Apologize for doubleposting, but probably best to keep them separate since Mechanic is several paragraphs as well.
Mechanic Overview:
A rare class to get Extra Attack Rank 2. Unfortunately as we were playing in a more generic fantasy A5E setting, the radiation parts were basically irrelevant
(this would've been quite a loss for a heavy spec).
The Battletech-like neural security was an appreciated touch. It was important (and the clearer the better) that some abilities were/are deliniated as not needing wearing the mechframe. I didn't have too much difficulty there, but it always felt like some kind of symbol, indicator or keyword in the feature names would've helped ensure no mixups. In a final version maybe just font color would do for "only in mech"?
So after several readings, I approached as a (ranged) alternative fighter. I'd have to run a closer comparison with Trooper but I suspect it will make the Trooper feel a bit sad.
Then again a lot of things make Trooper a bit sad.
My first problem came with mounts. The mounted weapons rules are extremely strict and ran afoul of themselves one mechpoint in:
- Simple or martial with no properties or the light property only (frame type only further expands melee).
- The Mounted Ranged Weapon modification states it requires the loading property.
So even if specific-overrides-general on allowing Loading for a ranged weapon, and IF we ignore the fact that range under these tables is marked in as a property... it can't have anything else other than light.
- Like... "Ammunition". or Restock. Or Autofire. Or Insulated, etc etc.
So GM had to authorize that the restrictions were PURELY on melee weapons, and removed the Loading requirement as well so that the mod could work.
New Text was:
You mount a single one-handed ranged weapon onto one of your mechaframe's arms. Energy-based weapons regain uses at a rate of 1 per minute.
Reason for that latter part was that by the "exhausted its shots" wording, it had to be emptied entirely to start recharging which in no way prevented you between fights, it just meant shooting corpses or walls just to drain the last handful of charges.
I ran into a second ranged issue; my armor's dex max. Exceptional Design doesn't change the maximum value, so it turns out the only dex-compatible one at all was Light.
Some kind of alternative
(doesn't have to be allowing dexterity) for the AC would be helpful there, especially since the Armor Plating has cumulative cost on a medium. Allowing integration/scavenging of magical equipment to transfer their plusses at the cost of the item itself maybe?
Weaponized Gauntlets seems like a bit of a waste; any chance it could just be folded into Enhanced Strikes' package? If we're caring about our unarmed output we're probably putting three points in there anyway.
The Cantrips found a bit of use, but there were very clear winners because Power Laser.
I think they (the not-power-laser ones) could be refined a bit into alternative weapons by saying something along the lines of "once per turn when attacking you may replace..." for each and dropping the damage to d4s (which we're already packing for the custom guns).
So an installed Incendiary Laser at level 17 would be a 4d4+INT attack, and if you want to replace more attacks you'll need to disco it with cryo and corrosive jet.
I don't want to suggest a bonus-action cantrip because this class definitely does not need that. It does thirst for something to do WITH bonus actions in general other than jet boots, but offensively it's already in a good place. Maybe some kind of bonus aid for friendlies? There's a good amount of tankiness in this class but few ways to really keep the attention or protect allies with it.
Exploratory Mechanisms (campaign ended at 13th) and Gears of Fortune:
We already had some travel methods from the magic folks, so I was focused on skill use. Manual Precision & Related Field created a deeply unstealthy party rogue, Needs a Tune-Up & Talk Shop took care of all the lies (and there were many).
Witty Banter fell short though; the 4 hour limit and the fact that it ignores just one once per long rest meant there was always still the need to recover - never felt like it impacted anything. Turned out to be other methods others had to actually clear the stuff out, or when truly needed we had little choice but to rest up anyway.
Custom Weapon table: Where's the lasers? No radiant? No energy weapons except the switchable high level Metaweapon?
So... Party deemed it a bit too complicated. I was alright with it but it did take some time for me to decipher and others just weren't interested even when I offered to handle all of it for them.
Were it not explicitly in my class abilities and intended for testing, GM would probably have said no to it altogether.
Personally I'd bring the categories for purposes of "one step up/down"(like the Mechanic crafting) together. It's a bit silly that if you want a 1d4 bludgeoning pistol instead of pierce or slash, you'd need TWO steps of upgrades to give it launcher, that sort of thing. Besides, in my experience bludgeon's usually been preferable to piercing, so it being "inferior" felt odd.
There could also be some room for 3d4 instead of going straight from 1d12 to 3d6. Sure it's not higher peak but the minimum and average are more reliable. Any chance the cone and line could have several varieties (like splash) or be based on the range so they can grow?
Or maybe rejigger the table to create some baselines (Light/1h/2h melee, 1h/2h ranged) and a number of points/bonuses/etc to move along each non-property track, so you might have a 1d6 20ft splash if you really want to, or other combos?
Properties can sorta be detached anyway since they were "up to Proficiency Bonus" and the restriction just a list of minimum X.