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Here is my current background. Need to work with it some more but figure getting eyes on it now will help with the writing.
Garrett spent his youth staring at the stars. He grew up working for his uncle as a scrapper, gathering salvage from the crashed ships throughout the forests and islands of the planet. Garrett never knew his father. His mother talked little of the man. He was a crew member on a trading vessel that ran the Sharlissian Trade Corridor. His mother said they had a brief love affair that lasted no more than a couple years. Then the vessel moved on to more profitable trade routes and the man was gone. The only reminder of his love was Garrett. His Uncle looked after his mother till Garrett was old enough to begin working on his crew. It was a tough life but he was good at it. He seemed to know where to point the crew. His uncle started calling him his good luck charm.
Garrett never wanted to be stuck in this back water hole. He dreamed of hopping on a freighter and taking it to the stars. He was a good pilot. His uncle said he was a natural. He could fly a tramp freighter from Triton to Sharlissia. He could even stop in and see his mother whenever he landed on Kabal. That all changed when Garrett’s uncle died. His mother came down with Zithrom's Syndrome only a couple months before his uncle’s accident. He couldn’t leave her. She’d die without him. But the medication that kept her alive did not come cheap. He began hunting for more expensive salvage and was barely able to acquire the medication. When he was short he had to go to the local loan shark and barrow the money. He quickly racked up a small debt which could take years to work off.
It was to try and buy out this debt that he went on a hunt. He used that sense deep inside that pointed him in the direction he needed. He came upon the wreck several days later. The ship still smoldered and the burns on the side did not look like it came from a lightning strike. What he was looking for was inside. He could feel it in his bones.
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Good start!
1. It's clear you're going for a "destined to be among the stars" theme for Garrett. Which is great. I do wonder what his immediate motives are that bring him into the adventure? It seems you're saying his mother is still alive but sick and he's hunting for salvage to afford medication...and so he wanders upon the wreck (maybe of SKYLARK?)...and then somehow gets involved? I think that's a good start, but we can strengthen that. This might be a place to lean on Garrett's emotional weakness of Recklessness. Maybe in his overeagerness to explore space he somehow disrupted SKYLARK's flight path or painted a target on the starship she was on...
2. No mention of connection to other PCs yet. There were some ideas I posted earlier you might find inspiration from. I do think there's definitely an opportunity for a connection with Kospirian ( [MENTION=14655]Green Karl[/MENTION] ) who has been kicking around the hyperspace lanes that apparently Garrett has been hauling freight along...
3. Zithrom's Syndrome. I don't know anything about it beyond what I found in Wookieepedia. Was there something specific you were thinking of here?
4. Having grown up on Kabal in a tough way, it sounds like Garrett's Debt Obligation would be to a local "protection racket" like the Houk Barcad...with their long shark-like smirks they claim they're here to help with his family's medical expenses...but really they're hoping to tighten the noose and force Garrett fly smuggled cargo for them. This might be something to explore with [MENTION=6801311]KahlessNestor[/MENTION] as Arsinoë could be working for (aka forced to work for) the Houk Barcad at a cantina.
5. What is Garrett's attitude toward the Resistance? Does he share the characteristic neutrality toward galactic conflict like other Kabalians? Does he have a negative opinion of the Empire for bombing Shoribus (the planetary capital) in retaliation for Kabal hosting the Conference of Uncommitted Worlds? Does he have a negative opinion of the New Republic for their crippling the lucrative spice/slave trade running through Kabal?
6. What were the circumstances of Garrett's uncle's death? That's something that you could leverage to connect Garrett to the adventure or other PCs depending on what you choose. For example, totally wild idea... What if Garrett's uncle used hauling freight as a cover and actually was Sarn Doree, the smuggler who owned Rex ( [MENTION=6788545]xynthoros[/MENTION] ) and was killed by the First Order?
7. With Garret, did he have a Force awakening? Or have his unusual senses always just been part of him? Is there family history of Force-use or is he the first known? Does he even use language like "the Force" or is it just a gut feeling that nobody yet realizes its significance?
8. Do you already have a trajectory for Garrett's character development/arc in mind? Do you want his family to play a role, or are you conceiving of him as an orphan type? Or is that something you entirely want to discover during play?
9. How might you see his obsession with space playing out in an inconvenient way for the party? Obviously, it's a great roleplaying aspect of Garrett's character, but an Obligation is supposed to introduce complications. Would Obsession: Space be the kind of thing where you'd want me as GM to drop tempting-but-risky situations/technology/exploration options that you could pursue (or begrudgingly resist)?
10. As a Pathfinder, the way you describe Garrett sounds like he's just itching to get off-world and explore. Our first adventure is probably going to take place on Kabal for a bit, so that gives you an opportunity to show off Garrett's knowledge of his homeworld. Definitely read what I posted in the OP on Kabal. I also will lean on your Xenology, and probably just let many of your local knowledge checks be auto-successes. I wonder, though, what areas of the planet Garrett might not yet have explored?
11. Lastly, Group Resource. Sounds like you all are debating between a YT-1300 Light Freighter and a Firespray System Patrol Craft? We need to figure out which PC begins with the starship. My hunch is that if Garrett had access to a starship he'd be trying to get offworld OR selling it to pay for his mother's medication. So...I'm thinking we have 3 options:
- Kospirian begins flying the starship.
- The ship is Garrett's uncle's, but has been impounded by the Houk Barcad as collateral for Garrett's debt.
- You don't begin with the starship, but over the course of the first adventure your party acquires it.
EDIT: Name for his mother? How is "Afeera"?
EDIT EDIT: Do you have a picture of Garrett?
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