ForceUser's Vietnamese Adventures Story Hour! (finis)

Session Three, Part One

DUST KICKED up angrily in protest to the clip-clop of over a dozen hooves as the sorcerer’s Hand rode south and west away from the Imperial province of Ha Noi. The mood among the adventurers ranged from pensive to bored as they reflected on the yao ren’s orders.

The Minister of State informs me that there have been problems in the Te province to the south,” he had said,”A tax collector has disappeared, and several villages have failed to pay their taxes. Journey to the city of Te Han and speak to Chief Yu, commander of the police force there. He is your point of contact and will have more information for you. Leave no later than three days hence.

There is also the matter of your salary. In his wisdom, the Emperor has decided that since you are living on his estate and eating what his servant provides you, he will no longer pay you a retainer. You are wealthy people and can provide for yourselves when you want something other than room and board. Instead, when you are in need of money for traveling expenses you may contact Gaung the Moneylender in the Market District, and he will provide you operating money. Remember, it is a privilege to serve.” The yao ren had looked smug. The group had nodded, except for Lei.

Am I now a common servant, master? You did not hire me to work for free.” Lei had challenged the sorcerer with his eyes. Phai had scowled a moment then replied, “We will speak of it in private” before exiting the dining room with a flourish. Phai had not returned, but Lei did, with a carefully neutral expression on his face. The others had said nothing.

Gaung the Moneylender had proven to be an insufferably shrewd man. Lei and Tran had informed him of their need but ended up having to justify their travel expenses, to which the gaunt merchant had jotted down notes. He had then called for a sum of one thousand taels, signed and stamped the appropriate documents, and sent them on their way with a chuckle of superiority at their backs. Tran had fumed.

While they had procured the funds for the assignment, Mai had spent time in Thang Long’s taverns and drinking halls trying to learn information about the tenor of the south. Te Han, it was widely known, was a prosperous city in the southern highlands, and she had learned much about the place she didn’t care to know – local imports (wine and rice) and exports (silk, steel, and wool). But she did pick up an interesting nugget about the region east of the Te province along the coast of southern Dai Viet. “There is rumor of a bandit leader operating along the southern coast calling himself Fierce Wind,” she had later related to the others, “It is said he rallies criminals and farmers against the throne, and that he is the reason the roads have become unsafe.” They had mulled that over before leaving.

And now they were on the road, Thang Long a week behind them and Te Han a week ahead. The party had settled into a travel routine many days past, and spent their days riding and thinking. Tran chatted in an affiable sort of way, but Woo remained sullen and Vinh and Hien detached, both lost in whatever worlds they visited in their daydreams. They had passed miles of rice paddies and yam fields, and were now crossing fiefs full of small-grain wheat and cattle. Serfs toiled the land at the behest of noble masters, and the adventurers passed few other travelers on the way south. Those they did see were as heavily armed as they were, casting wary glances and cautious nods at the group. Slowly, the land rose higher from the sea, and the air became cooler at night and less humid at day. On the second week of their journey, traffic picked up along the road, and when they saw local farmers on the road to market, they knew the city was close. Finally, they spied Te Han in the distance.

The city crouched atop a wooded hill under the shadow of an imposing mountain. The mountain – Douc Xoung – was the elbow of the impressive southern range that stretched both east and north from Te Han, marking the borders of the empire. Te Han consisted of a small walled fortress surrounded by the city proper, which was itself walled and possessing narrow streets. Beyond the outer walls, small collections of buildings – not quite proper towns – hunched near the city’s three gates. A steady, if small, stream of traffic came and went through the largest of the gates, which happened to be at the end of the road the adventurers were on. At the northern base of the hill meandered a small river running west to east.

The party entered, made accommodations at a comfortable inn called The Jealous Serpent, and promptly reported to the Central Administration Building within the Governor’s walled fortress compound in the center of the city. Within minutes, they were promptly escorted to the office of the Chief of Police.

Chief Yu was a short man in an impeccable uniform with an air of hurriedness about him. His desk was littered with documents, all neatly piled. On a stand in the corner lay a soldier’s kiem in a plain and unadorned scabbard. Beside it sat a tiny potted plant with white blossoms. When the functionary announced the party’s arrival, Chief Yu leapt from his desk and circled it to bow and welcome each person in the group. To Vinh, he looked as though he welcomed the respite from paperwork. “Hello, welcome to Te Han!” The stout policeman announced. “You are the experts from Thang Long, yes? I am pleased that you’ve finally arrived!”

“We were told that a local tax collector had gone missing, Chief. How can we help?” Vinh began diplomatically.

The Chief sighed. “Yes, the missing man is Nat Hung. He has collected the taxes on his route for many years, a loyal servant of the Emperor. As you can imagine, we are very concerned about him! He disappeared after collecting half the dues on his route!”

“Where was he last seen?” Vinh continued.

“It appears that after visiting Lo Xinh he headed into the highlands to our most distant villages of the province. There is a place up there,” he began to rummage around his desk, “a high mountain valley, called Phau Dong. Ah, here!” The Chief produced a long, rolled document, made room on his desk, and spread it out. It appeared to be a map of the province. “He went to Phau Dong valley and has not returned. We have not seen Nat Hung in six months, nor have we had contact with the residents of the valley in that time.”

“I see,” said Vinh. Woo and Tam studied the map. “Did you send another tax collector, or perhaps anyone to find Nat Hung?”

“There is more,” continued the Chief, nodding, “It gets worse. After we realized that Nat was quite late, we sent a rider along his route to look for him. Obviously, we wanted to find him, but there is also the Emperor’s money and what happened to it that we must consider.”

“Of course,” interjected Lei wryly.

“The rider we dispatched did not return either.” The policeman sighed. Mai and Hien exchanged looks. “Fearing that bandits could be troubling our province in light of what has been happening to the east, I sent a patrol of soldiers in force directly to Phau Dong to root out the criminals and discover the fates of the two missing men. Six weeks ago, a peasant from Min Cau found the patrol captain wandering the road down from the valley. He was naked, crazed, and raving about killer monkeys eating his men...”

Woo arched an eyebrow at that.
 
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Re: Session Three, Part One

ForceUser said:
"He was naked, crazed, and raving about killer monkeys eating his men...?


KILLER MONKEYS! I can't wait! Everything's better with monkeys.

And here I was just going to give you a thinly disguised bump.

Welverin

ps What's with the work and home accounts why not just use one?
 


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Welverin said:
ps What's with the work and home accounts why not just use one?

You know, when we moved to the new boards I couldn't figure out for the life of me how to use the same account from work and home. It seems that you need a single email address per account. Since I post frequently from two different computers, it appeared I needed two accounts. If you know a way I could log into a single account from both home and work, tell me! I would be a happy man :)

Warrior Poet: Thanks for the kind words!

Update tomorrow!
 

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ForceUser@Home said:


You know, when we moved to the new boards I couldn't figure out for the life of me how to use the same account from work and home. It seems that you need a single email address per account. Since I post frequently from two different computers, it appeared I needed two accounts. If you know a way I could log into a single account from both home and work, tell me! I would be a happy man :)

You only need the email account to activate your board account, once you do that as long as you know your user name and password you can log on anywhere,

Bring on the killer monkeys!
 

ForceUser -

I am blown away by this story! Not only are the setting and the characters well done, but you're writing is top-notch!

I now have three Story Hours bookmarked: PirateCat's, Sargio's, and yours.

I'm looking forward to the continuing adventures!

PE
 

Session Three, Part Two

VINH BREATHED deeply, relishing the crispness of the high mountain air. He shifted his kama-do from left hand to right and resisted the urge to lean on it only from long years of training. He glanced at Woo, whose posture spoke of impatience – the monk had never learned the finer points of diplomacy. With Hien’s assistance, Tam spoke to a fourth peasant in as many days, reconstructing the journey of the tax collector Nat Hung before he had disappeared into Phau Dong valley. It was soon plain that the man was not well liked. While by all accounts not a corrupt official, he nevertheless had demanded the Emperor’s dues with a punctuality and officiousness that had, over time, led to a general feeling of dread among the local villagers every year when he made his rounds. In short, the man had loved his job with an enthusiasm that grated on these simple folk who struggled every day to provide for their families. The best side of old Hung, the peasants joked, was his backside, because that meant you wouldn’t see him for another year.

After thanking the old villager and moving on, the party conferred. “Nat Hung was a punctual and proper Imperial servant who was infamous for the fervor with which he did his job. It appears unlikely he’d run away with the money,” said Tam as he adjusted the reins of his horse.

“It appears that way,” Vinh confirmed. “What about bandits?”

“It could be bandits,” injected Mai, “I’ve heard more stories of Fierce Wind. The locals say he has rallied many to his cause. They could be hiding in the valley.”

“I don’t think so,” replied Woo, “Doesn’t this Fierce Wind operate more to the east, near the coast? Besides, how could bandits drive that soldier insane?”

No one knew.

“So we go on, then, to the valley?” Lei asked. His big black war-horse snorted and champed at its bit.

“Yes,” replied Tam, “We don’t think there is anything more the locals can tell us.”

They purchased food from the next roadside village they encountered, confirmed the hand-drawn map Chief Yu had scribbled for them against the knowledge of the locals, and continued south and west, higher into the mountains. The air up here was cooler than in the lowland valley where Thang Long nestled, and the foliage was blazoned with the reds and oranges of autumn. Strange, colorful birds sang and darted across the sky in flocks, while a light drizzle of rain from the stone-gray clouds above announced the arrival of the rainy season. Mai huddled in her cloak away from the wet sky, which to her brought back memories of long, cold nights on the street. Woo lifted his face to the watery breeze, trying to trace the ebb and flow of his life force energy, and Hien simply sat on his horse in the rain and smiled, while the eagle Hiraki squawked in annoyance and rustled his wings. Twenty-eight hooves clomped ever upward and onward.

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Four days after leaving behind the last settlement, amid intermittent light squalls of rain, the party crested a ridge of land and through the trees spied a rolling expanse of highland jungle sandwiched between imposing mountains on three sides. The fourth side – the side the adventurers now rode up and into – was a narrow wedge of passable land hemmed in between mountains on the north and south. Far on the other side of the valley, across the tree-lined expanse, the group could see green and brown fields rising up along the slopes of the western mountain wall. They paused to take in the scene; it was quite lovely. The road they had traveled here was now no more than an unused game trail, and it dipped sharply down on the other side of the ridge, disappearing into the gloom under the jungle canopy half a mile ahead and below.

“He traveled this every year?” Tran asked, surprised. “Brave man. I wouldn’t enter that jungle alone.”

Without further conversation, Lei clucked and nudged his horse ahead. The others followed, carefully picking their way down the sodden slope. The trees stood as ancient, inviolate sentinels of nature, daring them to enter. Their gnarled branches overlapped and, in places, supported each other. In other places, they drooped low to the springy earth. Tiny animals and large insects scurried along their boughs, and colorful frogs crouched in nooks, croaking a unique counter-rhythm to the orchestra of cicadas and crickets that chimed their discordant songs. Hien peered into the Spirit World but saw nothing except a deeper gloom that left him with a vague sense of unease. Soon after entering the wood, some chose to dismount, for the trail had all but disappeared, and the low branches and encroaching ferns did little to facilitate progress. Lei drew his machete and kept the path clear as they moved further into the forest. It was slow going, and each person kept silent, as if they sensed that the trees would not welcome conversation.

Hours later, Mai saw a monkey. It sported black fur with a white bottom, and a throat of white as well. The cat-sized creature shadowed the party, silently brachiating through the trees on their right. She pointed it out to the others. “Ahh,” said Hien, “A langur. We see them in the forests of my home. They are harmless.” The party stopped to examine the monkey from afar, and it sat high above, examining them back with luminous black eyes. After a few minutes of staring at the monkey, Woo cleared his throat. “Well…”

“Right,” said Tran. And on they went. The langur followed.

As they continued on, Mai and Vinh (the two most sharp-eyed of the group) noticed more monkeys in the trees. Some were golden or brown, others black or white, both langurs and doucs*, and none appeared to be larger than a small dog. Some appeared to watch, others seemed disinterested, but they all generally followed the group, swinging high overhead, pausing only when a tasty morsel presented itself for consumption. The party now felt many little black eyes upon them.

“Huh,” said Woo as they paused again. The little animals were a bit more animated now, and their cries echoed through the hollows under the leaves. Lei looked around with a scowl, and Mai glanced upward, puzzled. Tran, sweating, radiated nervousness. Vinh scanned the foliage under the trees on either side of the tiny path. There! Something large moved between the ferns upon the ridge to the left. “I see something,” The no-sheng announced, raising his voice. “Me too,” said Mai. She drew her duan jian**, and the sharp ring of steel reverberated off the trees. And then they saw it.

Perhaps it was an ape. Or perhaps a demon, swathed in an ape’s form and mimicking an ape’s gait. It shambled out of the ferns and bamboo, shaking rainwater off its fur and snorting like a bull. The ape-demon stood eight feet tall on its knuckles, with an orange-red coat and pitch-black skin. Tiny crimson eyes sat deep within its shadowed face, and large white incisors hung limp as the creature swiveled its massive head towards the party.

It roared.

The horses screamed and bucked in fear and confusion, and the party tried desperately to get them under control. The monkeys in the trees screeched deafeningly, and the adventurers yelled, adding their small noise to the anarchy of sound. The ape-demon beat its chest in fury and strode back and forth atop the ridge, claming dominance and challenging the newcomers. Lei shouted “Dismount! Dismount!” and dove off his war-horse, hitting the mud and rolling to his feet, longspear in hand. Vinh jumped nimbly off his steed and landed in the ready position, his kama-do poised to strike. Most of the others also dismounted as they could, although Tran firmly refused to get off his horse, terrified as it was. Hien wasn’t sure who was more frightened, horse or rider. Mai slunk to the right of the road, intending to hide in the trees.

The ape charged.

It thundered down the ridge, a guttural roar echoing in its wake. Its fangs glittered, and saliva trailed behind it as its powerful forearms dug for traction in the moist earth. The creature crashed towards the closest intruder: Long Lei. Fourteen hundred pounds of raging ape descended upon the one hundred sixty pound mercenary with death in its eyes. Lei whipped his longspear around desperately, planting it in the soil at his feet. He braced his legs, whispered a prayer to his ancestors and gritted his teeth, snarling as the demon bore down upon him. Somewhere behind him, someone yelled. Then the world went black and red.

The ape crashed into Lei’s spear like a meteor from heaven. The point drove through its stomach, intestines, and right lung, finally exiting three inches right of its spine. A red explosion consumed Lei’s vision; blistering fire lanced up his arms. His legs buckled, and one knee collapsed, sinking deep into the mud as a hellish weight crushed him to the ground. His longspear bowed dangerously, so he released his grip and rolled aside, coming up on the ape-demon’s flank, already whipping his scimitar from its sheath. Warm, wet blood stung his eyes, blinding him. He felt numb all over, and was afraid the blood was his own. His ears rang, drowning him in silence. Panicking, he scrubbed his sleeve across his eyes so he could see.

The ape-demon stood before him, huffing softly and leaning on the bent shaft of his spear. Half the length of the weapon thrust out from the creature’s back, bright red and glistening in the dim light from above. A river of steaming blood ran down the ape’s spine, spurting out from the wound like a font. It groaned raggedly as it pawed at the spear, and blood mixed with the spittle foaming at its lips. The light in the creature’s eyes was now dull, and it cast its gaze around in confusion and anguish. To Lei, it no longer looked like a demon, but disturbingly like a person.

And then Vinh’s polearm flashed, severing the ape’s head from its shoulders. The body stiffened and jerked, finally collapsing in the loam beside the road, kicking reflexively. Sticky, drying blood coated everything within a few feet of the corpse – including Lei. Distantly, he realized that the tiny monkeys in the trees were in an uproar, and seemed to be all around the party. Some of them had left the trees and strode angrily back and forth across the earth, as though mimicking their fallen champion. Lei staggered distractedly to the ape’s corpse and struggled to pull his spear from the body before it stuck forever. He heard the others shouting, but over the ringing in his ears he couldn’t discern their words.

Finally, he wrested his spear out and stood up to examine himself. His entire form was splashed in drying ape blood. The tang of iron stank in his nose and mouth. Almost comically, he dug for a small rag that he could wipe the blood on. Woo smacked him with his bang*** and shouted.

“—hey—e com--ng! Be --eady!” said the monk.

What? thought Lei.

He looked up, and a horde of small furry forms leapt at them from the trees.




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*A douc is a small arboreal monkey native to southeast Asia. It's pronounced "duke."
** A duan jian is a Chinese short sword.
***A bang is a Chinese quarterstaff, often made of bamboo.
 
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The ape crashed into Lei’s spear like a meteor from heaven. The point drove through its stomach, intestines, and right lung, finally exiting three inches right of its spine. A red explosion consumed Lei’s vision; blistering fire lanced up his arms. His legs buckled, and one knee collapsed, sinking deep into the mud as a hellish weight crushed him to the ground

Great writing, and not only that part.

That had to be a critical hit with a readied longspear, wasn´t it?
 

It was a readied spear but not a critical. Lei rolled max damage so it was almost as good...

I definitely wasn't looking forward to fighting that ape up close :D
 

I just finished reading your story hour, and I must say that it is brilliant...

Everything is so detailed! It amazes me how much I can visualize from your writing...

I see a natural green painted everywhere, from the bamboo, to the jungles, even in the cities... You have truly left the impression of an ancient, untainted, wild land...

This is great... Keep writing for the sake of me and all the other lurkers who share my point of view...
 

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