I like the sympathetic entanglement in the end. But you guys have to let me catch up!
Skills look good, and an immediate shout seems interesting to me too.
Before we get too carried away, I wasn't being literal when I said immediately. Let's check the original text...
"If this ability [double vision] fails, a suwyze magically
shouts for help, blasting opponents in the process"
So, its shout should be usable in combat, but doesn't have to be an immediate action.
Still, I wouldn't mind it being a 3/day Su rather than an SLA.
Although it specifically lists
shout among its Spell-Like Abilities, so maybe we should just leave it there. I'd still fewer skill ranks in Arcana and more in Search, e.g. something like:
Skills #1: Concentration 5, Knowledge (arcana) 4, Listen 7, Search 5, Spot 7.
Skills #2: Concentration 5, Knowledge (arcana) 2, Listen 7, Search 7, Spot 7.