Dragon Bound (Disclaimer: 40 pages long, with subtle balance)

[borble]

bumperrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrdump

 

[borble]

added my pic's and deleted the old one
thanks
borble

 

[borble]

updated printers version

 

[borble]

im going to try and play this today

 

[borble]

added sheet to put spells on

 

[borble]

i think the dragon has to many skill points, do you think lowering it 4 points per hit dice is good?
ben

 

[borble]

added caricter sheet
ben

 

[Arkhandus]

And on an unrelated note, your spelling could use some work (dose instead of dose, prund instead of pruned, etc). If you ever manage to get this class balanced with D&D classes and want to try to publish it somewhere, I suggest you get a very good editor to help you clean it up.

I would guess that English is not borble's first/native language, or that he's dyslexic, so cut him some slack on that. I'm a stickler for spelling and decent grammar myself, but I understand there's a lot of folks with dyslexia or minor learning disorders that make spelling difficult (my mother and sister are like that).


borble: I'll take a look at your class material soon and try to give a thorough analysis of whatever game mechanic problems it has. Probably in a few days, as I've got to prepare a bit for my Thursday/Friday games first.

 

[borble]

I would guess that English is not borble's first/native language, or that he's dyslexic, so cut him some slack on that. I'm a stickler for spelling and decent grammar myself, but I understand there's a lot of folks with dyslexia or minor learning disorders that make spelling difficult (my mother and sister are like that).


borble: I'll take a look at your class material soon and try to give a thorough analysis of whatever game mechanic problems it has. Probably in a few days, as I've got to prepare a bit for my Thursday/Friday games first.

Ya, I have a minor form of dyslexia. But I when through it on a different format and tried to fix a lot of the mess-ups. At least everything go’s through the spell checker before posting. Hopefuly ill be playing this on friday .
Thanks for looking
ben

 

[borble]

added 2 dragon feats, and updated the dragon facts.
ill fix the charts later.
ben