Reviewing Barlo Hawkins (perrinmiller)
Leveled-up characters make my eyes cross and it's getting a bit late. Let's take a look at the Jamir-inspired bard.
Things That Need Fixing
* I get Barlo's finances to be considerably (~4000gp) overspent. In the main body, I get 49927gp. Add in the stuff on the horse (546gp) and living expenses (100gp), and it all comes to 50573gp.
Some Minor Edits I made
* Acrobatics seems to only total +16, as opposed to the stated value +17.
* The value of 9d8 HP updated to 56, although the hit point total does not change.
Missing Text
* There is a ^ notation in the combat section for his +2 to trip, but it isn't attached to anything. I'll leave it to you to format as you please.
Things I Learned
* 55 DMC and this social monster can be yours.
* Seeking lost friend or family is never a bad motivation.
NOT YET, although the finances seems to be the only issue. Check that out and see what you get.