Yay, a completed character... more or less. A few quibbles and some answers, but otherwise good:
- The earth 'strength' thing doesn't fit in especially well with the setting. I'm a little out of it at the moment so I'm not entirely sure how to suggest you re-word it, I'll give it some thought.
- I assume the earth alchemy thing is in addition to your standard alchemy, Ie, 5 ranks of normal, plus three stacking ranks of earth specialization?
- I'm a little touchy on blasts in M&M (They tend to absolutely destroy mooks and wreck significant areas due to the scaling.) Give me a little to think on what, if anything I want to do to the areas.
- Luck I have no specific limits on. I'd prefer not to see entirely luck based characters, but that is more of a personal preference than any real banning. What you have is fine.
- Millitary ranks are as follows: Major/State Alchemist, Lieutenant Colonel, Colonel, at one point per rank. There are additional ranks both above and below, but the higher ranks are limited (For now) and the I assume anyone being sent on this mission is either a talented civilian or someone of a decent rank.
Other than that, I like'em.
- The earth 'strength' thing doesn't fit in especially well with the setting. I'm a little out of it at the moment so I'm not entirely sure how to suggest you re-word it, I'll give it some thought.
- I assume the earth alchemy thing is in addition to your standard alchemy, Ie, 5 ranks of normal, plus three stacking ranks of earth specialization?
- I'm a little touchy on blasts in M&M (They tend to absolutely destroy mooks and wreck significant areas due to the scaling.) Give me a little to think on what, if anything I want to do to the areas.
- Luck I have no specific limits on. I'd prefer not to see entirely luck based characters, but that is more of a personal preference than any real banning. What you have is fine.
- Millitary ranks are as follows: Major/State Alchemist, Lieutenant Colonel, Colonel, at one point per rank. There are additional ranks both above and below, but the higher ranks are limited (For now) and the I assume anyone being sent on this mission is either a talented civilian or someone of a decent rank.
Other than that, I like'em.