Characters for the Academy of Drell

Re: Rallyn Loddry Lvl 5

Jeremy said:

((I'll use Claudio Poza's very nice gnome for a general idea, conveniently enough he's gotta crossbow from his guard duties. Just darken the hair a little, remember the ponytail down the back, and add bigger bushier eyebrows with gray eyes instead of blue.)) [/B]

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Saw this, was bored, and thought I'd give it a shot...

Great! Thanks!

Travellios Giladodel ("Moonwhisper")
Elven Evoker 4th, Neutral Good

Str 11
Dex 14
Con 11
Int 16
Wis 10
Cha 14

AC 12 (+2 dex)
Hit Points: 13
Init: +2
Fort +1 Ref +3 Will +4

Feats: (1)Spell Focus:Evocation, (W1) Scribe Scroll, (3)Greater Spell Focus: Evocation
Skills: Alchemy +8 (5 ranks), Concentration +4 (4 ranks), Craft (Jewelry) +7 (4 ranks), Knowledge (Arcana) +7 (4 ranks), Knowledge (Nobility & Royalty) +8 (5 ranks), Spellcraft +10 (7 ranks)
Languages: Common, Elven, Draconic, Dwarven
Familiar: Chorii (Bat)

Experience:
Current: 8,000
Next Level:10000

Backback 2lb
--bedroll 1lb
--Spellbook
--Artisan's Tools (Jewelrymaking)
--3 pieces of chalk
--Quill & Ink
--Journal
--Rations, trail (3 days) 3lb
Pouch, belt 3lb
--Wealth
Pouch, Spell Components
Signet Ring of House Giladodel
Lesser Rod of Energy Substitution (Acid) (T&B, 2.7K)
Torc of Comprehending Languages and Reading Magic (DMG, 2.6K, adapted from Helm...I'd like to add it to the Rod and make them into a Staff if it's ok with you, Zhure)


Spells Per Day (0/1/2): 4+1/3+1/2+1
Spell DC: 13 + Spell Level (+4 to Evocation)
Banned Schools: Enchantment, Illuision
0th level: All
1st level: Magic Missle, Tenser's Floating Disk, Identify, True Strike, Message, Shield, Animate Rope
2nd level: Gedlee's Electric Loop (MoF, p. 96), Fox's Cunning (T&B), Rope Trick, Melf's Acid Arrow, Glitterdust


History
Travellios Giladodel is the 2nd Son of his matriarchal House. As a male, he is expected to study the wizardly arts and perform the Ritual of Bonding with the daughter of another highly placed House. Thusly, the status of his family will be elevated. Should he excel in his studies and impress a even higher Lady, he would do well in raising his family into a higher caste altogether.

The Ritual is a complex one which binds the husband to his wife. He becomes her protector and highest councillor, and the two are rarely if ever seen apart. Travellios' only elder brother and sister gave in to wanderlust and broke from the family nearly four decades hence, leaving in each other's arms and renouncing their heritage. The shame cost his family dearly and it has been a long road in recovering. A great deal of pressure has therefore been applied to the young wizard to not only succeed, but greatly succeed.

Description
(See Pic)

let me know what is wrong

Paendaerig
A gnome raised amongst elves and taught the way of life of an elf
Chaotic Good
Rogue
M 3' 2" 60 lbs
age 120 years
Silver Hair
Black Eyes
Forest toned clothing
Strength 10
Dexterity 16
Constitution 14
Intelligence 12
Wisdom 11
Charisma 13
Hit Points 22
exp 15100
level 6
Walk 20'
Armour Class 13 = 10 +0 + 3 + 1 + 0
INITIATIVE
Modifier +3 = +3 + +0
BASE ATTACK
Bonus +6
Fortitude +3 = +2 + +1 + +0
Reflex +8 = +5 + +3 + +0
Will +3 = +2 + +1 + +0

SKILLS
Appraise INT 4 6
Escape Artist DEX 7 7
Read Lips INT 5
Bluff CHA 6
Hide DEX 22
Sense Motive WIS 7
Decipher Script INT 5 7
Intuit Direction WIS 1 2
Spot WIS 7 8
Diplomacy CHA 3 4
Move Silently DEX 18
Use Magic Device CHA 7
Wilderness Lore 6

SPECIAL ABILITIES
+1 to hit kobolds/goblinoids,+4 dodge vs giants,Evasion,save +2 vs illusions,Sneak Attack +3d6,Speak with Burrowing Animals 1/day,Uncanny Dodge (Dex bonus to AC)
FEATS
Point Blank Shot,Precise Shot, Rapid Shot

LANGUAGES
Common, Gnome
elven Dwarven

SPELLS
0:
Dancing Lights
Ghost Sound
Prestidigitation
Speak with Animals

Shortbow (Composite/Masterwork/Darkwood)
+9 +1 when within 30 feet
1d6 +1 when within 30 feet
20/x3
rapid shot +7/+7
N
70'
P
M


EQUIPMENT (32.5 lbs - 25/50/75)
Boots of Elvenkind
Flask
Outfit (Traveler's/Small)
Old Men's Bones Set
Cloak of Elvenkind
Pouch (Belt)
Shortbow (Composite/Masterwork/Darkwood)
10 x Rations (Trail/Per Day)
4 x Arrow of Cure Light Wounds
As Arrow+1, on hit cures 1d8+1 points of damage. See P.29 MoW.
Signet Ring
Arrows (50)
10 x Water (Pint)
Case (Watertight Scroll)
Water-tight
1 arrow given to Sildarin

Don't see any glaring errors. Just a note: Without Improved Unarmed Strikes, you'll risk AoO unless you plan on using hammer constantly. Without other weapons you'll be at a huge risk in combat.

I approve of all those metapsionic feats, but I do recommend something to make you more capable in combat. It's your concept though, so I won't step on it if you don't want to make any changes. I do also want to point out that you have a PP limit of 3 at 4th level, so Maximize won't even work for you yet anyways.

Greg

Actually the hammer idea is exactly how i was going to go.

A plain looking guy walking around no weapons and then all of a sudden he starts beating the crap out you with his now energized hands.

I know it has been done before, just not by me in this way.

And the maximize was so I could start maximizeing Animal Affinity as quickly as I could.

Hammer takes 1 PP, so you will get 11 successful shots a day, then be unarmed.

Maximizing (+6) Animal Affinity (3 PP), means you can't use it until 10th level. I'd recommend putting off Maximize until 9th level and substitute something you can use in the interim.

As I said, it's your call. I just don't want you disappointed in the character's performance.

As soon as you've made any final changes you want to make, introduce yourself in the IC forum in whatever way makes sense to you.
Greg

-edit- bad math

thought hammer lasted longer since that is the case i will need to fix that and maximize will probably go away to at this point but i will be back

I know it sounds like I'm being the bearer of bad news, and I'm sorry for that, but to take Heavy Armor Proficiency, you also have to have Medium and Light.

Greg

Ok then I got to go with something different

I dont want to hold yall up so maybe at a differnet time i could try again