Myth and Legend
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hellrazor111: nitpicking your character:
[sblock] His height/weight ratio is off. Right now this 2 meters and 10 centimeters tall man weighs only 73 KG - he is skinny. check this calculator for more info on ideal height/weight ratios. We use metric in BG but i do all my sheets in Imperial since most of the players here are from the US/UK)
BTW Ilmater is one of my favorite deities, kudos for choosing him!
Feats: You gain one free 2/2 feat for being an ecl0 race. (A 2/2 feat is one of the following: Acrobatic, Agile, Alertness, Animal Affinity, Athletic, Deceitful, Deft Hands, Diligent, Investigator, Magical Aptitude, Negotiator, Nimble Fingers, Persuasive, Self-Sufficient, Stealthy)
Special tab and levels advancement: Add in Blessed Weapon (SU) from variant paladin,
You actually don't qualify for Fist of Raziel as "Spells: Able to cast divine favor." is a requirement. However, since the PrC increases Paladin spellcasting, and you don't benefit from that, you are actually on the losing end so i don't mind. As a matter of fact i will let you get the benefits for higher level non-spellcasting Paladin abilities for Fist of Raziel and any other PrC that would otherwise grant you full Paladin spellcasting progression. Since Fist of Raziel does not grant spellcasting for level 1, every such ability will be gotten at one level later: Divine Might at level 12 instead of 11, Tend to Mount at 14, And Holy Sword at 17.
Skills tab is missing some entries, and one Ioun Stone entry has been left there (oversight). Please finish this section up (see cheshire_grin's sheet as an example) and i will review it.
History: The town is called Angelwatch. The block of text seems to have been written in haste (or English is not your native language). You could try to remove some repetitions, fix up the past tense etc. Also it's unclear what a 9 year old boy was expected to do by "taking care of a village leader". 6 Paladin levels is hardly "shortly after" finishing training by the way
I don't want to sound critisizing, i'm just helping you improve.
Items: please sum up your total used gold, gold left, and total weight carried. Then i will review them. And yes, you can use Katanas.[/sblock]
[sblock] His height/weight ratio is off. Right now this 2 meters and 10 centimeters tall man weighs only 73 KG - he is skinny. check this calculator for more info on ideal height/weight ratios. We use metric in BG but i do all my sheets in Imperial since most of the players here are from the US/UK)
BTW Ilmater is one of my favorite deities, kudos for choosing him!
Feats: You gain one free 2/2 feat for being an ecl0 race. (A 2/2 feat is one of the following: Acrobatic, Agile, Alertness, Animal Affinity, Athletic, Deceitful, Deft Hands, Diligent, Investigator, Magical Aptitude, Negotiator, Nimble Fingers, Persuasive, Self-Sufficient, Stealthy)
Special tab and levels advancement: Add in Blessed Weapon (SU) from variant paladin,
You actually don't qualify for Fist of Raziel as "Spells: Able to cast divine favor." is a requirement. However, since the PrC increases Paladin spellcasting, and you don't benefit from that, you are actually on the losing end so i don't mind. As a matter of fact i will let you get the benefits for higher level non-spellcasting Paladin abilities for Fist of Raziel and any other PrC that would otherwise grant you full Paladin spellcasting progression. Since Fist of Raziel does not grant spellcasting for level 1, every such ability will be gotten at one level later: Divine Might at level 12 instead of 11, Tend to Mount at 14, And Holy Sword at 17.
Skills tab is missing some entries, and one Ioun Stone entry has been left there (oversight). Please finish this section up (see cheshire_grin's sheet as an example) and i will review it.
History: The town is called Angelwatch. The block of text seems to have been written in haste (or English is not your native language). You could try to remove some repetitions, fix up the past tense etc. Also it's unclear what a 9 year old boy was expected to do by "taking care of a village leader". 6 Paladin levels is hardly "shortly after" finishing training by the way
I don't want to sound critisizing, i'm just helping you improve.Items: please sum up your total used gold, gold left, and total weight carried. Then i will review them. And yes, you can use Katanas.[/sblock]
