D&D 3E/3.5 Critique Sought For Subterranean Creatures

Fixed! Copying it here so we don't have to keep going back. I actually think I'm going to remove the level adjustment entirely as these aren't really meant to be characters.

Lorix
Tiny Fey
Hit Dice:
3d6+3 (13 hp)
Initiative: +3
Speed: 20 ft (4 squares)
Armor Class: 16 (+2 size, +3 Dex, +1 natural), Touch 15, Flat-Footed 13
Base Attack/Grapple: +1/-11
Attack: sling +4 (1d2-4)
Full Attack: sling +4 (1d2-4) or tiny spear -3, (1d3-4)
Special Attacks: Spell-Like Abilities
Special Qualities: Low-light vision, blindsight 30 ft., Damage Reduction 5/cold iron, Spell Resistance 13
Space/Reach: 2.5 ft/2.5 ft
Saves: Fort +2, Ref +6, Will +5
Abilities: Str 3, Dex 16, Con 12, Int 8, Wis 14, Cha 11
Skills: Escape Artist +4, Hide +12, Listen +13, Move Silently +5, Search +4, Sense Motive +4, Spot +5, Survival +3
Feats: Alertness, Track
Environment: Subterranean
Organization: TBD
Challenge Rating: 2
Treasure: 50% coins
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Advancement: By character class
Level Adjustment: --

Blindsight (Ex): Lorices can sense all foes within 30 feet as a sighted creature would due to their sensitive hearing. A silence, zone of silence, or similar spell or magical effect, negates this ability and forces the lorix to rely on its vision, which is approximately as good as a human’s.
Spell-Like Abilities (Sp): 1/day--blink; at will--darkness, grease, and mage hand (DC 13). Caster Level 5th. The save DCs are Charisma-based.
Skills: Lorices receive a +8 racial bonus to Listen checks.
Is this creature actually blind? You don't actually have that listed. Blindsense only makes sense if it can't really see because they have low-light vision. This is kinda contradictory.
 

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Is this creature actually blind? You don't actually have that listed. Blindsense only makes sense if it can't really see because they have low-light vision. This is kinda contradictory.
I wanted them to have something similar to what bats have, which looking at it now, I see is blindsense, not blindsight. I will fix this.
 

If it's okay with the moderators, I'd like to continue this thread. The reason I haven't posted in a few weeks is because I once again lost my data on a crappy Toshiba Canvio external HDD because of the proprietary connector port being pure crap. However, I was able to rebuild most of it but for the AI art images I had accumulated for later use.

Now that I have everything backed up in multiple locations (SD card, iCloud, online cloud storage, etc), that will no longer happen.

So, if it's okay, I'd like to post the newest batch of creatures for your critique.

The Lithosyne:
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