(YB) Shou Ren humbles the Bright Necromancer!

(Sometimes it can be fun to clear the field with a move. I guess it's assumed that the field is cleared, unless one of the characters includes objects from past rounds in their move descriptions. I prefer the round to be judged normally, not conceded; after all, I'm guilty of this crime too, in this thread. :( )
 

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Um, personally, since this is a style match, wouldn't it be better if you both stop complaining (and since neither of you said "...and he was killed instantly!") and roleplay? Particularly since I was going to give the round to Shou Ren for his glowing description. I still will, now that you have that little dispute settled, but for, um... oh, you're both necromancers. Drat. Well, for whatever's sake, let's move on, shall we?

(Oh and sorry about being late. No computer for a while.)

::A vulture of considerable size flies it's way to a tree near Shou Ren, waiting for an ok from the necromancer for lunch. (All you can eat buffet!)::

Shou Ren: 1; BN: 1; Goal: 5
 

Sorry. We'll be nice, I promise! :p

The claw crushes the tower; parries the foray of the reptile!

The Bright Necromancer quickly traces the Travel rune in the air, and with a crackle of black lightning, is suddenly gone from view. As the spectators wonder where the enchanter could have gone, a booming peal of thunder rends the air, coming from the direction of the Gaurdian Tower, overlooking the Spring of life.

The tower explodes in a sphere of black energy, the crushing shockwave speeding twords Shou Ren! Gargantuan chunks of stone and wood ride the blast, and are joined by shattered trees, boulders, and stones picked up by the torrent of destructive energy!

Through the dust and debris, a form can be seen striding out from the center of the blast, protected by an Obsidian shield that hovers in front of it, ready to parry any assaults.
 

As the thunder booms across the field, the masked wizard throws up one hand, palm out. If he chants some mystic phrase, the colossal din of the shattering tower drowns it out; but certainly he works some sorcery, for a great ghostly hand wavers into view, its palm forming a shield against the wave of destruction.

When the dust clears, everything in the vicinity has been reduced to shards and mud… except for a strip of untouched road behind the guardian hand, where Shou Ren and Rini stand amongst their entourages. In the tinny silence that lingers after the roar of the blast, Shou Ren speaks. "Excessive use of force. Clumsy, unfocused." He makes a scooping gesture, and the ghostly hand scoops up a handful of sharp fragments of stone and wood. "The true adept eschews such waste." As he clenches his fist, the ghost hand clenches as well, with a sound of grinding and splintering of wood and stone. "Rather, he makes do with what is at hand." He then speaks three words in some exotic magical tongue, and opens his hand. The ghost hand follows suit. Within its palm, a great fanged maw yawns wide, its jagged teeth formed of wood and rock.

With a gesture, Shou Ren sends the hand winging towards the Bright Necromancer. The sunset glows through its translucent flesh as it soars above its enemy, its jaws clashing maniacally, then dives!

The fang assails the island as it punches near the field; grasps the aggression of the blade!

(If we're going to be judged on style rather than on success, then I guess it doesn't matter if each of us counters the move sent against us... after all, it's not like our characters can actually defeat each other before we run out of flags. :) )
 

::Rini and the acompanying scavangers are quite impressed.::

Wow. That was cool. BN unleashed some amazing energy, but Shou Ren countered and attacked so very well.
::Another vulture joins Shou Ren.::

Shou Ren: 2; BN: 1; Goal: 5
 
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Shou Ren draws back his left sleeve, revealing a sticklike arm covered with unhealthy-looking yellowish skin. With quick, precise gestures, he draws a dagger in his right hand and slashes his exposed arm. Blood dribbles down onto the dry earth at his feet. Thrusting the blade into the puddle of blood, he scoops up the blood-soaked dirt around it with both hands. Dull pink light flickers through his fingers as he chants in an unknown tongue. Then he opens his hands.

A shimmering wave of distorted light spills from his hands. Everything it touches shimmers, vibrates, and divides, not once, but a hundred times. A hundred Shou Rens, a hundred Rinis, a thousand skeletal servants and zombie porters and furred and feathered creatures appear, glistening, all shimmering and shifting and superimposed one upon the other, forming an impenetrable labyrinth of illusion.

One hundred Shou Rens lean forward to pluck one hundred knives from the bloody earth. One hundred bloodstained knives leap from one hundred hands. And as one hundred voices lift in unearthly harmony from behind one hundred masks, those one hundred knives twist and writhe in midair, transforming into one hundred sleek phantom tigers. With a chorus of roars, the phantasmal pack dashes across the plains that now lie broken and ruined by the Bright Necromancer’s magics, seeking to sate their terrible hunger with the Necromancer’s blood and flesh. But which tigers are real, and which are naught but illusion?

The tiger assaults the badlands; guards against the foray of the maze!
 

The chain overwhelms the cemetery; waves away the blood of the isle!

Amidst the thundrous roar of a hundred throats, the charging of a hundred beasts, the blurring of a thousand forms, one might think that drifting into the realms the subconcious would be impossable. But, this is not so. For, as the herd of great cats rush forward, the Necromancer's eyes roll into the back of his head, and he settles into a standing trance.

Casting his conciousness forth, he centers his mind on one of the shadow tigers. He delves deep into it's being, into the components that make it. As he knew he would, he finds them: the Earth of the dirt, the Water that forms all living things, and the Fire of Shou Ren's crimson life.

He ignores the the Earth, and concentrates on the Water and Fire. They combine in a unique signature that is Shou Ren's blood, the essence of the gaunt, withered magician. The Bright Necromancer studies this signature, memorizes it, and searches for it's match.

He finds not one, but one hundred and one. Nine and Ninety are large and tainted with Earth, one small and so. But there is a single form that has no taint, but is the voice behind the echo, the cloud above the rain. This is Shou Ren.

The necromancer casts his awareness at that form, attempting to overwhelm and reconfigure the subatomic structures of his opponent. He infects the man's blood with the putrid air of the stale, dead cemetary; the rotten earth of the open grave. He draws from the essence of the man's magic, and pours the contamination into his life fluids.

Bright regains his conciousness, stares at the great, rushing cats. He holds up a hand, and speaks out a word of dispelling, and hopes his forray into the vile enchanter's soul was successful.
 


::One hundred Rini's look slightly annoyed but mostly confused. BN's dispelling makes a good 1/2 of them disappear. Now 50 Rini's look slightly less annoyed but still mostly confused.::

What is with you people?

::Rini takes a minute to think and cast a spell to absorb her leftover phantom images.::

That's better. Now, let's see. On the basic level, you both did well. But Shou Ren made his move flow in a really scary way...
::The vultures and hyena's don't look too happy so Rini makes thier images absorb into them as well.::
... but lay off the animals. And my vultures are still hungry.
::A hyena in a bubble floats over to Bright Necromancer::

Shou Ren: 2; BN: 2; Goal: 5

::Rini incants something into her giant hammer about owing Shou Ren a smack down later.::

Also:
sub·a·tom·ic ( P ) Pronunciation Key (sb-tmk)
adj.
Of or relating to particles that are smaller than an atom.
Having dimensions or participating in reactions characteristic of the constituents of the atom
adj 1: of or relating to constituents of the atom or forces within the atom; "subatomic particles"; "harnessing subatomic energy" 2: of dimensions smaller than atomic dimensions
(definitions thanks to Dictionary.com)
So long as he has the knowledge, he can use it.
 
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