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Snot Snottington (how does one use the @ function if they have a space in their name? anyone?)
Here is my non-judge review for Doriandra Harrington:
1. Made a few arithmetic adjustments to the combat statistics.
2. Cleaned up a little extraneous text here and there but overall the formatting looks great.
3. Added Wild Empathy and a note about tracking to the skills section.
4. Big deal: You only get the +3 bonus for a class skill if you put a rank in it... you don't get it automatically. I took out some of the numbers, and I don't know if you want to go back and adjust your ranks to better reflect the skills you want at level 1.
5. She looks a little under prepared on adventuring gear, but I know you don't want to become medium encumbered.
Status:
Approved!
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