Creature Catalogue Overhaul Project Revisited


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freyar

Extradimensional Explorer
Err, yes? :)

Let's modify the description a bit:

A tiny sphere bobs and floats through the air, stirring up turbulence.

And flavor:

The origins and nature of vortices are mysterious. While their ties to air mark them as elementals, they cannot be summoned or called. Their motivations are likewise obscure; as far as anyone can tell, the exist only to dance through the air, attacking in a blind fury when threatened.
 

Cleon

Legend
Err, yes? :)

Let's modify the description a bit:

A tiny sphere bobs and floats through the air, stirring up turbulence.

And flavor:

The origins and nature of vortices are mysterious. While their ties to air mark them as elementals, they cannot be summoned or called. Their motivations are likewise obscure; as far as anyone can tell, the exist only to dance through the air, attacking in a blind fury when threatened.

The "blind fury" makes them sound too aggressive to me, I'd rather play up their random/chaotic behaviour:

A tiny sphere bobs and floats through the air, spinning in circles so incredibly fast it stirs up a miniature tornado.

The origins and nature of vortices are mysterious. While their ties to air mark them as elementals, they cannot be summoned or called. Their motivations are likewise obscure; as far as anyone can tell, the exist only to dance through the air, moving about randomly as the whim and winds take them. Their behavior is highly chaotic, a vortex might ignore threatening opponents, or attack in a blind fury without provocation.

COMBAT
A vortex whips the atmosphere around itself into a small but powerful whirlwind.
 




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