[CMG] Evaluate, please.

[Mark]

I'd appreciate some feedback from everyone who has the time, please.

 

[Eternalknight]

Well, I'm no artist, but the first thing that hits me is the size of the arm... I realize it is closer than the body, but still looks slightly wrong.

 

[Mark]

Well, I'm no artist, but the first thing that hits me is the size of the arm... I realize it is closer than the body, but still looks slightly wrong.

I used a digital picture of myself for a model for that one, so I had thought the perspective was fine. In what way does it look slightly wrong? Too big, too small?

How about this one?

 

[Mathew_Freeman]

That's cool. Very mysterious.

 

[Mark]

That's cool. Very mysterious.

Thanks, Tallarn!

(I'm hoping some of the great artists, who's work I see in this forum, will pop in and give me a few pointers on what to focus on next as I strive to progress...)