Krizzel
First Post
A quick look over the characters shows some minor quibbles, but I'll get to those tomorrow. At the moment I'm concerned about things that are missing:
Lorenzo needs to pick a feat.
Linh needs at least a paragraph of bio/history so I have some idea of her. She can work at Houseton Street Station, but needs a place to live.
Jonathan needs an occupation - I'd suggest either Criminal or Athlete. You could get Brawl that way and take that feat chain, which is more classical 'streetfighting.' Take martial arts if he's really more of a...martial artist
You could also develop both, though remember you can't use them together (I am trying that route in Gangs of Texas).
Lorenzo needs to pick a feat.
Linh needs at least a paragraph of bio/history so I have some idea of her. She can work at Houseton Street Station, but needs a place to live.
Jonathan needs an occupation - I'd suggest either Criminal or Athlete. You could get Brawl that way and take that feat chain, which is more classical 'streetfighting.' Take martial arts if he's really more of a...martial artist
