I've got a good idea for a character, here it is:
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Sun Jin Lee was a cop at Honk Kong, in the paranormal departement. Him and his partner, Man-Yee Fei, a beautifull girl, was working on a case of a robotic monster. The two partners had arroived to the conclusion they were hunting a monster who have a metal armor of some kind, but robot are still at the level of a small stupid dog who can hardly walk, so a cyborg is just impossible.
They were not fools. They know monsters exist. At least once a year, some creature appear in Honk Kong and start to do trouble. They had to be neutralized, and that's what the job of Sun Jin and his partner. They had both be trained to figth them, and the best way was by magic. It is pretty rare to see magician in these years, but the police have a squad to figth any who would use those power badly. Fight fire with fire, or should be said magic with magic.
That night, they were in the car, talking about nothing... The sky was covered, so Sun Jin wanted to be sure their would not be too much light to see into the car, a little trick he have learned over the years. They were watching at an old temple. It was there the monster was last seen, and it was the second time for that place, a good lead to follow. They had found nothing during the day, but they become more lucky during the night. The creature was entering the temple.
They both get out of the car and they walk into the temple. It was dark insight, so Man-Yee light up the four torch with her magic, her trick she learned over the years. They start to look everywhere. No sign at all. It had dissapear. Sun Jin saw something moving in a dark corner. He took his gun and shot in the shadow. The sound of metal against metal was heard. The bullet didn't seem to had scratch anything.
The creature leap out of the shadow and charge Sun Jin. Just before he rush the man, a wall of ice just appeared in the way, blocking the wayy of the creature. Sun Jin create a wind and the wall falled on the creature, but it seems unaffected. With his big metal claw, the monster hit Sun Jin who fly out the temple and fall 20 feets from where he was standing. He hit his head on the stairs of the temple, knocking him a moment.
When he take back his sense, he saw his partner being grapple by the creature. It was sucking the blood of her partner. Sun Jin rush the creature and the three fall on the ground. The first to stand up was the creature who hit Sun Yee who was still on the ground. A rush of pain streamed in his body. Never he has feel something like that. It was like a volcano was erupting inside his chest. The pain gained his brain. He tought his skull was on the point to blow under the pressure. He knew it, it was his end.
But the pain stops. His sense was back. He saw the creature take out his claw from his chest and start to walk to his partner. Not vanquish, Sun Jin stand up and blast the creature with a ligthning bolt. The creature fall on the ground. Sun Jin continu with another blast, and blast over blast until the creature stop to move.
When the creature stop to move, he looked at Man-Yee. She was unconsious. He used his art of healing to get her back on her feets. When she opened her eyes, she starts to scream, and then she cast her wards against monsters. Sun Jin didn't know she was acting like that, but when she finish to cast, he starts to feel fear. He was afraid of her partner. He flee as far as he could. When he come back to his sense, he didn't know what to do. What could have happened.
He start to walk back to the temple, but when he was standing in the doorway, he saw himself, lying dead in the temple. He was dead. How could that be possible. He saw her partner crying near his body. She was telling how she was loving him but didn't dare to tell him. She didn't saw the ghost outside the temple.
And then the creature start to move again. It was still alive. the creature start to run and jump in a window and flee in the dark. he start to hear the police car who was coming. Sun Jin decide it was better to hide for now.
That was about a year ago. He had been the hunter all his life, but now he is the prey. He is a creature who would be hunt down by his old friends. He has learned that Man-Yee have been taking all the ghost files. It seems she want to kill him. She loved him but now want to kill him because he is no more human, what a faith. Worst, he was loving her too, and still do it today. And that metal monster. It was still somewhere. He had meet him once since that tragic night, and he was roaming near Man-Yee house. He shock him before it run away. The creature was hunting Man-yee, but he will not let him kill his partner and the only girl he loved.
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So, what do you think of it? I think it is a nice melodramatic hook, nice character, I like the concept, but their is only one thing, the ghost come from contemporary juncture and not from 69 junture. Except that, it will be in all respect the ghost type. Will you approve that?
