Character Submission Thread

[MalusNecessarius]

Anya Vost

Anya Vost

Seems I finally have an account working right. Anything aside from the link required here?

 

[natshikrak24]

Looked over Elric. Just saw a couple of things that need a tweak.

1) AC shows as 18 but adds to 17 as you have it broken down
2 +2 ability bonus was applied to STR but the ability is not specified under Racial Features.

That's all that I see. SK?

Thanks for spotting those out, I have just corrected them. : )

 

[Artur Hawkwing]

Thanks for spotting those out, I have just corrected them. : )

Okey dokey. unless anyone else sees anything, I now pronounce my first non-judge APPROVED for Elric Hanson.

Added Approved tag on Wiki, not sure how to take a tag out though.

 

[Khisanth the Ancient]

Hi everyone!

I'm just getting into Pathfinder, and I just added a character to the wiki: Garadh, human Fighter

 

[Systole]

Anya Vost

Seems I finally have an account working right. Anything aside from the link required here?

1. Double check your ability bonuses in the skills. Some of them don't look right.
2. What is "NT gp"?
3. Pathfinder of the Society is a Golarion trait and can't be used in LPF. You can put in a proposal for a lookalike trait, or pick a new one.
4. Is Anya's family originally from Venza? It's not clear from the background, but you picked a Venzan deity.


1 isn't a big deal. 2 should be cleaned up because it's not nice to your approvers. 3 is a dealbreaker and needs to be changed prior to approval. 4 is just me being curious.

Otherwise, I like the character and the backstory. And Daylily will be happy to have someone to talk to in his native tongue. Welcome to LPF.

P.S. Jira'shae has roughly five or six times the swearwords of any other language. It's a very ... shall we say ... expressive language.


EDIT: Okay, I figured out what NT is. Lifestyle just needs to be listed somewhere on the sheet is all.

 

[Systole]

Hi everyone!

I'm just getting into Pathfinder, and I just added a character to the wiki: Garadh, human Fighter

Mechanically, everything is looks quite good at a first pass. However, I'm going to make some suggestions which you can take or leave.

1. Odd numbered ability scores = yuck. Yes, you save a little on point buy, but it advancement in PbP is roughly 1 level every three months. So it's going to be a year before you can top off one of those scores, and two years before you can get to the second. I strongly recommend instant gratification.
2. Fortitude for fighters is already a very strong save. If you're worried about failing saves, Will is way worse to fail than Fort. Trust me on this.
3. Catch Off Guard is not a great feat unless you're doing it for the flavor.
4. I know you mentioned that you're new to Pathfinder, but there are a lot of fighter archetypes, many of which don't suck. So if you're thinking shield or crossbow or BFH, you can really pick something tailored to that.

 

[Systole]

Tyrion is sort of hanging out now. We are waiting for 2 more to go ogre hunting.

Second approval and approval for level 2. Tyrion is GTG.

 

[jackslate45]

Second approval and approval for level 2. Tyrion is GTG.

Thank you!

 

[Khisanth the Ancient]

Mechanically, everything is looks quite good at a first pass. However, I'm going to make some suggestions which you can take or leave.

1. Odd numbered ability scores = yuck. Yes, you save a little on point buy, but it advancement in PbP is roughly 1 level every three months. So it's going to be a year before you can top off one of those scores, and two years before you can get to the second. I strongly recommend instant gratification.

OK, changed it - dropped DEX to 14 and WIS to 8 (without changing their bonuses) to raise STR to 18.

2. Fortitude for fighters is already a very strong save. If you're worried about failing saves, Will is way worse to fail than Fort. Trust me on this.

It just seemed like an appropriate feat... Anyway, his Will save would be pretty awful even with Iron Will.

3. Catch Off Guard is not a great feat unless you're doing it for the flavor.

It is for flavor, seems appropriate with the background.

4. I know you mentioned that you're new to Pathfinder, but there are a lot of fighter archetypes, many of which don't suck. So if you're thinking shield or crossbow or BFH, you can really pick something tailored to that.

I glanced at them, none but Brawler really fit the character IMO, and I wasn't impressed by that one.

 

[Systole]

OK, changed it - dropped DEX to 14 and WIS to 8 (without changing their bonuses) to raise STR to 18.

It just seemed like an appropriate feat... Anyway, his Will save would be pretty awful even with Iron Will.

It is for flavor, seems appropriate with the background.

I glanced at them, none but Brawler really fit the character IMO, and I wasn't impressed by that one.

Okay, Garadh is tentatively APPROVED pending a discussion of how cost of living should be implemented.

1. Reformatted some stuff. I'm sure SK will do a more through job later.
2. Added a pic. Feel free to change it out if you don't like it.
3. Found the one place you forgot to change +3 STR to +4 STR. Busted!
4. Changed your second language to Middle Landellian, which is the local language the next city over from Venza. You can change this if you want.
5. It's also not too late to change your feats. *cough* If you're planning on going sword-and-board, you might consider the Two Weapon Fighting, Shield Bashing route.

Otherwise, you are welcome to bring Garadh into the Dunn Wright Inn and start interacting. Welcome aboard.