Character Submission Thread

[Deepthought]

Thank you [MENTION=6747658]Aura[/MENTION]. For some reason my earlier reply to the post is missing....I have picked the language and taken up two of your suggestions (I will keep the name famous predecessors are worthwhile). Thanks again for the work!

 

[Snot Snottington]

@Snot Snottington (how does one use the @ function if they have a space in their name? anyone?)

Here is my non-judge review for Doriandra Harrington:

1. Made a few arithmetic adjustments to the combat statistics.
2. Cleaned up a little extraneous text here and there but overall the formatting looks great.
3. Added Wild Empathy and a note about tracking to the skills section.
4. Big deal: You only get the +3 bonus for a class skill if you put a rank in it... you don't get it automatically. I took out some of the numbers, and I don't know if you want to go back and adjust your ranks to better reflect the skills you want at level 1.
5. She looks a little under prepared on adventuring gear, but I know you don't want to become medium encumbered.

Status: Approved!





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paging @TillForPie

feel free to roleplay up in the Dunn Wright Inn!

thanks! The adjustment in the skills has also shown me I have 10 skill points spent instead of nine. I will fix that as well.

Edit: I dood it!

 

[Aura]

Reviewing Doriandra Harrington (Snot Snottington)

This review of Dori is conducted in good faith. Any mistakes are unintentional. If you feel a mistake has been made, feel free to bring it up. Historically speaking, Aura has a low percentile chance to bite.

Things that need changing:
* Dori has no 'must fix' issues left to the player

Things I changed:
* Added back Class Skill bonus to Profession (ranger class skill) .
* Specified the ability used in Longbow attack as DEX.
* Specified the Favored class option taken as extra HP.
* Tracking added as Survival subskill for clarity. If you don't like this style of notation, you can revert it.

Suggestions:
* It’s allowable to have craft skills, but they are for fluff only, as per the wiki page on creating character. As such, I would not advise investing a trait in it.
* I generally value Point Blank Shot more than WF at low levels for ranged weapons. A lot of shooting happens inside 30', and it awards a damage bonus as well. Further, it gets you to precise shot quicker.
* Ceremonial silk armor (or just silk armor) weighs only 4 pounds and costs 30 gp if you want to carry 6 pounds of other gear. I strongly suggest having a dagger, too.

Comments:
* Tracking is based on Survival, which Dori doesn’t have. “I didn’t think it would come up,” to quote a famous ranger.

Dori is APPROVED for play in LPF. Feel free to roleplay in the DWI as you await adventure. Always a good way to start off your character development.

 

[Aura]

Sylvain the Willow is APPROVED for play in LPF. Welcome and have fun!

 

[Snot Snottington]

Reviewing Doriandra Harrington (Snot Snottington)

This review of Dori is conducted in good faith. Any mistakes are unintentional. If you feel a mistake has been made, feel free to bring it up. Historically speaking, Aura has a low percentile chance to bite.

Things that need changing:
* Dori has no 'must fix' issues left to the player

Things I changed:
* Added back Class Skill bonus to Profession (ranger class skill) .
* Specified the ability used in Longbow attack as DEX.
* Specified the Favored class option taken as extra HP.
* Tracking added as Survival subskill for clarity. If you don't like this style of notation, you can revert it.

Suggestions:
* It’s allowable to have craft skills, but they are for fluff only, as per the wiki page on creating character. As such, I would not advise investing a trait in it.
* I generally value Point Blank Shot more than WF at low levels for ranged weapons. A lot of shooting happens inside 30', and it awards a damage bonus as well. Further, it gets you to precise shot quicker.
* Ceremonial silk armor (or just silk armor) weighs only 4 pounds and costs 30 gp if you want to carry 6 pounds of other gear. I strongly suggest having a dagger, too.

Comments:
* Tracking is based on Survival, which Dori doesn’t have. “I didn’t think it would come up,” to quote a famous ranger.

Dori is APPROVED for play in LPF. Feel free to roleplay in the DWI as you await adventure. Always a good way to start off your character development.

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Having a spate of local lag this morning. Related to yesterday's storms, no doubt.

Okay...where to start on this awesome feedback, volume2.

Craft Skill - Totally brain malfunctioned here. Read it was fluff, still loaded the sucker up anyway. If it is purely Fluff Fluffington, then I would like to (and will ) move that skill point down to Survival, as that is a necessary class skill, and fluff her fussing with arrows and the like during camp scenes and the like. Still will keep the 'family business' story angle for her.

WF was added purely for the idea of making her more than just a bumbling idiot when using her short sword, not intended to effect the bow use at all. Despite that dex, she's a bit of a melee clutz (as most of my characters tend to be, PbP or table top).

Which resource if the Silk Armor from? I did not see it referenced in the Core Book, which is, at the moment, all I have physical copy of. I certainly like the idea, both for helping her have a little more gear and for being just more practical to the ultra smelly padded armor.

Pew.

I'll go get these updated while I have a few minutes. The pleasure of working at home. When nothing is going on, I can do OTHER stuff! Woohoo!

 

[Scott DeWar]

re: silk armor

http://www.d20pfsrd.com/equipment---final/armor/silken-ceremonial-armor

Ultimate combat.

this is an eastern armor

 

[Snot Snottington]

re: silk armor

http://www.d20pfsrd.com/equipment---final/armor/silken-ceremonial-armor

Ultimate combat.

this is an eastern armor

Nice summary of appearance. But it does not appear on the armor tables that I can see, and thus, I would assume, carries an AC bonus of 0 (no effect), unless I am missing it somewhere. If I am, please point me in the right direction.

EDIT: Searched Eastern Armors as I should have when you made it a line that stood out. Found it. About to have to go prepare to sign refi papers on Condo. Will update the armor when I get back. Thanks

 

[FrancisJohn]

If you really want to save weight look at the Haramaki.

 

[Scott DeWar]

EDIT: Searched Eastern Armors as I should have when you made it a line that stood out. Found it.

*chuckles out loud*

 

[Snot Snottington]

*chuckles out loud*

why have I the feeling I should be scared outta my breeches?

Off to deal with refi. Be back in a few hours.