Scott DeWar
Prof. Emeritus-Supernatural Events/Countermeasure
I see nothing at that link, JJ.
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Character Submission Thread
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Artur Hawkwing
First Post
Sorry about that. When I copied the link it lost a bit of punctuation. Fixed and verified to work.
GlassEye
Adventurer
Dame Sienna Morrogrim:
1) Ability modifier for Perception & Profession was incorrect; mod. & skill total corrected.
2) Familiar AC was one higher than it should have been; corrected.
3) Familiar offensive ability:
Had a little confusion at first over BAB & base atk listed until I realized Base atk is really the melee atk bonus. Also CMB & bite to hit was incorrect.
[CMB -9 (-5 Str, -4 size); Melee bite +6 (1d2-5) (+2 Dex, +4 size)]; clarified & corrected.
4) Added size modifier to familiar stealth skill
5) Gear: FYI, carrying your spell component pouch in your backpack will make spellcasting difficult. You have medium encumbrance; notation made. I assume you'll probably drop the pack when in combat. You have a fair amount of cash left over. I recommend buying something small and useful; maybe a potion. Full buyback if you find you need something else.
I was able to quickly correct 1-4 & 5 was mostly advice so APPROVED
1) Ability modifier for Perception & Profession was incorrect; mod. & skill total corrected.
2) Familiar AC was one higher than it should have been; corrected.
3) Familiar offensive ability:
Had a little confusion at first over BAB & base atk listed until I realized Base atk is really the melee atk bonus. Also CMB & bite to hit was incorrect.
[CMB -9 (-5 Str, -4 size); Melee bite +6 (1d2-5) (+2 Dex, +4 size)]; clarified & corrected.
4) Added size modifier to familiar stealth skill
5) Gear: FYI, carrying your spell component pouch in your backpack will make spellcasting difficult. You have medium encumbrance; notation made. I assume you'll probably drop the pack when in combat. You have a fair amount of cash left over. I recommend buying something small and useful; maybe a potion. Full buyback if you find you need something else.
I was able to quickly correct 1-4 & 5 was mostly advice so APPROVED
Satin Knights
First Post
Looking over Tirgas again:
a) You swapped around the stats a bit, but didn't get the points spent lined up with the actual stats. Needs fixing, but cosmetic.
b) Since you took the feat, I added Unarmed Strike as a weapon.
c) Skills: UMD. You have a rank marked there, making 6 of 5, but you don't have a total. So, I think the 1 should come out of the ranks column for UMD. needs fixing.
d) The snake's CON is 13, not 11. It looks like it wasn't updated when switching snake types. That takes his HP up and Fort save. Fixed.
e) You hadn't updated the carrying capacity off of the default. Fixed.
Close enough that Tirgas has his first APPROVAL of two.
a) You swapped around the stats a bit, but didn't get the points spent lined up with the actual stats. Needs fixing, but cosmetic.
b) Since you took the feat, I added Unarmed Strike as a weapon.
c) Skills: UMD. You have a rank marked there, making 6 of 5, but you don't have a total. So, I think the 1 should come out of the ranks column for UMD. needs fixing.
d) The snake's CON is 13, not 11. It looks like it wasn't updated when switching snake types. That takes his HP up and Fort save. Fixed.
e) You hadn't updated the carrying capacity off of the default. Fixed.
Close enough that Tirgas has his first APPROVAL of two.
GlassEye
Adventurer
[MENTION=6705164]Grayn[/MENTION]
Although I gave Dame Sienna Morrogrim her second approval I realized as I was researching something else that she could have another language. LPF language rules give all characters a free regional native language (presuming Low Landellian/Common isn't their native language). So, if Sienna is from the Venza/Tritower area her languages are fine, if she's from central or southern baronies or some other region entirely she could add an additional regional language.
Although I gave Dame Sienna Morrogrim her second approval I realized as I was researching something else that she could have another language. LPF language rules give all characters a free regional native language (presuming Low Landellian/Common isn't their native language). So, if Sienna is from the Venza/Tritower area her languages are fine, if she's from central or southern baronies or some other region entirely she could add an additional regional language.
Scott DeWar
Prof. Emeritus-Supernatural Events/Countermeasure
Heinrich would be southern Landellian, right? (guten tag, y'all!)
Scott DeWar
Prof. Emeritus-Supernatural Events/Countermeasure
oops, that's right. we had this conversation about Olde Landellian!
Systole
First Post
Reviewing Tirgas: Nothing to report. APPROVED.
Morgrim Nimblefingers: Looks good except for an LPF issue. You might have 25gp coming back to you. APPROVED.
To the judges:
Do alchemist's kits cost money for alchemists, or are they considered free starting gear? I looked through some of some of our approved alchemists, and we appear to have done it both ways. Can we get a consensus and add it to the wiki so this issue doesn't crop up again? My vote is make them free, but I don't consider it a big deal either way.
Morgrim Nimblefingers: Looks good except for an LPF issue. You might have 25gp coming back to you. APPROVED.
To the judges:
Do alchemist's kits cost money for alchemists, or are they considered free starting gear? I looked through some of some of our approved alchemists, and we appear to have done it both ways. Can we get a consensus and add it to the wiki so this issue doesn't crop up again? My vote is make them free, but I don't consider it a big deal either way.
Thanks, SK! Sorry that needed so much cleaning up. (a) and (c) have been fixed. I'm guessing that it's assumed that I drop my pack when it's relevant, and that's why my ACP doesn't reflect my medium encumbrance? Or should I fix that?
Also added Seithr as a regional language, as I've seen it used elsewhere.
Also added Seithr as a regional language, as I've seen it used elsewhere.
