Ok, some initial thoughts:
Blood and Honor, you are allowed five levels in addition to racial level adjustment. So you should have 5 levels of bard, but your sheet reads 4. Also, your character has no memory of who he is or of the land, so your knowledge of the local area and history will not be useful in the short term. As you discover what has happened that will change, so those skills can become useful a chapter or two later.
GlassEye, I'm going to wait on looking the character over since you are likely to change to a goliath PC. I very much like the druid (shapeshifter) idea for this campaign.
Queenie, the attributes look fine on the sorcerer. Will your character look like a very healthy human or show any evidence of her angelic heritage?
Voda Vosa, Your character attributes look fine and I'm studying up on warlocks as we speak. For languages you have common and gnome. Is that supposed to be common and goblin?
Shayuri, the beguiler attributes look good. What extra spell did your beguiler pick up with the advanced learning feat?
Fenris, sounds good. Look forward to seeing it.