[CMG] Evaluate, please.

Mark · Jul 9, 2003

I'd appreciate some feedback from everyone who has the time, please.

Eternalknight · Jul 9, 2003

Well, I'm no artist, but the first thing that hits me is the size of the arm... I realize it is closer than the body, but still looks slightly wrong.

Mark · Jul 9, 2003

Eternalknight said:
Well, I'm no artist, but the first thing that hits me is the size of the arm... I realize it is closer than the body, but still looks slightly wrong.

I used a digital picture of myself for a model for that one, so I had thought the perspective was fine. In what way does it look slightly wrong? Too big, too small?

How about this one?

Mathew_Freeman · Jul 9, 2003

That's cool. Very mysterious.

Mark · Jul 10, 2003

Tallarn said:
That's cool. Very mysterious.

Thanks, Tallarn!

(I'm hoping some of the great artists, who's work I see in this forum, will pop in and give me a few pointers on what to focus on next as I strive to progress...)