overgeeked
Open-World Sandbox
Finished the book tonight.A recent Facebook discussion of AI in writing reminded me of a book I meant to read from 2016, The Bestseller Code. A couple of lit majors and computer programmers set various computer programs loose on analyzing the New York Times' bestselling books for the last 30+ years along with a few thousand non-bestsellers to see if there are any predictive elements of a bestseller. Spoiler: yes, there are quite a few exclusive elements that make for a bestseller. Note: this isn't a how to write book.
Having tore through that book in a few days, I decided to try out a NYT bestseller. I picked up a few of James Patterson's Women's Murder Club books. Patterson seems to have cut a lot from his writing to ruthlessly up the pacing. The description is minimalist in the extreme. The chapters are all short scenes of the "start late and get out early" variety. Maybe a few printed pages at most. I'm just halfway through the book but already on chapter 63. When he does transition between locations or times it's with a sentence at most. I can't tell if I like his style or not, but it's definitely a fast-paced, page-turner of a mystery/thriller.
I still can't tell if I like Patterson's style or not, but I think I've figured out why it's off for me. It's like he wrote this as a screenplay for a TV mini series, then reformatted it for prose with some minor tweaks like adding quotation marks and dialogue tags. Each screenplay scene is turned into one chapter. And the chapters are absurdly short. I read this as an ebook with 349 pages. There were 130 chapters. That's one chapter per 2.68 pages. Tiny. Tiny chapters. His description is about as sparse as a screenplay throughout the novel. There's no transitions to speak of. Not really any deep inner monologue scenes or much in the way of rumination. The story was definitely laden with twists and turns. Every chapter ended with a twist or revelation of some kind. I can see why it's a page-turner and why a lot of people like it. I'm just not sure I like it.