Rodrigo Istalindir
Explorer
Rodrigo - the knids are alright!
Stop knidding around. Ceramic DM is serious business.
Rodrigo - the knids are alright!
[sblock]Thanks for the critique (and the nod)! I finished writing this somewhere around 2:30AM, which I blame for both the grammatical goofs and the hurried, jerky ending.[sblock]
**UselessTriviaMan - Royal Pains**
My only issues are some pressing questions - like why was the princess getting married if she didn't already have the flowers? Or if the flowers were on the statue why didn't they work? The end was a bit...jerky.
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I'm following a few people on Twitter who are there and am *very* jealous.![]()
Also, thanks so much for your feedback: I've added a few notes to my collection of reminders for the brainstorming/edit phases!