Beholder, Elder Orb

[Allanon]

These masterminds of the beholder race are the wisest, but the most cunning and ruthless of their kind.

Just a typo I think needs correction. For the rest...love these conversions.

 

[BOZ]

why a typo?

and thanks

 

[Allanon]

typo? Did I say typo...
Just ignore me, I just wanted to say that that sentence was rather illogical

 

[BOZ]

oh, could be. i'm not a professional writer. is there a better way to phrase that?

 

[Gez]

These cunning, ruthless masterminds are the wisest of the beholder race.

Only those that are among both the most cunning and ruthless of beholders may survive long enough to become one of the elder orbs.

These masterminds of the beholder race are the wisest of their kinds thanks to their long experience, which they had by being more cunning and ruthless than most other rivals and enemies.

--Not a professional writer either, and even less in English.

 

[Allanon]

These masterminds of the beholder race are the wisest, most cunning and ruthless of their kind.

Or if the if the element of cunning and ruthless is more important than the wisdom.

These masterminds of the beholder race aren't always the wisest, but they are the most cunning and ruthless of their kind.

But I for one think Gez his first suggestion is best.

Not a professional writer and dutch to boot.

 

[BOZ]

i'll give it some thought.