5E: Fifth Edition Monster Variants Inspired by Fourth Edition Sources

[Casimir Liber]

this actually came from Pathfinder and I thought it added colour but happy to revert (so yes, have gone with yrs)

 

[Cleon]

this actually came from Pathfinder and I thought it added colour but happy to revert (so yes, have gone with yrs)

A creole dialect could be mentioned in the flavour text.

Possibly with both heads talking at the same time?

 

[Casimir Liber]

Yes - was also looking at the 'cology of duh ettin in Dragon. Good flavour there too (parasites etc.)

 

[Cleon]

Yes - was also looking at the 'cology of duh ettin in Dragon. Good flavour there too (parasites etc.)

Well we should probably avoid piling up the Description with flavour as this is a variant of a standard monster.

 

[Casimir Liber]

I did wonder about that. Just maybe consider referring to the official 5e ettin description?

 

[Cleon]

I did wonder about that. Just maybe consider referring to the official 5e ettin description?

Seems extraneous.

Just saying they're more skilled and powerful versions of Ettins ought to be enough.

 

[Casimir Liber]

ok sounds fine by me

 

[Casimir Liber]

So just a one-liner in the description?

 

[Cleon]

So just a one-liner in the description?

So long as it's brief whether it's a sentence or several makes no difference to me.

 

[Casimir Liber]

Ok. I am wary of copy-pasting even a brief precis for copyright reasons I guess so need to craft a very short summary in own words...