building corner as he felt his strength flagging under all of the relentless fire against his shield.

“Aw shoot, dingdangit its about time ah gots the hell outta here dangit”, Hank said to himself.

He glanced at the Tiger; the left tracks spooled off of their support as the tank tried unsuccessfully to maneuver to get a shot at him. It was then he noticed the bookstore just a half block back behind the tank. The one they were looking for. He heard the voices of approaching Germans behind him and decided on a course of action.

Spreading his arms, he leapt into magnetic flight once again and zoomed across the street, just over the Tiger, and in through the open door of the relatively unharmed book store.

“Well, ding-dang howdy-do thar fellers”, Hank called out at the three men inside standing around with books thrown all over the floor. Two of them were dressed in Waffen SS uniforms, one of them an officer. The second took one look at Hank, yelped, and screamed into his radio as he backpedaled away from Hank.

"Mein Gott, die amerikanischen Übermenschen haben in das Gebäude einbrechen!”

The officer leapt behind an overturned bookshelf, and Hank smiled in understanding, glad that he had learned German during basic training.

The third man, dressed in a strange apron-like protective vest with mail around his throat, merely smiled at Hank while bouncing an old black book in his hand. He had scars on both cheeks which pulled his face into a menacing sneer when he smiled.

The title of the book was “Von Unaussprechlichen Kulten. The book they were here to get.

Hank, bleeding and winded, globe of steel and iron still revolving around him with a strange keening hum, gave the man his best intimidating stare and waggled one hand at him.

“That thar book, dingdang give ‘er here Kraut-sie”, Hank spoke at him in German.

The German merely smiled, slipped the book into his bread bag, and drew a sword.

It had a long, straight blade and a large basket-hilt. Hank remembered a Life magazine article he had read once about German fencing fraternities. He realized this here nut was one of those schlaeger fencers, those fellas that went around cuttin’ on each others faces for fun.

Well, he was messin’ around with an American Ubermensch now, and unless he had one as backup he better be steppin’ off.

The German saluted Hank with his sword and said in broken English, “I am called der Unsichtbar Schwertfecter, and you may have ze book ven you have killed me.”

“But zat, you vill not do, puny American”, he finished.

Hank was just trying to interpret the man’s strange name when the feller suddenly took a fighting stance and then faded from sight.

“Aww, shoot, dingdang well jes’ don’t that beat all”, Hank moaned, realizing belatedly that he faced one of the German’s Ubermensch. Not only that, but der Unsichtbar Schwertfecter was fresh, and Hank was ready for a few stitches and a long nap.

Hank heard the man’s footsteps pad across the floor toward him, and reached out with his magnetic senses for his sword. He felt it just in time as it flicked at him lightning-quick, Hank trying to tear it out of the fencer’s grasp but only managing to turn a slash meant to disembowel him into a deep cut under his forearm.

Hank, grasping his bleeding arm, immediately took one step and vaulted through the side window in a spray of stained glass, running back towards the burning church.

Der Unsichtbar Schwertfecter chuckled once to himself, flicked Hank’s blood from his sword, and stepped through the window after him.




John saw Hank come down, saw the Kubelwagon tear out of the alley and speed, firing, towards Moose, then the Tiger sent a shell down the street and he heard the damn Kubelwagon’s crew cheer. He snapped a few more quick shots at the German’s surrounding Hank and the Tanks, then the detonation of the anti-tank mines scattered most of the rest.

He hazarded a glance over his shoulder, saw the Hanomag in the alley pointing its gun, a German in the back pointing at him and yelling.

John quickly shouldered his rifle, and running faster than the wind leapt through the front window, heading for the Kubelwagon parked in front of the smoking hole where Moose used to be, it’s crew laughing and firing into the rubble with their MG34. He pulled a pineapple grenade as he approached them.

The church erupted into flame behind him as the Hanomag let loose a long gout of heavy burning fuel from its mounted flammenwerfer.

John could feel the heat from the exploding church through his leather flight jacket even as he tore off down the street, a blur to the Germans now advancing out of the buildings opposite Smitty’s tower.

“Shoot, glad I didn’t stick around there”, he mumbled to himself, skillfully dodging sniper fire as he raced like a cheetah at the Kubelwagon.

The crew of the small German jeep yelled, one swinging the MG34 around at him. John then jumped from ten feet away with a growling yell, eyes flashing like cold fire, grabbing the top of the windshield and coming down on the hood with enough force to dent it.

“Got a present for ya Jerry”, he said in German through a wolfish smile at the three soldiers and then crouched to spring away.

One of the Germans made to grab his rifle and then screamed as he realized that John had just dropped a grenade in between the seats as he leapt over them.

The three of them stumbled over each other trying to get to the grenade, the one in the most rear diving into the pile and coming up with it, bobbling it in his hand.

He reared back to throw, and…

Boom!

The grenade detonated in his hand before he could get it off, spraying the three Germans with explosive fragments as John threw himself clear, rolling into the fall and coming to his feet.

Ten feet away from him, a German stepped from behind a ruined building and pointed the nozzle of a flammenwerfer at him.

“Shi…” John began to yell as bullets from Germans closing in on him sprayed the ground and a long stream of hellfire poured from the Kraut trying to hose him down.

He deftly rolled to his right, avoiding the stream of sure death, and charged the flamethrower-wielding Nazi, hearing other Germans closing in all around him.

The soldier screamed and tried to bring the nozzle to bear on John, but John was much too fast for him. He slipped under the man’s clumsy attempt to protect himself and grabbed the German by both wrists, his face a rictus of anger as he slammed his powerful cold into him. The soldier screamed and his flamethrower went out as the hoses near his arms froze. Frost and ice formed on the weapon as the man’s arms turned a solid crystal blue. The other Nazis that had surrounded them to club John into submission fell back a step at the power of his bitter chill, frost forming on arms raised to protect their faces.

The flamethrower-wielding German looked at John with a face of sincere surprise, and then looked down at arms he could no longer feel.

John grinned at him, all teeth, and then yanked downwards with all of his might.

SNAP! Both arms, frozen solid, broke off forcefully and John threw them at the nearest German soldiers who screamed in abject horror. The flammenwerfer man’s eyes rolled up into his head and he teetered on frozen legs.

Just then, John spotted movement in the second floor of the building above him; someone was pointing a pistol at him about to take a shot.

Spinning, he kicked the armless flamethrower-wielder up and back, right into the path of the pistol as he heard it CRACK a round at him, and dove backwards as best he could.

The pistol round punched through the flamethrower tank, causing it to spew fuel and ignite with an incredible PHWOOOOSSHHH, spraying fire on the surrounding Germans and immolating the ruined building.

John rolled hard, patting at the flames on his own body, then dove into another ruined shop front as sniper fire rained down on him. He barely registered the screams of the burning men as he crouched into the deep cover of a ruined wall and looked out, searching for another target.



Deitz was laying there trembling when he heard a commotion just outside of his hiding place. He turned his body under the heavy corpse he had pulled over himself, and looked through a hole in the bricks to see an American struggling with a large group of German soldiers just below the floor he was on.

Incredulous, Deitz watched as the pale American froze his flammenwerfer man’s arms and then broke them off.

An Ubermensch! He knew it! The Americans had sent them in! Now he, Untersturmführer Berchtwald Deitz would kill one himself. Smiling, he could almost hear the band strike up his favorite Marlene Dietrich song in his honor as he rode standing next to Hitler himself in the parade.

Redemption was at hand.

He wrestled his pistol around under the weight of the body on top of him and took careful aim through the hole in the brick. The men were struggling closely, trying to overwhelm the American and making it hard to get a clear shot, but Deitz didn’t care. He had a full magazine and what were the lives of a few troopers if he could be the man who killed an Ubermensch.

He squeezed the trigger, but just as he did the lightning-quick American looked up at him, kicking the flammenwerfer man right into his point of aim. Almost in slow motion, Deitz heard his pistol discharge, his mouth becoming a surprised oval and the band in his mind breaking down into a discordant cacophony of torn string instruments and bent trumpets.

The bullet hit the tank of the flammenwerfer with a plink, right near where the tanks joined.

For a split second, Deitz thought all was well, but then fuel spewed out of the tiny hole and ignited.

A wall of flame rolled out from the tank, men screeching as they were engulfed, and rocketed through the hole in the building Deitz was looking through, burning his eyes and hair.

The entire building went up in flame, and Deitz struggled weakly, unable to get the heavy corpse he had dragged on top of him off so he could get away.

His entire body in searing agony and the screams of his men filling his ears, Deitz managed to yell one last phrase before the fire burned his miserable lungs to ash.

“It’s… not… my… fault….”


 
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