CERAMIC DM March 2012


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I'm following a few people on Twitter who are there and am *very* jealous. :)

Also, thanks so much for your feedback: I've added a few notes to my collection of reminders for the brainstorming/edit phases!
 

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**UselessTriviaMan - Royal Pains**
My only issues are some pressing questions - like why was the princess getting married if she didn't already have the flowers? Or if the flowers were on the statue why didn't they work? The end was a bit...jerky.
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[sblock]Thanks for the critique (and the nod)! I finished writing this somewhere around 2:30AM, which I blame for both the grammatical goofs and the hurried, jerky ending. ;)

I actually used the white lily bouquets shown in the church scene as our saguaro lilies - Shianna's flowers on Gregan's "crown" weren't the ingredient needed for the antidote. I didn't spot the potential for a mix-up between the different flowers. Also, the saguaro lily was supposed to be merely the primary ingredient needed for the antidote, not the actual enchantment-breaking cure in itself. Shianna was supposed to be trying to hide the lilies in the long list of outrageous wedding demands. Again, it was late and I was tired. I shoulda spelled it out more clearly.

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I'm following a few people on Twitter who are there and am *very* jealous. :)

Also, thanks so much for your feedback: I've added a few notes to my collection of reminders for the brainstorming/edit phases!

Yeah I saw Felicia Day twittering about it. Ah well, heading back to North America in just under 3 weeks. Hope to make a con or two this year!
And you're quite welcome, hope my random babbling helps some!
 



Me, I'm holding out for the judgments. But PAX East was great - ran several "learn to play D&D" sessions, ran a "playtest D&D Next" session, ran the DM Challenge. Drank just about the right amount, ate well, slept too little. Chatted with Mearls & Jeremy Crawford, playtested a game with Mike Selinker & Zarathustran, played board games, went to panels, laughed my ass off. Really fun weekend.
 

Quick question for the judges: do you have a feel for when you might post judgments? I'm ratcheting back my thread visits to match your timing. :D
 


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