Brother Shatterstone
Dark Moderator of PbP
Ion said:I like the history so far, it seems fairly comprehensive, and I'm interested to hear more about the people in it. I'd have never even considered someone like Katrina, I think she makes a nice addition.
Thanks, I figured if something bad was to happen to someone like her father/mother her caring about it was the norm and not really a good way of showing off her genuinely kind spirit but a “step mom” (actually little more than wet nurse and family friend) was at least a little better.
I also thought that the noble ties would help MB get noticed by other groups of society. Not that her beauty wouldn't have as I could probably make a 2-page post on suitors alone but hopefully she would be known for more than her beauty now.

The thing I like most though, is the moral struggle. "I like to love people, but I'm smart enough to know I'm fickle enough to hurt people...oh what to do what to do?"
Yeah, I like it also. It does a good job of keeping her from getting tied down also.

Ion said:That in itself could be reason enough to leave town, to go "find yourself" or something.
Very true, I'm not overly worried about her not wanting to leave town now... Though I hope the first adventure takes place in town so she can level once more and have a little bit more of a combat edge to her. (assuming she finds herself fighting at all.)