Creature Catalogue Overhaul Project Revisited
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Mortis
First Post
Hmm... given it's blind and doesn't know where is going perhaps a random movement mechanic?
I suppose Listen would be an option.
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Mortis
Cleon
Legend
Cleon
Legend
freyar
Extradimensional Explorer
Err, yes? 
Let's modify the description a bit:
A tiny sphere bobs and floats through the air, stirring up turbulence.
And flavor:
The origins and nature of vortices are mysterious. While their ties to air mark them as elementals, they cannot be summoned or called. Their motivations are likewise obscure; as far as anyone can tell, the exist only to dance through the air, attacking in a blind fury when threatened.
Let's modify the description a bit:
A tiny sphere bobs and floats through the air, stirring up turbulence.
And flavor:
The origins and nature of vortices are mysterious. While their ties to air mark them as elementals, they cannot be summoned or called. Their motivations are likewise obscure; as far as anyone can tell, the exist only to dance through the air, attacking in a blind fury when threatened.
Cleon
Legend
Err, yes?
Let's modify the description a bit:
A tiny sphere bobs and floats through the air, stirring up turbulence.
And flavor:
The origins and nature of vortices are mysterious. While their ties to air mark them as elementals, they cannot be summoned or called. Their motivations are likewise obscure; as far as anyone can tell, the exist only to dance through the air, attacking in a blind fury when threatened.
The "blind fury" makes them sound too aggressive to me, I'd rather play up their random/chaotic behaviour:
A tiny sphere bobs and floats through the air, spinning in circles so incredibly fast it stirs up a miniature tornado.
The origins and nature of vortices are mysterious. While their ties to air mark them as elementals, they cannot be summoned or called. Their motivations are likewise obscure; as far as anyone can tell, the exist only to dance through the air, moving about randomly as the whim and winds take them. Their behavior is highly chaotic, a vortex might ignore threatening opponents, or attack in a blind fury without provocation.
COMBAT
A vortex whips the atmosphere around itself into a small but powerful whirlwind.
Cleon
Legend
Are we about done then?
